Ren✧ Posted January 14, 2011 Report Share Posted January 14, 2011 [center][i]January 13, 2011 (10:30 PM)[/i][/center][center][i]Let me start off by saying that if my friends found out I was writing this I my street cred would plummet and if you lived where I do that is a very bad thing. My name is Hirenzo, but everyone calls me Hiro. So you're thinking 'What the heck is the guy writing this for if it could trash his reputation?' I am writing it because if I don't and someone gets dragged into this mess they won't have anything to help them. I was once a normal kid with normal everyday things. I went to school, I ate junk food, I rode my bike, I flirted with girls you know things every 12 year old does. Well, now I am 15 and guess what I do now. I go to fighting school(because if I don't I will die), I eat whatever I can find, I ride...well I have rode a lot of things(motorcycles, horses, and demonic beasts), and now I don't flirt with girls I flirt with danger. I am a Street Fighter. Someone is coming. I will write later.[/i][/center][center][i][img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/1945/streetfighterhirenzo.jpg[/img][/i][/center][center][b][spoiler='Lore'][/b][/center][center][b]If this card destroys a monster on your opponent's side of the field increase its level by 1 and its ATK points by 300. If this card would be destroyed you can send cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard equal to the level of this card and return this card's level and ATK points back to their original to keep this card on the field.[/b][/center][center][b][/spoiler][/b][/center][center][i]January 14, 2011(10:46 PM)[/i][/center][center][i]Alright well where was I? Oh yeah flirting with danger. Okay well I guess I should start at the beginning. I was 12 years old and I was out for a bike ride after I had gotten off the bus. I did this every school day. It helped me clear my mind and just feel free. As I neared a turn A black van suddenly pulled out in front of me and I had to swerve to avoid it. After I caught my breath from the near accident I looked around and saw that I was lost. I had swerved onto a road I had never been on before. I looked back but behind there was a brick wall. 'This is not happening.' I said out loud as I felt the wall...it was solid. I had no choice but no ride forward. It started to get dark...fast. It had been 3:30 when I had gone on the bike ride something was wrong. I stopped and soon wish I hadn't, everywhere I looked I saw a shadow move. I thought my nerves were getting the better of me but I was wrong. There really was things hiding in the shadows...horrible things. I found this out when I turned down a dark alley and came face to face with the most horrifying thing I had ever seen...a Skull Demon.[/i][/center][center][i][img]http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/6931/skulldemon.jpg[/img][/i][/center][center][b][spoiler='Lore'][/b][/center][center][b]Each time a card is destroyed by battle you can remove it from play. If your opponent has no monsters on their side of the field this card can attack a Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field. It is counted as having 1000 ATK and DEF points. If it is face-up it is counted as being in face-up Attack Position. If it is face-down it is counted as being in Defense Positon. If this card attacks a Spell or Trap Card your opponent cannot activate the attack target and its effect is negated if it is face-up.[/b][/center][center][b][/spoiler][/b][/center][center][i]It reached out its hand and tried to make a grab at me but I quickly threw my bike aside and started to back out of the alley keeping my eyes on the demon. The demon followed me out of the alley. It seemed to know that I was no threat to him and that as long as he pursued me he would get me. Just as I thought all was lost there was a flick of movement behind the demon and the next thing I know there is a sword of black metal protruding through the demons head. The demon turned to dust and standing there with a sword was a girl...and a hot one if I might add. It was Teleka. She too is a street fighter but not only that she is my tutor, my guardian, she cannot die of age of sickness, oh and she is like 4,000 years old(there goes my dating options).[/i][/center][center][i][img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/8203/immortalstreetfighterte.jpg[/img][/i][/center][center][b][spoiler='Lore'][/b][/center][center][b]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except if a monster you control is selected as an attack target and it would be destroyed. When this card is Summoned the attack target is switched to this card. This card is unaffected by the effects of Effect Monsters, Spells, and Traps. This card gains 100 ATK points for each "Street Fighter" monster you have on your side of the field.[/b][/center][center][b][/spoiler][/b][/center][center][i]Teleka took me in and cared for me. She taught me how to fight and helped me through the rough three years that I spent getting over my family. I am now 15 and have faced many challenges, killed many demons, saved many lives, but I am still in grave danger. More tomorrow I have to get some shut eye.[/i][/center][center][i]January 16, 2011(9:34 PM)[/i][/center][center][i]Sorry about not writing for awhile but I have been a little preoccupied with my new mission, but before I tell you about that I think I should explain more about where I live. I guess you could say it is kind of like New York. You know if New York had a bunch of ruined buildings, with rats everywhere(oh wait there really is rats in New York), oh and of course there is the constant fear of demons and phantoms. Anyway like I said it is like a run down New York. There are nearly no people here but us street fighters and a few others. Everyone hear lives in fear of the demons. A lot of them are harmless, like the imps, but every once and awhile you will run across a really powerful demon. The sun only comes out for about 5 hours a day and the rest of the time it is pitch black. I will write later.[/i][/center][center][i][img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/9666/cityofthedemons.jpg[/img][/i][/center][center][b][spoiler='Lore'][/b][/center][center][b]As long as this card is face-up on your side of the field all "Demon" monsters in your hand's level is reduced by 2. As long as this card is on the field all "Demon" monsters gain2 levels as long as they are on the field. If you have a "Street Fighter" monster on your side of the field each time you take damage from a Direct Attack you can Special Summon 1 "Demon" monster from your Deck with ATK points equal to or less than the amount of damage you took.[/b][/center][center][b][/spoiler][/b] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted January 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2011 0 views 0 replies maybe posting at midnight is a bad idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted January 14, 2011 Report Share Posted January 14, 2011 A Street Fighter Set? Well, this idea never ever crossed my mind lol. I like the effect on the first one, the card toss effect would make it useful for Lightsworns ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted January 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2011 Yeah I didn't think of that but you are right. Thanks for the commented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted January 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2011 Cannot update until tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 New card added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 Hey, kinda like "A Legenady Ocean" for DARK monsters, nice =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 Yeah thanks. the next demon monster will have an effect that deals with its level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 Okay I am sorry but I have no motivation for this set so it is canceled sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 The Lores wont open For me D: Might as well read the cards xD. Street Fighter Herenzo: Nice card, Good Pic, Some OCG and Grammar errors. OCG/Grammar Fix: If this card destroy's a monster on your opponents side of the field, This card Gains 300 ATK and 1 level. If this card were to be destroyed, you can instead discard cards from the top of your deck equal to the level of this card and return this cards ATK and Level back to there base ATK and level. (Was a big confusion towards the end so i gave it what i thought you meant...) Single Rating: 8/10 Skull Demon: First off the pic is great and matches the name perfectly, oddly i dislike it but that will not lower my rate ^^ Amazingly Unique effect IMO just a small grammar/OCG (IDK) error: When you said 'it is counted as' i think it would be 'It is treated as a monster having 1000 ATK and DEF...' Single Rating: 10/10 Amazing Job Immortal Street Fighter - Teleka: First off Pic matches name xD and is a HQ pic so thats good, OCG looks fine except When saying "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set." Set is not capitalized. It is almost Op'd but not to much so so it is well-ish balanced IMO. Oh and instead of "This card is Uninfected by the effects of Effect Monsters, Spells. and Traps (Tongue Twister O.o) I think "This card is uninfected by card effects" Works far better and is far less of a tongue twister =P Single Rating: 9/10 City of the Demons: Usually i don't start with OCG but O.o The grammar and OCG in the first sentence and throughout is so distorted it gave me a headache D: . The lore's won't open for me (check the coding) so i am sorry i wont do a OCG fix for it :[. It was hard but i see where you are going with this, but it is a little on the Op'd side considering the effects without any drawback.. Single Rating: 6/10 Overall: It is a nice set and i see where your going effect wise, the story gave it a nice flare.t Overall Rating: 8.25/10 Just Fix City of demons and the rating would be 9/10 at least xD EDIT: You cancelled it right before My post... :[ You made me type this D: xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 I am sorry but I decided to discontinue this set. Sorry but thanks for the rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 Haha its ok had nothing to do anyways Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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