im nw to this site so can sum1 give me their opnions on this card plz?

[DarkKnightFlare]

tell me what you all think of this card and give me ur opnions on it like what i can change and everything lse thx^^[attachment=30922:createcarddarkpharoah.jpg]

[Shadow the Hedgehog fan#1]

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[JG.]

If you want to stay here for more than 3 days and not get flamed out, read the rules, and use proper grammar so people actually understand what you're saying.

[thanonyx]

O.K., since you're new I'll cut you some slack. Take a real good look at a real Yu-Gi-Oh! card before you make one of your own. Look at the format and wording to get an idea of what to put in the text box.

[Supreme Gamesmaster]

Not bad, not bad! You might want to push it a little farther so people know you're trolling, but "nw" pretty much sealed the deal. (I wanna see someone type "nww" for "new" now...) The title was also well done.

[DarkKnightFlare]

[quote name='Supreme Gamesmaster' timestamp='1295203365' post='4938718']
Not bad, not bad! You might want to push it a little farther so people know you're trolling, but "nw" pretty much sealed the deal. (I wanna see someone type "nww" for "new" now...) The title was also well done.
[/quote]
lol no i meant to say new but my key was sticky srry about that

[quote name='JG.' timestamp='1295200272' post='4938587']
If you want to stay here for more than 3 days and not get flamed out, read the rules, and use proper grammar so people actually understand what you're saying.
[/quote]

dude seriously my keys sticked that was all im srry but my grammar is just fine

[quote name='DarkKnightFlare' timestamp='1295199393' post='4938548']
tell me what you all think of this card and give me ur opnions on it like what i can change and everything lse thx^^[attachment=30922:createcarddarkpharoah.jpg]
[/quote]

ive gotten alot of replies on this telling me the name needs to b shorter, but everything else is good its not overpowered if u disagree just tell me why thx^^

[John A. Zoidberg]

[quote name='DarkKnightFlare' timestamp='1295281689' post='4940737']
[u]lol no i meant to say new but my key was sticky srry about that[/u]



[b]dude seriously my keys sticked that was all im srry but my grammar is just fine[/b]



[i]ive gotten alot of replies on this telling me the name needs to b shorter, but everything else is good its not overpowered if u disagree just tell me why thx^^[/i]
[/quote]

Look at the bolded words. Then look at the underlined. Then look at the italicized. Then look the the giant words.

[size="7"]XD NO.[/size]

[DarkKnightFlare]

[quote name='Dr. Rockso' timestamp='1295282078' post='4940749']
Look at the bolded words. Then look at the underlined. Then look at the italicized. Then look the the giant words.

[size="7"]XD NO.[/size]
[/quote]

and i actually thought there were some people with respect, but i guess you dont have any.

[TheLegenderyKingVildeChaya]

if its a monster then why is the name what it is

[Supreme Gamesmaster]

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No, seriously, are you trolling or not? If you are, stop now. It's not funny anymore; it's getting to the point of brain hurting.

If you're not, we expect more effort here. Post it on the YCM Wikia (that I have the dubious honour of being the creator and administrator of) if you don't want to put in the effort required to have good spelling and grammar on a finished product. Oh, and the card sucks, is simultaneously overpowered and useless, has crazy ruling issues, has a terrible picture, and is overall heinous -- hence why I thought you were trolling and being bad on purpose.