Lord Doransk Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Another finalised version of the same card! i've taken into account your comments and changed (hopefully!) for the better. Here it is... [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/3614/317513e.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play two Level-6 or higher monsters from your Graveyard. Each time a card is sent to the Graveyard, based on its type activate the proper effect (each effect can only be activated once per turn): - MONSTER: Increase this cards ATK and DEF by an amount equal to half the ATK and DEF of the sent monster. -SPELL: Return a Spell Card from your Graveyard to the top of your Deck. -TRAP: Destroy one card on your opponents side of the field and remove it from play. feel free to comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Doransk Posted January 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 bumpity bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 [s]Every[/s] time a card... [b]Each [/b]time a card... other than the above i think this is pretty straight forward i liek the effect but the pic... ...not so much my overall rating is a 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Doransk Posted January 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 ok- time for a few changes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Doransk Posted January 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 bump- come on, guys, i need a few comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Doransk Posted January 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 sigh... bump... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organized Chaos Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Intruiging...... I like it. its a bit Oped with the ATK gaining thing I think it should be changed to halfof the sent monsters ATK as it could easily be abused by Lightsworns. The pics fine and the other effects are good. 9/10 very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 The effects are kinda OP. monster: make it half or less spell: make it one trap: this seems OP even with only 1... rfp from the graveyard or something like that would be more balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Doransk Posted January 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 and another 'bump' for finishing the card- at last! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 This makes the card effects more balanced. As to rate the rest of the card, the pic, and name are pretty good. The OCG seems to be good. I can't find a mistake, but I'm not an OCG expert. The effect is pretty original and has been brought down to an acceptable power level. Overall 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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