kh3rlz Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 well. this is the first card I have ever made... kinda. lol. I just wanted too post it and see how it is. please rate and tell me what I did wrong [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/9531/116214.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 Slight OCG fix While this card is in face up attack position[b], [/b]your [b]opponent [/b]cannot [b]select another Fiend Type monster, [/b]on your side of the field as an attack target. [b]W[/b]hen you opponent [b]chooses this monsters as an attack target[/b], flip a coin[b]. I[/b]f you call it right, negate the attack, and send this card too the owners hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kh3rlz Posted January 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 thank you what would you rate it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 i dont see any errors... seems fairly balanced... heck ill give it an 8/10 for it being ur first card =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kh3rlz Posted January 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 OCG was already fixed, but dtwrules, there's one "-" missing in Fiend-Type. Well, it is balanced to me. So as this is your first card, I give you ... ... 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruby_Mansi Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 Good one. Very creative, balanced, protects other Fiends and can negate attacks kinda easily. For your first card, this deserves a 8,5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 8.5 out of 10. BTW, does your computer have a shift key? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninjaex100 Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 nice card. I give it a poppin 9/10. good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kh3rlz Posted January 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 @Sanphred it does ^///^ I just really don't know where too put the capitol letters... and I always suck at cappitolizing stuff :/ sowwie. I will try better next time! I just wrote this idea in a notebook one day and was really excited too show everyone the idea lol. and thank you everyone for the high ratings I really feel like I can do this now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeruel85 Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Good job on your first card! As others said, slight OCG fixes. And the white background of the pic sort of takes away from the card, so try to avoid white backgrounds if possible. I would rate it...8.8/10 [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IKILLBABIES Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 0/10 Your card REALLY could use some work. Like maybe making it a bit better by adding 4000 attack or something. You know. Make it usable, not terrible. Just brainstorming here, but wouldn't it also be better if you had a win clause in it? Or maybe a really good effect, like each monster your opponent summons must go through the "7 Trials of Trogdor" to be summoned. I don't know, I'm just spitting the flow here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organized Chaos Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Wow this card is good for your first.balanced,the OCG had a few mistakes but still very good. I like Fiend support and this card does it fine. My only problem is the pic but heres 2 really good sites for pics http://s825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ and http://www.deviantart.com/ . For your first card this is good , 9/10 and a rep cause im feeling generous . I hope to see more of your great ideas come to fruition and bloom itself into the forums Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 [quote name='IKILLBABIES' timestamp='1295691621' post='4950569'] 0/10 Your card REALLY could use some work. Like maybe making it a bit better by adding 4000 attack or something. You know. Make it usable, not terrible. Just brainstorming here, but wouldn't it also be better if you had a win clause in it? Or maybe a really good effect, like each monster your opponent summons must go through the "7 Trials of Trogdor" to be summoned. I don't know, I'm just spitting the flow here. [/quote] you do understand that cards have to be balanced not overpowered... [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/mellow.gif[/img] and this makes no sense... what the heck are the "7 trials of trogdor"? this card deserves alot more than a 0/10... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 For your first card, this is impressive. The effect is balanced and usable but not so much that it can be abused. Others have corrected the OCG so I won't tell you fixes for that. My only problem is the cards art. A picture with a white background makes the card seem unfinished and lets a, otherwise, great card down. 8.5/10 because of the art. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 [quote name='kh3rlz' timestamp='1295655366' post='4949587'] @Sanphred it does ^///^ I just really don't know where too put the capitol letters... and I always suck at cappitolizing stuff :/ sowwie. I will try better next time! I just wrote this idea in a notebook one day and was really excited too show everyone the idea lol. and thank you everyone for the high ratings I really feel like I can do this now. [/quote] The capitals go at the beginning of sentences, words in names, they capitalize the first letter in types, as in Fiend, otherwise, you're good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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