Shadow Artist Posted January 24, 2011 Report Share Posted January 24, 2011 This is my very first card, i made the image to of course (Edit)- This is the edited version [IMG]http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/2904/wingsofpurity2.jpg[/IMG] Now when it says "This card can only be destroyed as a result of battle" i meant when the monster it is equipped to is destroyed by another monster in Battle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Artist Posted January 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Bump ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Artist Posted January 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 It would be great if i got some feedback =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzoku Kira- Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 Wow very powerful card here. If you attach this to a monster with 3000 attack you can pretty much win the duel. Really OP'd that all i can say maybe lower the points given to like the 300 to 700 range not 2.5k. Lower that i give 9/10 with that power 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Artist Posted January 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 [quote name='IPhalanx' timestamp='1296186614' post='4967290'] Wow very powerful card here. If you attach this to a monster with 3000 attack you can pretty much win the duel. Really OP'd that all i can say maybe lower the points given to like the 300 to 700 range not 2.5k. Lower that i give 9/10 with that power 5/10 [/quote] ok, thx, ill lower it to about 1000 since it was supposed to be like a powerful axe of despair type thing, but for certain atributed monsters xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 Yeah. The Equip cards that increases the most are Ritual Weapon and Fusion Weapon. Very situational cards. This one's very overpowered. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeruel85 Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 This card seems almost like Buster Rancher, except OP'd. See, Buster Rancher increases ATK by 2500, but can only be equipped to monsters with less than 1000 ATK. So, maybe change it to something like: "This card can only be equipped to a LIGHT or DARK monster with less than 1500 ATK. Increase the ATK of the selected monster by 1500. If the equipped monster is destroyed, destroy this card. If this card is destroyed or removed from the game, destroy the equipped monster." How's that? Ok since this is your first, and you made the image, AND i'm feeling generous today (snow day ftw!), i'll say 6.5/10. But if you change it slightly, like other people have mentioned, then it's 9.5/10! [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 [quote]If the equipped monster is destroyed, destroy this card.[/quote] You don't need to write that, because that's what basically happens to an equip card when a monster is destroyed, unless stated otherwise. I think ifyou make this 1000 ATK and it's fine. 5/10 for the horrible OP, otherwise it would be 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Artist Posted January 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 [quote name='Skythief' timestamp='1296230073' post='4967932'] You don't need to write that, because that's what basically happens to an equip card when a monster is destroyed, unless stated otherwise. I think ifyou make this 1000 ATK and it's fine. 5/10 for the horrible OP, otherwise it would be 9/10 [/quote] ya, i just changed it, took a while becuase i need internet access xD and when i said that i meant ONLY when the monster is destroyed in Battle by another monster attacking xD so the card wont be affected if the monster is destroyed by some trap or magic card[quote name='Zeruel85' timestamp='1296229363' post='4967918'] This card seems almost like Buster Rancher, except OP'd. See, Buster Rancher increases ATK by 2500, but can only be equipped to monsters with less than 1000 ATK. So, maybe change it to something like: "This card can only be equipped to a LIGHT or DARK monster with less than 1500 ATK. Increase the ATK of the selected monster by 1500. If the equipped monster is destroyed, destroy this card. If this card is destroyed or removed from the game, destroy the equipped monster." How's that? Ok since this is your first, and you made the image, AND i'm feeling generous today (snow day ftw!), i'll say 6.5/10. But if you change it slightly, like other people have mentioned, then it's 9.5/10! [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif[/img] [/quote] lol, thx for the feed back, ya, i edited it so... =P im ready for the 9.5/10 xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 I'm sorry, I'm gonna give 8/10 instead of 9/10 because of OCG. I'm not an expert myself but I'll try to correct it as good as I can. [s]You must[/s][b]P[/b]ay 800[b] L[/b]ife[b] P[/b]oints to activate this card. Equip this [b]card[/b] to [b]a[/b] [b]LIGHT[/b] or [b]DARK[/b] [s]type[/s] monster [s]on the field[/s] to increase its ATK [s]points[/s] by 1000. This card can only be destroyed if [s]the monster equipped with Wings of Purity[/s] [b]the equipped monster[/b] is destroyed [s]as a result of battle[/s] [b]by battle[/b]. If the equipped monster is[b] removed from the field except by battle, return this card to the Deck.[/b] That should do it, I hope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leezar56 Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 its a good card but really hard to face i would make it to play it half your life points (not sure about OCG) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman†Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Nice job, i really like it. It is a little OP'ed though, I don't mind, Still a good card. I guess i'll rate it a 8.5/10. NICE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Artist Posted January 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 [quote name='leezar56' timestamp='1296318112' post='4971324'] its a good card but really hard to face i would make it to play it half your life points (not sure about OCG) [/quote] ya, i was thinking about making the user pay 1000 LP since it gave the monster 1000 ATK, kinda like a balanced "this for that" type of deal xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 I think 800 is fine, and btw, 800 or 1000 isn't a big deal anyway, in terms of life points. In terms of ATK however, it is. So make it 800 or 1000 for the price, it's not really like it matters. If you wanna nerf it, however, make it a price of 1200 or more (though I don't think this card requires nerfing) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Artist Posted January 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 [quote name='Skythief' timestamp='1296308177' post='4971011'] I'm sorry, I'm gonna give 8/10 instead of 9/10 because of OCG. I'm not an expert myself but I'll try to correct it as good as I can. [s]You must[/s][b]P[/b]ay 800[b] L[/b]ife[b] P[/b]oints to activate this card. Equip this [b]card[/b] to [b]a[/b] [b]LIGHT[/b] or [b]DARK[/b] [s]type[/s] monster [s]on the field[/s] to increase its ATK [s]points[/s] by 1000. This card can only be destroyed if [s]the monster equipped with Wings of Purity[/s] [b]the equipped monster[/b] is destroyed [s]as a result of battle[/s] [b]by battle[/b]. If the equipped monster is[b] removed from the field except by battle, return this card to the Deck.[/b] That should do it, I hope. [/quote] Haha, i didnt realize how many mistakes i made xD THX But i'm not sure if all of those corrections are needed =/ like the "as a result of battle" i used since it was on alot of cards i have used before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 I made that mistake myself too. It is actually correct OCG, but it's old. Old OCG is not as bad as wrong OCG, but is usually unwanted as well. So I thought, while I'm at it, I'll correct everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Artist Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 [quote name='Skythief' timestamp='1296329870' post='4971720'] I made that mistake myself too. It is actually correct OCG, but it's old. Old OCG is not as bad as wrong OCG, but is usually unwanted as well. So I thought, while I'm at it, I'll correct everything. [/quote] lol, well in any case, you forgot the "Then shuffle your deck" part, its VERY crucial =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 [quote name='Shadow Artist' timestamp='1296368104' post='4973195'] lol, well in any case, you forgot the "Then shuffle your deck" part, its VERY crucial =P [/quote] It's crucial, but nowadays is subintended that when you add anything to the Deck, it has to be shuffled. Take the Gladiator Beasts for example, none of them say to shuffle the deck, but it's obvious that you need to do so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 This topic contains fail. Basically this card is Axe of Despair, except even worse. First, I'll correct your card's text: "You must pay 800 Life Points to activate this card. This card can only be equipped to a LIGHT or DARK monster. The equipped monster gains 1000 ATK. [b]<I have no idea what you're trying to say with the not being destroyed by battle and so on>[/b] If the equipped monster is destroyed by a card effect this card is returned to the Deck." I have no advice. I have no idea how to make this an interesting card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 I think it's way OP, but it seems fine for a first card. I wouldn't mind if you lowered the increase to stats a bit. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Artist Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 [quote name='Sanphred' timestamp='1296417103' post='4974490'] I think it's way OP, but it seems fine for a first card. I wouldn't mind if you lowered the increase to stats a bit. 7.5/10 [/quote] are you refering to the first or second card? because if you look at the second card, its the edited version... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 You should get rid of the first one then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Artist Posted February 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 [quote name='Sanphred' timestamp='1296508344' post='4977205'] You should get rid of the first one then [/quote] sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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