The Twisted Dimension - GhostSwirlBlackDarkness

[Anti-Apocryphal]

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[i]Activate this card when your opponent declares an attack. Negate the attack and switch control of that monster. Increase that monster's ATK by 1000. Each time that monster attacks, put 1 "Ghost" Counter on this card (max. 3). Each time you put a "Ghost" Counter on this card, your opponent can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from their Graveyard. When there are 3 "Ghost" Counters on this card, destroy all Level 3 or lower monsters your opponent controls. Your opponent then takes damage equal to the total ATK of all Level 3 or lower monsters destroyed in this way. Then destroy this card.[/i][/center]

[Arctic_Circle34]

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[i]Activate this card when your opponent declares an attack. Negate the attack and switch control of that monster. Increase that monster's ATK by 1000. Each time that monster attacks, put 1 "Ghost" Counter on this card (max. 3). Each time you put a "Ghost" Counter on this card, your opponent can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from their Graveyard. When there are 3 "Ghost" Counters on this card, destroy all Level 3 or lower monsters your opponent controls. Your opponent then takes damage equal to the total ATK of all Level 3 or lower monsters destroyed in this way. Then destroy this card.[/i][/center]
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It's OP'd. While taking control of your opponent's monster isn't that OP'd, giving it a 1000 point bonus and destruction capability certainly is. Also, you can't destroy this card afterwards, for it is already in the Graveyard. Not a fan of the name either, you might want to shorten it.

4.5/10

[Archelaus]

Remove the 1000 ATK gain + put a restriction on the controlled monster and your good to go