Skythief Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 [center][img]http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2307/163811u.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned. You can only Tribute Warrior or Spellcaster-Type monsters to Tribute Summon this card. If one or more cards you control would be destroyed, you can place 1 Injury Counter on this card instead (max. 3) and change this card into Defence Position. This cards ATK is descreased by 900 for every Injury Counter. If there are 3 Injury Counters on this card, this card is destroyed. If this card is sent to the Graveyard except by its own effect, return it to the bottom of your Deck instead. [i]Thinking about making her so she needs 3 tributes, maybe she's a little bit OP for 2?[/i] [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/8852/163811y.jpg[/img] Lore: This card can only be activated if "Battleproven Heroine" is in your Graveyard. Remove from play 1 Level 5 or lower Warrior or Spellcaster-Type monster from your hand or Deck. It is Special Summoned during your next Standby Phase. [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/3158/163811c.jpg[/img] Lore: This cards ATK and DEF are increased by 800 if "Battleproven Heroine" is in your Graveyard. If this card is destroyed by battle while "Battleproven Heroine" is in your Graveyard, destroy the monster that destroyed this card. [img]http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/9360/163811.jpg[/img] Not like Warriors lack vanillas. Honestly I have no idea why I added this, but I made it so why not upload it. [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/8748/163811j.jpg[/img] Lore: Remove from play 1 "Battleproven Heroine" from your Graveyard to draw 1 card, then destroy all "Mourning Wanderer"(s) and "Remembering Knight"(s) you control to destroy a number of cards on the field equal to the number of monsters destroyed that way. Inflict 300 damage to your opponent for every card destroyed by this cards effect. hate/rate/comment please, thank you[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Nu-13 Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 Level 9 =/= 3 Tributes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted February 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 [quote name='.Kowalski' timestamp='1296909690' post='4989336'] Level 9 =/= 3 Tributes [/quote] Tyrantking10 wrote in his FAQ: [quote]Level: This is also monster unique. Level is the amount of balled, orange stars that will appear under the monster's name, and above its picture. Depending on how powerful your monster is will reflect its stars. If you have a pathetically weak monster with or without a decent effect, it's likely to be 1-3 stars. If you have a balanced monster (Balanced between ATK and DEF) with or without an effect, it's likely to be 3-4. A stronger monster however, or one with a much better effect, will result in it being 5-6. Remember that [b]5-6 Leveled monsters need 1 Tribute, 7-8 need 2 Tributes, and anything above requires 3.[/b] Make sure you analyze your card carefully in order to appropriately Level your monster.[/quote] So if you're right, this is inaccurate. I'll consult the official rules. Thank you for making me aware of this. EDIT: This is what the rulebook says: [quote]However, for monsters that are Level 5 or higher, you must Tribute at least 1 monster you control before the Normal Summon. This is called a Tribute Summon. [b]Monsters that are Level 5 or 6 require 1 Tribute and Monsters that are Level 7 or higher require 2 Tributes.[/b][/quote] So you are indeed right that Level 9 is not 3 tributes. Quick fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Nu-13 Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 Yes, all monsters above Level 7 require 2 Tributes, unless the card text states otherwise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted February 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 Indeed and I know that now, thank you again for pointing it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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†Marksman†Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Hello, who this may concern, I'm going to try to make this short, so I'm going to try to do [size="1"]Small[/size] ratings. Anyhow, Let's get to it. Battleproven Heroine: Of course, an almost predictable from the one and only sky, OCG is practically Flawless...Anyhow, Thats really good. The pictures are actually pretty related to the names and look original, as i haven't seen them before. They're effects are balanced and not OP'ed or UP'ed. So i guess that's it for this card, I rate it 9.9/10! Final Goodbye: Once again, sky shows his skills and makes another OCG free card. The picture is nice and the effect is balanced out. Not OP'ed or UP'ed Great job! 9.5/10 Mourning Wanderer: As always OCG free....Picture is actually related to the name, as it looks like a wanderer of the earth. The effect isn't really original but..Its balanced, so i gotta give you props for that. Not OP'ed or UP'ed, So good job! 8.5/10 (Boring picture..) Remembering Knight: No need to rate this... Time to Forget: This time, If i'm correct, It is totally original. It is balanced and not OP'ed or UP'ed. Great job! 10/10 [b]Overall:[/b]Eh....I'm going to have to 9.9/10 ALMOST 10/10... Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 It's neat. I could see them in a fanfic set. Nothing really soul-blowing, though. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 [quote name='Lord Smeagle' timestamp='1297010321' post='4992906'] It's neat. I could see them in a fanfic set. Nothing really soul-blowing, though. 8/10. [/quote] Thank you. I haven't made any fanfics up until now. Not sure how it works yet. [quote name='†Marksman†' timestamp='1297010060' post='4992898'] Hello, who this may concern, I'm going to try to make this short, so I'm going to try to do [size="1"]Small[/size] ratings. Anyhow, Let's get to it. Battleproven Heroine: Of course, an almost predictable from the one and only sky, OCG is practically Flawless...Anyhow, Thats really good. The pictures are actually pretty related to the names and look original, as i haven't seen them before. They're effects are balanced and not OP'ed or UP'ed. So i guess that's it for this card, I rate it 9.9/10! Final Goodbye: Once again, sky shows his skills and makes another OCG free card. The picture is nice and the effect is balanced out. Not OP'ed or UP'ed Great job! 9.5/10 Mourning Wanderer: As always OCG free....Picture is actually related to the name, as it looks like a wanderer of the earth. The effect isn't really original but..Its balanced, so i gotta give you props for that. Not OP'ed or UP'ed, So good job! 8.5/10 (Boring picture..) Remembering Knight: No need to rate this... Time to Forget: This time, If i'm correct, It is totally original. It is balanced and not OP'ed or UP'ed. Great job! 10/10 [b]Overall:[/b]Eh....I'm going to have to 9.9/10 ALMOST 10/10... Great job! [/quote] Wow so I'm already the "one and only sky" xD What an honor! As for the pictures, Battleproven Heroine is from JazinKay, the others from DeviantArt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
â™ >:Stick-Man:<â™ Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 I like the concept of the cards; how they all have something to due with "Battleproven Heroine", this proves your creative in making cards. The only thing I can see with these cards wrong, is minor OCG errors, but I still know what the effects suppose to do so it's good. Also some pictures could be better. But all look balanced out so far, the mourner card is also creative. That's what I look into the most as well, great cards & creativity. You did a pretty good job here too. 8' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 [quote name='♣Master♣' timestamp='1297011030' post='4992938'] I like the concept of the cards; how they all have something to due with "Battleproven Heroine", this proves your creative in making cards. The only thing I can see with these cards wrong, is minor OCG errors, but I still know what the effects suppose to do so it's good. Also some pictures could be better. But all look balanced out so far, the mourner card is also creative. That's what I look into the most as well, great cards & creativity. You did a pretty good job here too. 8' [/quote] Thank you, I appreciate your review, could you point out any of these OCG errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
â™ >:Stick-Man:<â™ Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Well I don't like to fix OCG errors for every card, but name one and I'll do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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