War Chess Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 As requested by my teacher, welcome to my epic trap topic. You'll meet 6 Normal Traps, you can comment, rate and enjoy, but only Essence shall approve me or not. ENJOY ! [spoiler=1 Part Trap][img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/2992/56865t.jpg[/img] Lore: Pay 1000 Life Points. Select and Special Summon 1 DARK monster with 1500 or less ATK from your Deck and Special Summon it. [spoiler=NOTES] I know Mystic Tomato will sue me for copyright issues, but that's what I could do with your deadline.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=2 Parts Trap][img]http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/8755/56865.jpg[/img] Lore: [b]Add 1 card from your hand to the bottom of your Deck and shuffle it[/b]. Both players draw 1 card and discard 1 Spell Card from their hand. [spoiler=NOTES] This may not look like a 2 Parts, but the bolded part stands for cost (at least I think so XD). Drawing and discarding are them.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=3 Parts Trap][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/8504/56865u.jpg[/img] Lore: [b]Send the top card of both players' Decks to their respective Graveyards.[/b] [color="#0000FF"]During the turn this card was activated, no cards can be Special Summoned from the Graveyard.[/color] Also, you can select 1 DARK Monster Card from your Graveyard. [color="#FF8C00"]Remove from play monsters on your Deck[/color] whose total Level equals the Level of the selected monster to [color="#FF0000"]Special Summon it[/color]. [color="#800080"]Destroy it during the End Phase[/color]. [spoiler=NOTES] Haha, gotcha (or got myself, I don't know). Bolded = cost. BLUE = 1. ORANGE = cost to 2. RED = 2. PURPLE = 3 I rofled at this so much.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Chain Avoidable Trap][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/4867/56865x.jpg[/img] Lore: Both players gain 900 Life Points. [spoiler=NOTES] All I can say is : I would neg myself for that.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=High Cost Trap][img]http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/8755/56865.jpg[/img] Lore: Pay 2000 Life Points and remove from play up to 2 Trigger Effect Monster in either player's Graveyard. Activate the effect of that monster as the effect's activation conditions have been met. [spoiler=NOTES] Completly random idea. I think its either UP or OP. Not balanced. But you must admit, you've never seen anything like it.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Hole Trap][img]http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/8755/56865.jpg[/img] Lore: Decrease the Level of 1 monster you control by 2. Select and remove from play 1 monster on the field with the same Level as your monster. [spoiler=NOTES] Its a hole, nothing else.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [color="#006400"][size="6"]IMAGE CREDIT[/size][/color] Card 1 --> Father Wolf {[url="http://s25.photobucket.com/albums/c78/wolfberserker/?start=all"]LINK[/url]} Card 2 --> Father Wolf {[url="http://s25.photobucket.com/albums/c78/wolfberserker/?start=all"]LINK[/url]} Card 3 --> Father Wolf {[url="http://s25.photobucket.com/albums/c78/wolfberserker/?start=all"]LINK[/url]} Card 4 --> .Buddha {[url="http://s757.photobucket.com/albums/xx212/VanKiller/Custom%20Card%20Images/?start=all"]LINK[/url]} Card 5 --> .Buddha {[url="http://s757.photobucket.com/albums/xx212/VanKiller/Custom%20Card%20Images/?start=all"]LINK[/url]} Card 6 --> Father Wolf {[url="http://s25.photobucket.com/albums/c78/wolfberserker/?start=all"]LINK[/url]} So, what do you say Essence, am I approved ? What's my grade ? To the public, thanks for viewing, rate and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 cool I guess... good images and OCG... I like the concepts I lol'd at snack time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 [quote name='¤ßϯ¤' timestamp='1297031918' post='4993835'] cool I guess... good images and OCG... I like the concepts I lol'd at snack time [/quote] Thanks. They're random because I had a deadline of minutes. But I was able to make them on half an hour. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Why would you have a deadline of a few minutes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted February 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 [quote name='¤ßϯ¤' timestamp='1297033016' post='4993874'] Why would you have a deadline of a few minutes? [/quote] Don't question her methods. Also, don't post unless you have constructive criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted February 7, 2011 Report Share Posted February 7, 2011 Your 1 part is fine. But wow... Mystic Tomato's gonna sue you all the way to the ice barrier. Your 2 part is fine. Reminds me of darkworld deal. Your 3 part has 4. The reason why is you can't really have 2 costs in a card. The bolded part can be taken as an effect. So remove it and your good to go. Your Chain Avoidable is spot on. Your high cost trap is worded wrong. OCG needs improvement, and we shall work on that in our next class as we review these cards. Your Hole trap is nice. I like the cost. [spoiler= Your Grade is...] C+ (78) Your cards pair with unoriginality really well, and this is what really dropped you down points. 3 out of your 6 cards were pretty plain and simple, but hey, I gave you a time limit so that's partly my fault. This unoriginality brought you down to a B (85). Another thing is you seemed to have added 1 additional part to your 3 part effect, so this docked you down another 2 points (83). Lastly, you lost another 5 points because of the OCG in your high cost card. Your concept was great, but execution was very poor. This totaled your final grade to be a C+ (78).[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted February 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2011 [quote name='Essence' timestamp='1297055931' post='4994656'] Your 1 part is fine. But wow... Mystic Tomato's gonna sue you all the way to the ice barrier. Your 2 part is fine. Reminds me of darkworld deal. Your 3 part has 4. The reason why is you can't really have 2 costs in a card. The bolded part can be taken as an effect. So remove it and your good to go. Your Chain Avoidable is spot on. Your high cost trap is worded wrong. OCG needs improvement, and we shall work on that in our next class as we review these cards. Your Hole trap is nice. I like the cost. [spoiler= Your Grade is...] C+ (78) Your cards pair with unoriginality really well, and this is what really dropped you down points. 3 out of your 6 cards were pretty plain and simple, but hey, I gave you a time limit so that's partly my fault. This unoriginality brought you down to a B (85). Another thing is you seemed to have added 1 additional part to your 3 part effect, so this docked you down another 2 points (83). Lastly, you lost another 5 points because of the OCG in your high cost card. Your concept was great, but execution was very poor. This totaled your final grade to be a C+ (78).[/spoiler] [/quote] I'm glad with my grade. I thought I would get a 40 or something like it XD. Well, we will sure improve them. Thanks for the lesson. BTW, I can't have the lesson until thursday given some real life issues. BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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