McBabyRape Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [u][color="#0000FF"][b]*Ignore the first Post: Pay attention to how the following users posted; this is how you DO NOT POST!*[/b][/color][/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 do you seriously want a critique on this? (no sarcasm intended, do you really want it critiqued?) some advice look at other card creations that have been done then ask yourself if you would like this critiqued and especially to the standards expected, also this belongs in "Pop-Culture" of Custom Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Alright. First off, wrong section. This should be in Pop Culture. Ninja is a fake Type. It's a Normal Monster, but it seems to have an effect. If it is supposed to have an effect, it does not contain the standard Spirit context. Everything is in capitals. ATK and DEF are uneven values. They only come in lots of 50. Unessessary zeros in the DEF. Energy cards do not exist in YuGiOh. "This" is spelt wrong. Exclamation points are never used in YuGiOh. Ever. The damaging effect does not specify [i]when[/i] it inflicts damage. No copyright name. Watermark on the image. And, of course, massively OP'd. At least the word "Ninja" is spelt properly with only one capital. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McBabyRape Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [quote name='Phoenix19' timestamp='1297507372' post='5004036'] ATK and DEF are uneven values. They only come in lots of 50. [/quote] http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=4748377 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lewk Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [quote name='McBabyRape' timestamp='1297507612' post='5004041'] http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=4748377 [/quote] Nice little animation there. Too bad RotC is over 9000 years old. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kodamλ Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 @McBabyRape Nice Phoenix Wright thing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusk_Frenzy Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 This card should be posted in Pop Culture Forum. Being a 4-star and having over 3000 ATK points is way OP'd Dont write all letters in capitals, only when it is necessary. OCG needs shaping up words like [b]This, Opponent, Your[/b] and [b]Damage[/b] are spelt wrong It needs work, and to be put into the right forum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 1) [url="http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=4748840"]Objection objected[/url] 2) Wrong section, move to Pop Culture. 3) If it has an effect, make it an effect monster. 4) There's a clear definition of what [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Spirit"]Spirit monsters[/url] are. 5) The stats are way off. Again, Pop Culture fodder. 6) You only need 3 energy cards to attack? You don't need any energy cards XD [quote]Exclamation points are never used in YuGiOh. Ever.[/quote] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/No_Entry!!"]Objection![/url] [b](no it's not an Objection animation)[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 ^All this^ this card... sucks. -999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999(continues until computer explodes)/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McBabyRape Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [quote name='Skythief' timestamp='1297514407' post='5004127'] 1) [url="http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=4748840"]Objection objected[/url] http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=4749489[/quote] [quote name='MechaSanphred' timestamp='1297525685' post='5004408'] ^All this^ this card... sucks. -999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999(continues until computer explodes)/10 [/quote] http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=4749501 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kage (Shadow) Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Y are u objecting to comments telling you how to improve and make your card better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [quote name='Skythief' timestamp='1297514407' post='5004127'] 1) [url="http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=4748840"]Objection objected[/url] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/No_Entry!!"]Objection![/url] [b](no it's not an Objection animation)[/b] [/quote] McBabyRape - Your argument is now invalid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McBabyRape Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [quote name='Kage (Shadow)' timestamp='1297534438' post='5004741'] Y are u objecting to comments telling you how to improve and make your card better? [/quote] BECAUSE THEY ARE WRONG! MONSTERS CAN STILL HAVE ATK AND DEF THAT ISN'T DIVISIBLE BY 50! [quote name='.icecube' timestamp='1297534579' post='5004747'] McBabyRape - Your argument is now invalid [/quote] My argument is never invalid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [spoiler=False!] http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=4749570 [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Hey, TC, shut up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kage (Shadow) Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [quote name='McBabyRape' timestamp='1297535046' post='5004760'] BECAUSE THEY ARE WRONG! MONSTERS CAN STILL HAVE ATK AND DEF THAT ISN'T DIVISIBLE BY 50! Yeah but not in Realistic Cards. Try Any Other Cards first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [quote name='Phoenix19' timestamp='1297507372' post='5004036'] ATK and DEF are uneven values. They only come in lots of 50. [/quote] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/2a6p4s1.jpg[/IMG] @TC, don't be a retard. Take advice people give you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monty1394 Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 so...have you even seen a yugioh card before? just wondering because this card is just retarded. although i did laugh pretty hard at how much of a moron you are for thinking you can win an internet argument XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Why is F NO, not an option in the poll? I apologize if my language is not weak enough, but that is as watered down as it can go, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [quote name='Boss Z' timestamp='1297539009' post='5004912'] Why is F NO, not an option in the poll? I apologize if my language is not weak enough, but that is as watered down as it can go, lol [/quote] Exactly.the reason noone's voting on the poll is because there are no choices worth picking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McBabyRape Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 U GUYS ARE JEALOUS HATERS GONNA HAET! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [quote]BECAUSE THEY ARE WRONG! MONSTERS CAN STILL HAVE ATK AND DEF THAT ISN'T DIVISIBLE BY 50![/quote] http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=4750442 There you go. Whoever banned him, thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rias Gremory Posted February 13, 2011 Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 Post Count before this is thread is locked. Post Count: [color="#FF0000"][size="7"]23[/size][/color] And for people that think that he didnt deserved to be banned: http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=4750848 Whoever banned him: [color="#FF00FF"][size="7"]I <3 YOU! xD[/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted February 13, 2011 Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 [quote name='White Devil Daniela' timestamp='1297561918' post='5005760'] Post Count before this is thread is locked. Post Count: [color="#FF0000"][size="7"]23[/size][/color] And for people that think that he didnt deserved to be banned: http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=4750848 Whoever banned him: [color="#FF00FF"][size="7"]I <3 YOU! xD[/size][/color] [/quote] To answer many questions, I didn't ban him, but I reported him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted February 13, 2011 Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 i love this. its like war of the objections. and i love you who ever banned this guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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