Heavy Aritllery Ogre

[Smesh]

[center]Somewhat similar to SSD.

[IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/35n9669.png[/IMG]
1 Tuner + 1 Machine-Type non-Tuner
When this card is Synchro Summoned, pick up the top 3 cards from your Deck. Destroy cards on the field equal to the amount of Machine-Type monsters you picked up. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to activate one of the following effects:
-Increase this card's ATK by 1000.
-Decrease this card's ATK by 1000. This card gains 1 additional attack until the End Phase.

I actually like this one.[/center]

[Skythief]

Now, you're not exactly making it easy to summon eh? Let's say... it's OP, but not more OP than other existing synchros, when taking its summoning conditions to notice.
I personally think it should be like:

[s]-This card gains 1 additional attack until the End Phase.[/s]
-This card can attack twice during your next Battle Phase.

Copied from Wattsquirrel, just replacing each with your next.

9/10

[BT]

sweet image... level goes with ATK/DEF and effect

nice card overall...

now OCG fix

1 Tuner + 1 [b]or more[/b] non-Tuner [b]monsters[/b]
When this card is Synchro Summoned, [b]draw[/b]/[i]look at[/i] the top 3 cards from your Deck. Destroy cards on the field equal to the amount of Machine-Type monsters you [b]drawn[/b]/[i]looked at?[/i]. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to activate [b]1[/b] of the following effects:
-Increase this card's ATK by 1000.
-This card gains/[i]can declare[/i] 1 additional attack until the End Phase/[i]this Battle Phase[/i].

I have to say, a little OPed but kinda hard to summon... well sorta kinda easy actually if you have alot of monsters on the field... like I said b4 nice cards

Rating
Original: 9.8/10
Creative: 9.6/10
Pic: 10/10
OCG: 8.8/10
Usage: 8/10
ATK/DEF/Level agreement: 9/10
Effect: 9/10
O.R. 9.17/10
GREAT CARD!

[Smesh]

Yeah, probably too powerful for generic. I was going to make it Machine-Type non-Tuner but I wanted it to be generic. I'll change it though.

Griffin's post got deleted O.o

Edited.

[-Griffin]

Meh, level 10 generic. Cydra can't make it, most synchro engines can't make it. It's a card that's going to need a mid-step in a synch chain for most Decks. That means it's already competing with Nexus and Burning Soul. Considering that last effect, it's an OTK-fueler (...like Nexus and Burning Soul) and the other two don't help it's case. Considering that in a half-decent format, Chimeratech is banned, the last thing Machines need is more support (and I don't feel they'd synch this [i]that[/i] much anyway - just the occasional thing with Fortress maybe Karakuris could pull it out). I really don't see how this benefits the game in the slightest.

EDIT: Machine-Non-tuner clause just ruled it out of a lot of those OTK Decks, but it's main use is still going to be OTKs - just now in Karakuris. Still feels bad for the game.

[BT]

ok cool.. great card though...

FIX OCG TOO!

[Smesh]

Edited again.

Don't know how I can make it more game helpful without changing something completely.

@BT: OCG's fine.

[BT]

Getting better...