Zextra Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 [center]Here's my attempt at Exceed that I posted a while ago. However, I have updated its OCG to match the current Exceed rules. Please comment and enjoy! [IMG]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/8697/hydraofexcelionexceedte.jpg[/IMG] [i][b]Lore: 2 Level 5 DARK monsters When this card is Exceed Summoned, you can remove from play up to 2 cards in your Graveyard and destroy Set Spell or Trap Cards your opponent controls up to the number of cards removed from play by this effect. Once per turn, when you draw a DARK monster, you can send it to the Graveyard and remove an Exceed Material Monster from this card to draw 2 cards. Once per turn, when this card would be destroyed by a card effect while you control no Exceed Material Monsters, it is not, and it gains one additional attack during your next Battle Phase.[/b][/i] Credit for the card background layer goes to -Dae-[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mysteryman429 Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 i really hate this new addition to the game tbh (i mean we already have synchros for one thing).. exceed will make game even more unrecognizable from original version, to me.. maybe its gna get so wierd theyll just start callin it yugimon or something but good job anyway , nice effect i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyberShark Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 cool 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Nu-13 Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 Why do everyone use numbers in names of Exceeds? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deathcore Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 [quote name='.Kowalski' timestamp='1297973937' post='5014794'] Why do everyone use numbers in names of Exceeds? [/quote] Because all of the known Exceeds have numbers in them. Cool card, I guess. Really can't say much since Exceeds aren't released yet. However, I thought Exceed Matriel Monsters was called Overlay Units? Great image and great template. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystirMeme Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 Not all Exeeds have a number in their names. Interesting monster. Seems somewhat broken but that may just be me. I will have to get this template eventually for my own Exeeds (as well as learn HOW to use said template) 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deathcore Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 [quote name='Dragon Master Zero' timestamp='1297974807' post='5014826'] [b]Not all Exeeds have a number in their names.[/b] Interesting monster. Seems somewhat broken but that may just be me. I will have to get this template eventually for my own Exeeds (as well as learn HOW to use said template) 8/10. [/quote] No. 17 Revise Dragon and No. 39 Aspiring Emperor Hope. As far as I know, that's the only confirmed Exceeds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman†Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 I can't really review the OCG or effect, as I know absolutely NOTHING about Exceed monsters. All i can rate is the picture etc...Anyhow, let's get to it. The picture is awesome if you ask me, It looks like a Hydra. So, VERY good picture. Can't rate OCG, but to me, it looks fine. Name is interesting and original to me, So that's cool. The template is [b][u]phe·nom·e·nal[/u][/b]. If you'd be so kind, Where'd you get it? So overall I gotta give you a solid 10/10. Congrats! :3 Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystirMeme Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 [quote name='Deathcore' timestamp='1297974955' post='5014833'] No. 17 Revise Dragon and No. 39 Aspiring Emperor Hope. As far as I know, that's the only confirmed Exceeds. [/quote] There is also Gurensaurus and Gachigachi Gantetsu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 The template (for GIMP) can be found on my status bar Also, they were called Overlay Units, but according to the wikia OCG, they became known as "Exceed Material Monsters". Anyways, thanks for the comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman†Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 [quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1297977701' post='5014917'] The template (for GIMP) can be found on my status bar Also, they were called Overlay Units, but according to the wikia OCG, they became known as "Exceed Material Monsters". Anyways, thanks for the comments! [/quote] Thanks for the Template! =3 Maybe I can go study Exceed monsters and use the template to make some. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 You're welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 Any more comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duelistxynam Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 [quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1297993424' post='5015483'] You're welcome [/quote] how would someone post an exceed monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 Use a template. The actual YCM Exceed function isn't here yet, so use a template to make the cards until then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 "When this card is successfully Exceed Summoned, you can remove from play a number of cards in your Graveyard equal to the number of Exceed Material Monters used for the Exceed Summon of this card to destroy a number of Set Spell or Trap cards your opponent controls equal to or less than the number of cards removed by this effect." to "When this card is Exceed Summoned, you can remove from play up to 2 [i]cards[/i] in your Graveyard [u]and[/u] destroy Set Spell or Trap Cards your opponent controls up to the number of cards removed from play by this effect." The OCG might be the slightest bit less clear, but it's gallons less superfluous wording, which is important in OCG. The underlined 'and' must be there though, because otherwise the removal is a cost so 0 monsters were always removed by the effect, resulting in nothing happening. The italic 'cards' should probably be replaced with 'monsters' because removing Spell/Trap cards is so not a notable cost that you might as well just cut the whole removing thing if they're allowed as targets. Also, wat@ "Once per turn, when this card would be destroyed by a card effect while you control no Exceed Material Monsters, it is not, and it gains one additional attack during your next Battle Phase." That will only activate if some other card clears its overlays. Seems like a really inconsistent effect considering only 1 card has been confirmed that can remove monsters from Exceeds like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 I will give it an effect to remove its Overlaid monsters, as I made this card back when Overlaid monsters were speculated to remove themselves to protect the Exceed monster. Thanks for the comment.Alright, I added an effect to let it ditch its Overlaid monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dries965 Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 OP To much good effects on 1 card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 I know it seems that way on first glance, but: • The first effect is luck based, and it only works as an Allure of Darkness kind of thing. • The second effect seems nasty, but when you think about it, it relies on your opponent. If your opponent knows the effect of this card, why would they try to destroy it with card effects in the first place? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Considering how painfully easy this is to Summon (Summoner Monk --> Any level 4 DARK, Gravekeeper's Spy --> Spy, probably other things I forgot), getting +1s from the draw like that after already getting a +2 from the Summon really does feel like this gives you too much advantage for only an investment of 1/2 cards. My fixes in my first post relating to superfluous wording and removing s/ts not being a serious cost still apply. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Thanks; I fixed the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom-Duelist Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Cool, where u get the exceed frame from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Where did you get an Exceed Monster template? Tell me, tell me now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 *sigh* Comments, anyone? @ Phantom-Duelist and thanonyx - here's my prototype Excess template: http://www.mediafire.com/?exy998mvq90h3ka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 Zex, I feel your pain. Not only is it on your profile, easy to find in the search, or just by poking around the forum, but I think you mentioned it in this thread already... Yep, post 10. My comment stands that it seems too good for something GK Spy throws out on its own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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