Azphreal Posted February 18, 2011 Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 Tell me what's wrong about it, other than its size - just the template, not particularly the OCG, but comment on that too. Original template credit goes to Touma and BT. [IMG]http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy320/kilimow/Template%20Cards/EXCE-JP001-1.png[/IMG] Excessive Defender Rank 6 EARTH Warrior / Excess / Effect 2 Level 6 Monsters When this card is sucessfully Exceed Summoned, you may Overlay 1 Warrior-Type monster in your hand on this card as an Exceed Material Monster. When a monster declares an attack, you can remove 1 of this card's Exceed Material Monsters to negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 19, 2011 Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 pretty good... you forgot the normal shining stars though... good start [s]needs some more shooting stars[/s]... and some need to be light-light blue BTW OCG check soon2 Level 6 [b]m[/b]onsters When this card is successfully Exceed Summoned, you may Overlay [b]this card over[/b] 1 Warrior-Type monster in your hand as an Exceed Material Monster. When a monster declares an attack, you can [b]destroy[/b]/[i]remove from play[/i] 1 of this card's Exceed Material Monsters to negate the attack and end the Battle Phase.Also lore box (not border) is more gray Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted February 19, 2011 Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 okay sorry but I'm not entirely sure on the guidelines for the summoning, would you mind explaining them to me? And on a totally unrelated note you mind hooking me up with that picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 19, 2011 Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 name box needs to be darker to match normal card... but the name border (like the bevel) should be brighter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 19, 2011 Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 My only suggestions are that the Effect box should be light grey-colored, not orange like an effect monster, and that you could make the "galaxy white strands" more bright and noticeable. Other than that, great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 19, 2011 Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 [quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1298082480' post='5017659'] My only suggestions are that the Effect box should be light grey-colored, not orange like an effect monster, and that you could make the "galaxy white strands" more bright and noticeable. Other than that, great work [/quote] *said already* and some need to be blue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 19, 2011 Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 [quote name='¤ßϯ¤' timestamp='1298085064' post='5017751'] *said already* and some need to be blue [/quote] You ninja'd me earlier Also, agreed on the "blue" comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 19, 2011 Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 When are people going to get that Exceeds shouldn't be above Rank 5, and very rarely above 4... It's bad, negating attacks is pretty worthless and people aren't going to want to give up Brio and Gaia for a wall or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mysteryman429 Posted February 19, 2011 Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 dont know too much bout exceeds or how to play em with a deck yet.. but the effect seems nice only thing imo could be changed is the pic... cause when i think of excessive defender... i think of a pic like total defense shogun.. which is all bout defense pretty much... with a shield and protective armor (whichs says defender to me).. but then again thats just me... its fine if u like it tho [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/2eyuf0o.png[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted February 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 @BT: Thanks. Will update in a bit. For the box, though, I don't get what you mean. If I make the inner part less noticable, then you can't see it, and then the bevel looks fugly. As for the effect fix, yeah, the 'monster' wasn't meant to be capped. Blank mind. For the second fix, that's a completely different effect. The third I disagree with; I took that part of the OCG direct from Aspiring Emporer Hope. @Zextra: Yep, he ninja'd you @.:Gold:.: You can find the info in the TCG section now. And I found the image [url=http://s1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb401/Svedde_Detskriverjagjuinte/TCIAL/]here[/url]. @-Griffin: While this wasn't mainly for OCG/Effect, I see your point. Will fix. @mysteryman429: Thanks? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 Great! I really look forward to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 [quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1298189317' post='5020252'] Great! I really look forward to it [/quote] I've done everything, but I can't find a decent similar starfield. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 This looks like a legit YGO card. 9/10, I see nothing wrong with it, I don't really care about the OCG, I only rate for the images and the creativity of the name and the effect. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 [quote name='AsterikcAde' timestamp='1298199337' post='5020448'] This looks like a legit YGO card. 9/10, I see nothing wrong with it, I don't really care about the OCG, I only rate for the images and the creativity of the name and the effect. Good job! [/quote] not to bring you down... its kinda legit... the shooting stars need to be blue and normal stars need to added and be yellow[quote name='Phoenix19' timestamp='1298189515' post='5020259'] I've done everything, but I can't find a decent similar starfield. [/quote] but I sent you like 6 Exceed monsters by PM, non were good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 They were good. But I need a larger, more HQ one. It's a bit much to scratch, otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 but that'll take forever.... just use it as a base >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 And be THAT low quality? What happened to the perfectionist I knew and... well, knew? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 no! look at it and see where you put the stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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