M.Hats Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 I'm not to sure about how good the OCG is I think it is ok but may need some work. What do people think of the effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 8/10 some ocg errors so could change a bit but good:D pic is nice just too realistic. and name is more like a spell cards name but hey still good:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentaworrio Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 7.5/10It's pretty cool ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Ingo Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 WTF ?? 1 Star and that powerful(For 1 star):PPlease change level of this monster but pretty okay :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 yeah, that was 1 of my problems =/ LV 1? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.Hats Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 I guess that does make it a bit less accessible to many decks. So here is the revised version, the effect is really what this card is about so a deck built around the 3 virus cards or discarding from the deck/hand would work with this. Still looking for a decent name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Awesome picture! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 I dont like the pictures lined effect, i think thats actually the material it was drawn / painted on tho, still tis ok ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.Hats Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Actually it was intentionally added as a holo effect. Here are some alternatives: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 I like the 2nd 1 0_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.Hats Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Or a mix of the two to make him a Secret Rare. Also are there any corrections that need to be made to the OCG or any problems people see with the effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 I think the OCG needs, work, but I don't know what to change it to...Anyways, nice card! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Im not entirly sure that i like the picture but this card aint bad, im sure you have OCG errors in there but still great effort. 7.6/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.Hats Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Well the OCG is a mix of Parasite Paraside and Sinister Serpent as well as the virus cards with some minor changes so unless someone can point out the OCG problems and some corrections I will have to assume this is fine. The only way to get perfect OCG is really to copy other effects, and as this is a bit more original a take it can't be the same text as any other cards. It is possible I have made mistakes but no one seems to be providing any corrections just telling me that they are sure it isn't right. BTW whats the verdict on the new name, I'm still struggling to think up something cooler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Nice card, and nice concept. There are OCG errors, but they are minor. 8/10. I can think of a deck to build around this card if it actually existed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
werid090 Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 umm now its just a good card but yea i cant think of a deck for it eitherso yea 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Once you correct your grammar errors, this card will be about perfect! For effort, you did a pretty good job! You have potential, but you just need more experience. I'm really looking forward in seeing you make more cards! Keep up the great work! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.Hats Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 @Werid090 : he actually said "I can think of a deck to build around this card if it actually existed." As in he could, and I would assume he is talking about a deck using the Virus cards or similar. The effect is pretty powerful as it is an immediate loss of draw as well some potential loss of draw. The main problem is the chance as you never know when they will draw the card or if they will at all before the duels over. With 3 of them however it becomes very dangerous for the opponent. Also as every time one is drawn with its effect going it can be placed back in their deck almost immediately. @ Everyone : Many of you have mentioned OCG errors but no one has actually pointed them out. This is frustrating as I don't know what to correct, if you don't point out the OCG errors and I can't find them I'm going to assume that they don't exist. So would someone PLEASE tell me what is wrong with the OCG? I'm thinking of making some more cards built around deck control so hopefully I will come up with something soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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