Super Chaos Sonic Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 It's alright Cherry, rather you see it before someone else said it in a upset tone. ^^; And alright...and I can't wait to see what'll happen in Chapter 2...^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 Awww...you're so sweet. You always know what to say/type/write. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christian Exodia Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 PM'd you too, Cherry. Cannot wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted March 11, 2011 Report Share Posted March 11, 2011 I am NOT reading the first chapter until the problem with the lettering is fixed. (obvious problem should be completely obvious.I mean, it's RIGHT FRIGGIN THERE!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iCherry Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 If you're not on the list on page 1, tell me. I need to update it. ><" [quote name='Shadow Zero' timestamp='1299869041' post='5066832'] I am NOT reading the first chapter until the problem with the lettering is fixed. (obvious problem should be completely obvious.I mean, it's RIGHT FRIGGIN THERE!) [/quote] Wanna just tell me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Eh... Cherry? Since my Avi is not the same anymore, maybe you should state where it comes from? I'm sure there is at least one other evil monkey. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 I never left a comment? Shame. That was a good fight actually, I think you had NB pegged and you handled each character's different styles well. Looking forward to chapter 2 as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 I am as well waiting for Chapter 2. Only thing that you could do better was to include some PCs in the crowd. Just mentioning them would be cool. But it was really cool anyway ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hutman50 Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 Amazing.... Epic.... Outstanding.... Those Are my Words On The First Chapter Cant Wait For The 2nd Chapter (i Sent An App To You, Could You Try To get It Seen/Added As Soon As Possible...?) Don't Worry I Didn't Godmod It....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted March 20, 2011 Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 Well it's been a while and I know it's on a lot of people's minds so I think it's fair if I ask. Where's chapter 2? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted March 20, 2011 Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 Don't worry, Aneki is working on it ^^ I asked about it last night xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iCherry Posted March 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 I need to stop being lazy. >_> Chapter 2 is up. Any Spelling/Grammar errors, point them out for me. Next one should come sooner, hopefully. tbh, I think I did worse with this one. Enjoy anyway. EDIT: The Apps I haven't replied to are all going to be accepted. If someone's wrong, I'll just adjust it in the fic myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Another amazing chapter, Cherry! I didn't see any spelling errors this time...well it might also be the fact I'm kinda tired and didn't feel like looking...XD Loved how you described the Absolute Powerforce place with all the statues. And looked at the character roster, and King as Kid?? Never thought he wanted to be Kid...XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 [quote name='~Cherry~' timestamp='1300902890' post='5091670'] tbh, I think I did worse with this one. Enjoy anyway. [/quote] Don't think that. You won't want to continue otherwise. D: My opinion of it is of course horribly biased as I appear in it but despite that, it's a good chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 Another great chapter Cherri. Personally I did like the first chapter but I do like action but... [quote name='Andx' timestamp='1300919818' post='5092281'] My opinion of it is of course horribly biased as I appear in it but despite that, it's a good chapter. [/quote] Just change some words around and all that crap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 Already said mine, about 3 posts up. I just can't wait to see what happens next...that and see if my character will make an appearance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 I can't believe I haven't posted here until Ch. 2 came out. It's quite the fan-fic, Cherry. It keeps drawing me in. I don't think I saw anything wrong grammar/spelling-wise, but I could be wrong. Looks good to me anyway :D Can't wait for more! (P.S. When is my character gonna get featured?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hutman50 Posted March 25, 2011 Report Share Posted March 25, 2011 Great 2nd Chapter, Cherry! It Was Really Enjoyable, but I Think i Saw A Few Errors (Don't Know Where Now....) But Anyways The 2nd Chapter Was As Enjoyable As The First One! Keep Up The Excellent Work! (btw..... How Dare You Sink My Battleship!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 Why do I always have to be the one to do this? When will chapter 3 be out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 [quote name='NoBeginning' timestamp='1301793025' post='5109378'] Why do I always have to be the one to do this? When will chapter 3 be out? [/quote] I pester Aneki elsewhere =o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 [center][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/244807-fen-darks-fan-fic-reviewing-and-generally-wasting-time/"]Thank you for wasting our time,[/url] [url=http://tindeck.com/listen/sxnb]Click here to listen to [b]darkmmxii_2011.04.08.Fri.16.40.19.mp3[/b][/url] [url=http://tindeck.com/listen/bcye]Click here to listen to [b]darkmmxii_2011.04.08.Fri.17.12.26.mp3[/b][/url] PS: Platinum Angel[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iCherry Posted April 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 Guys, really sorry on how long it's taking for Chapter 3. Little to no inspiration lately. But I'm still trying to get it done. After I finish 3, I'm not falling behind like this again. >____> Expect it sometime this week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 Its ok, Cherry. Mainly for most of us, inspiration leaving happens. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iCherry Posted April 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2011 THERE. CHAPTER 3 IS UP. *gets started on 4 before 4 weeks later* It might seemed rushed, sorry about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted April 12, 2011 Report Share Posted April 12, 2011 MO'fukker. s*** got real. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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