yogab Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 [b]All help and suggestions would help me a lot. I have barely made any cards that i tried on before.[/b] [img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/2057/137426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/5125/137426s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/2057/137426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/2057/137426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/1222/137426j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/2057/137426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/2057/137426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/2057/137426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/8686/137426a.jpg[/img] [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/1769/137426c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/2057/137426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/2057/137426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/2057/137426.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yogab Posted February 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 Any help would be appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoShToFu Posted February 25, 2011 Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 y is the 3rd hokage so weak? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yogab Posted February 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 [quote name='Joshua1919' timestamp='1298596779' post='5032531'] y is the 3rd hokage so weak? [/quote] Which? Maybe peace needs to be stronger? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoShToFu Posted February 25, 2011 Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 no war Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yogab Posted February 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 [quote name='Joshua1919' timestamp='1298600986' post='5032648'] no war [/quote] Ok i will edit when i have the time tonight or tommorow. Should i make so he comes back next turn to balance his eff? Or what about make it any ninja?[quote name='yogab' timestamp='1298605396' post='5032682'] Ok i will edit when i have the time tonight or tommorow. Should i make so he comes back next turn to balance his eff? Or what about make it any ninja? [/quote] Naruto 4 tails, 3rd hokage war, and new cards updated and added! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WolfFan16 Posted February 25, 2011 Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 Lots of OCG errors and Level and ATK and DEF dont really match in most of these. When mentioning a card name used quotation marks. i would reccomend you turn naruto tails into a Level system (like armed dragon) and should you keep it that way, the specific card goes first then the other tuner/non tuner material. attack and defense positions are spelled out. images are alright and the fifth should have some sort of effect or an actual description. other than that its alright...6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoShToFu Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 shshhod be at llesst evl6. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nishi-chan Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 [spoiler=1st Hokage]When the Field Spell "World of Trees" is face-up on the field, this card gains the following effect: ●Gain Life Points equal to the number of Warrior-Type in your Graveyard x200. This effect can only be used once while this card is face-up on the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=The 2nd Hokage]When this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard, add 1 "3rd Hokage (Peace)" from your deck to your hand.[/spoiler] [spoiler=3rd Hokage (Peace)]If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you can add 1 "3rd Hokage (War)" from your deck to your hand. Once per turn, you can reveal 1 card in your hand to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=3rd Hokage (War)]When this card battles a DARK monster, double this card's original ATK for the damage step only. At the End Phase, remove this card from play. Add it to your hand during your next Draw Phase.[/spoiler] [spoiler=4th Hokage]If this card is discarded from your hand to the Graveyard by a card effect, draw 1 card from your deck. If it is a Monster Card, Special Summon it to your field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=5th Hokage]The effect box isn't for quotes, even in monsters that don't have effects.[/spoiler] [spoiler=World of Trees]All "Hokage" monsters gain 500 ATK.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Naruto 1 Tail]Once per turn you can change the battle position of a face-up monster on your opponent's field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Naruto 4 Tails]When this card is Synchro Summoned, destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. This card must attack if able. This card cannot be destroyed by battle.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Naruto 6 Tails]If this card declares an attack, you and your opponent take 500 points of damage. The ATK and DEF of all "Akatsuki" monsters on the field become 1500.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Kyuubi Chakra Lend]This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Naruto" in it's name. The equipped card gains 1000 ATK. If the equipped card declares an attack, remove this card from play. The equipped monster's original ATK and DEF is decreased by 500.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Shikaku Incomplete]During each player's End Phase, place 1 Sand Demon Counter on this card(max.3). You can remove this card from play with 3 Sand Demon Counters to Special Summon "Shikaku" from your deck.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Shikaku]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Shikaku Incomplete". Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 7 or lower monster from either player's Graveyard to your field. You may not activate this effect your following turn if you do.[/spoiler] There might be some minor errors left over, I'm not perfect. Nice set, though I have to agree with WolfFan, the 3rd Hokage(both) should be stronger ATK and DEF-wise. The 4th needs a better effect, and the 5th needs an effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [quote name='Niashi Inumaki' timestamp='1298697358' post='5035326'] [spoiler=1st Hokage]When the Field Spell "World of Trees" is face-up on the field, this card gains the following effect: ●Gain Life Points equal to the number of Warrior-Type in your Graveyard x200. This effect can only be used once while this card is face-up on the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=The 2nd Hokage]When this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard, add 1 "3rd Hokage (Peace)" from your deck to your hand.[/spoiler] [spoiler=3rd Hokage (Peace)]If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you can add 1 "3rd Hokage (War)" from your deck to your hand. Once per turn, you can reveal 1 card in your hand to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=3rd Hokage (War)]When this card battles a DARK monster, double this card's original ATK for the damage step only. At the End Phase, remove this card from play. Add it to your hand during your next Draw Phase.[/spoiler] [spoiler=4th Hokage]If this card is discarded from your hand to the Graveyard by a card effect, draw 1 card from your deck. If it is a Monster Card, Special Summon it to your field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=5th Hokage]The effect box isn't for quotes, even in monsters that don't have effects.[/spoiler] [spoiler=World of Trees]All "Hokage" monsters gain 500 ATK.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Naruto 1 Tail]Once per turn you can change the battle position of a face-up monster on your opponent's field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Naruto 4 Tails]When this card is Synchro Summoned, destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. This card must attack if able. This card cannot be destroyed by battle.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Naruto 6 Tails]If this card declares an attack, you and your opponent take 500 points of damage. The ATK and DEF of all "Akatsuki" monsters on the field become 1500.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Kyuubi Chakra Lend]This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Naruto" in it's name. The equipped card gains 1000 ATK. If the equipped card declares an attack, remove this card from play. The equipped monster's original ATK and DEF is decreased by 500.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Shikaku Incomplete]During each player's End Phase, place 1 Sand Demon Counter on this card(max.3). You can remove this card from play with 3 Sand Demon Counters to Special Summon "Shikaku" from your deck.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Shikaku]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Shikaku Incomplete". Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 7 or lower monster from either player's Graveyard to your field. You may not activate this effect your following turn if you do.[/spoiler] [/quote] This is all the OCG, and there are a heck of a lot of errors on the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nishi-chan Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Is there a problem with it being OCG? Not like TCG is any popular. And yeah, minor newb errors. Not his fault. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cirlex Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Yeah im making a naruto set here are some of the cards i made P.S. The Itachi Unleashed Cards aren't done there are 5 parts [img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/1496/371856.jpg[/img] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/2276/371856j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/1496/371856.jpg[/img] [img]http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/1496/371856.jpg[/img] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/9874/371856d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/1496/371856.jpg[/img] and... [img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/4070/371856g.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WolfFan16 Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 [quote name='Aragon45000' timestamp='1298930687' post='5041811'] Yeah im making a naruto set here are some of the cards i made P.S. The Itachi Unleashed Cards aren't done there are 5 parts [/quote] Its against the rules to post your cards in someone else's thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cirlex Posted March 1, 2011 Report Share Posted March 1, 2011 [quote name='WolfFan16' timestamp='1298937231' post='5042217'] Its against the rules to post your cards in someone else's thread [/quote] SHEESH I DIDNT know gimme a break Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nishi-chan Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 Lol. I love that Wolf answered completely calmly and he cap-yells at him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cirlex Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 [quote name='Niashi Inumaki' timestamp='1299026115' post='5044574'] Lol. I love that Wolf answered completely calmly and he cap-yells at him. [/quote] screw you dude :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nishi-chan Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 Indeed. And now we're back on topic! Still waiting on yogab to get back so he can correct his errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
serino1045 Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 OCG FAIL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nukerwolf Posted May 14, 2014 Report Share Posted May 14, 2014 where is the image for the 3rd hokage (peace)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted May 14, 2014 Report Share Posted May 14, 2014 Locked because mega Necro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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