MibeR Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 [center][img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/7994/203203.jpg[/img][/center] Special Summon this card from your hand by Tributing 1 Level 5 or higher Dragon-Type monster you control and discarding 1 Dragon-Type monster. If you do, you must skip your Battle Phase this turn. When this card is Summoned, place 1 Bolt Counters on this card. This card gains 400 ATK for each Bolt Counter on it. When a monster is Tribute Summoned, you can place 1 Bolt Counter on this card by paying 500 Life Points. Whenever a monster is Special Summoned, you can remove 1 Bolt Counter on this card to destroy the Special Summoned monster. Leave ur comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arion Gale Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 uhh... too much effect... too long... try to shorten it. other than that, ok... i think... effect needs to be a little better but. hey, it is unique! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 i think its normal effect(not too long),,check yubel for the effect-i mean yubel is a long one thanks for the comment,,appreciated it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 -It's a Thunder-Type that requires Dragon-Type monsters, so this monster wouldn't really fit in neither a Dragon or a Thunder Deck. I suggest to change the requirements to Thunder-Type monsters, so you could run this card, along King Rai-Oh and/or Watts, to make a kind of Anti-Meta Thunder Deck. -Given its ATK, the "If you do, you must skip your Battle Phase this turn." restriction it's not that necessary, and removing it wouldn't make this card overpowered at all. -The LP cost of adding a Bolt Counter is unnecessary too, as nowadays players barely Tribute Summon monsters, and even if your Deck focuses on Tribute Summoning, you would be getting 1 Bolt Counter per turn (or 2 with "Double Summons" and "Ultimate Offerings"); so the few additional Bolt Counters you get shouldn't have an additional cost. -The Summoning cost is quite high too: 2 cards (one of which is high-leveled) for a relatively weak monster?. I suggest to at least remove the Level requirement of the Tributed monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 It's a Thunder-Type that requires Dragon-Type monsters, so this monster wouldn't really fit in neither a Dragon or a Thunder Deck. I suggest to change the requirements to Thunder-Type monsters, so you could run this card, along King Rai-Oh and/or Watts, to make a kind of Anti-Meta Thunder Deck. ===>Maybe i should change the Type into Dragon not Thunder?what you call? -Given its ATK, the "If you do, you must skip your Battle Phase this turn." restriction it's not that necessary, and removing it wouldn't make this card overpowered at all. -The LP cost of adding a Bolt Counter is unnecessary too, as nowadays players barely Tribute Summon monsters, and even if your Deck focuses on Tribute Summoning, you would be getting 1 Bolt Counter per turn (or 2 with "Double Summons" and "Ultimate Offerings"); so the few additional Bolt Counters you get shouldn't have an additional cost. ==>both critics is good,agreed with you -The Summoning cost is quite high too: 2 cards (one of which is high-leveled) for a relatively weak monster?. I suggest to at least remove the Level requirement of the Tributed monster. ==>it's supported with the Special Summon effect, and i referred the level from Dark-End Dragon n Light-End Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 For the first suggestion, I would choose Thunder so it will be compatible with the other Thunders I mentioned. But since it is meant to be a relative of the End Dragons, Dragon-Type is more fitting. And since this card is based on the other 2 End Dragons, you could turn it into a Synchro as well. The requirements could be: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Thunder-Type monster. Or you could change it to WIND and replace the requirement with "1 or more non-Tuner WIND monsters", but then I would be distorting your original concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 thanks for the comment frex,,its useful.. based on the frex advice.the cards would be 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Thunder-Type monsters When this card is Summoned, place 1 Bolt Counters on this card. This card gains 400 ATK for each Bolt Counter on it. When a monster is Tribute Summoned, you can place 1 Bolt Counter on this card. Whenever a monster is Special Summoned, you can remove 1 Bolt Counter on this card to destroy the Special Summoned monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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