The Broken Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 So i haven't made cards in....awhile, so i thought i'd make one again. It's most likely terrible, but i'd like for people to take a look and tell me if it needs alittle something. Thanks. ^^ [spoiler=Dimensional Genie] [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/4044/309608.jpg[/img] Once per turn, as long as this card remains in face-up Defense Position, you can remove from play 1 card in your hand to increase the ATK of 1 monsters on your side of the field by 500. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [font="Arial"][size="2"]Sorry, but that's overpowered...Really.[/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"]Picture: 8/10 It's a bit overused[/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"]OCG: 19/20[/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"]Balance: 18/30[/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"]Creativity: 25/40[/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"] [/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"]Total: 70%[/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"] [/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"]OCG fix:[/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"] [/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"]As long as this card remains in face-up Defense Position, you can remove from play 1 card in your hand to increase the ATK of all monsters on your side of the field by 500.[/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"] [/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"]I think that's correct.[/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 To make it balanced, you should make it so that you can only remove the card once per turn, and so that they gain 500 atk only until the end of the turn. and Remove from Play shouldn't be capitalized. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Broken Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 I think it's overpowered because you just remove 1 monster from your hand from play, and then ALL monsters gain 500 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Broken Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 True, maybe remove from play 1 and increase 1 perhaps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [quote name='darkmaster0' timestamp='1298828453' post='5038604'] True, maybe remove from play 1 and increase 1 perhaps? [/quote] I'd buy that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Broken Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 FIXED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Now it's a great card[img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 It's great, just an error, you said "1 monsters", so... yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Susie Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Pic's good The OCG is greatly done despite the fact how it says:"1 monsters" on it But i think i'll let that one slide 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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