thanonyx Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 Before the legendary planet cards representing Mercury, Mars, Jupiter, Pluto, and the Sun were made I made these as place holders for the time being. Then I started getting ideas for a 5D's/Sailor moon crossover since sailor moon is where I drew inspiration for these cards. I'm thinking of adding these fan made legendary planets along side the other official ones representing Venus, Earth, Saturn, and Neptune. But tell me which you think is better first, the official ones or mine? [size="7"][u]Mercury[/u][/size] [size="4"]Official[/size] [img]http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100826204850/yugioh/images/c/cd/TheTrippingMercury-JP-Manga-GX.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]English You can Tribute Summon this card with 3 Tributes. When this card is Tribute Summoned, apply the appropriate effects: ● 2 Tributes: Change all monsters on the field to Attack Position. ● 3 Tributes: The ATK of all other face-up monsters on the field becomes 0.[/spoiler] [size="4"]Mine[/size] [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/795/61958.jpg[/img] [u][size="7"]Mars[/size][/u] [size="4"]Official[/size] [img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20101002104159/yugioh/images/7/76/TheblazingMars-JP-Manga-GX.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]You can remove from play 3 monsters from your Graveyard to Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. You can Tribute 1 monster to inflict 500 damage to your opponent.[/spoiler] [size="4"]Mine[/size] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/795/61958.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]Every time a non-FIRE monster is Summoned that card's controller takes 600 damage. During your Main Phase you can Tribute this card to destroy all cards on the field to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of cards destroyed x 300. You cannot Normal Summon or Set during the turn you used this effect.[/spoiler] [u][size="7"]Jupiter[/size][/u] [size="4"]Official[/size] [img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20101002121058/yugioh/images/e/e3/ThegrandJupiter-JP-Manga-GX.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]Discard 2 cards from your hand to select and equip 1 monster on the field to this card. This card gains ATK equal to the ATK of the equipped monster until the End Phase.[/spoiler] [size="4"]Mine[/size] [img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/795/61958.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]You can tribute up to 5 monsters to Tribute Summon this card. Apply one of the following effects depending on how many monsters were Tributed to Tribute Summon this card: 2: Destroy 1 card on the field 3: Destroy 3 cards on the field 4: Destroy all monsters on the field except this one. 5: Destroy all cards on the field except this one.[/spoiler] [size="7"][u]Uranus[/u][/size] [size="4"]Official[/size] [img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100826092625/yugioh/images/2/2e/TheDespairUranus-JP-Manga-GX.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]This card gains 300 ATK for each face-up Spell/Trap Card you control.[/spoiler] [size="4"]Mine[/size] [img]http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/795/61958.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]When this card is Special Summoned destroy all Spell and Trap cards your opponent controls. Once per turn you can equip 1 monster you control to this card and treat it as an Equip-Spell card. This card gains 300 ATK for each card equipped to it.[/spoiler] [u][size="7"]Pluto[/size][/u] [size="4"]Official[/size] [img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20101025235511/yugioh/images/0/0b/TheSuppressionPluto-JP-Manga-GX.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]Once per turn, you can declare a card name. If that card is in your opponent's hand, gain control of 1 card your opponent controls.[/spoiler] [size="4"]Mine[/size] [img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4941/61958m.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]This card's ATK and DEF are the number of turns that have passed x200. If this card is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the Graveyard, return all cards on the field, in both players' hands and Graveyards and all removed from play cards into their owners' Decks. Reset the turn count to 1, increase the Life Points of both players to 8000 and both players draw 5 cards.[/spoiler] [u][size="7"]The Sun[/size][/u] [size="4"]Official[/size] [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/3230/61958h.jpg[/img] [size="4"]Mine[/size] [img]http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/795/61958.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Solar Prominence". When this card attacks destroy all face-up DARK monsters after the Damage Step. As long as this card is face-up on the field, all LIGHT monsters cannot be selected as attack targets except this card. When this card, "The Guardian Moon", and "Elemental Hero Terra Firma" are all face-up on your field their original ATK becomes 4000.[/spoiler] [size="4"]Card needed to summon my sun card[/size] [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/795/61958.jpg[/img] [size="7"]The Moon[/size] [size="3"][u]I also made a card for the moon just because.[/u][/size] [img]http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/795/61958.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters with "Moon", "Lunar", or "Penumbral" in their names or 1 "Mikazukinoyaiba" During your Standby Phase, if this card's attribute is LIGHT change it to DARK or vice virsa. If a monster on your field with the same attribute as this card is targeted by a card effect pay 800 Life Points to negate the card and destroy it. If there is a face-up "Elemental Hero Terra Firma" on your field it's and this card's original ATK become 3000.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 [u][i][b][size="7"][font="Comic Sans MS"]BUMP[/font][/size][/b][/i][/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARK RIDER99 Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 I'd have to say that your versions are much better then KONAMI's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 [quote name='DARK RIDER99' timestamp='1299326882' post='5052266'] I'd have to say that your versions are much better then KONAMI's. [/quote] Should I make a Uranus too? I mean it's already conformed in the manga but it hasn't been released in the TCG/OCG yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARK RIDER99 Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 [quote name='thanonyx' timestamp='1299336596' post='5052432'] bump [/quote] Yeah I think that would be good too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 Also if there is anything wrong with my legendary planets (i.e. Op'ed, Up'ed, OCG erroes, etc.) don't be afraid to say so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 Konami made their Pluto and Mars better than you did, but the rest of Konami's suck, so yours are better. You have a few OCG errors here and there and some of the art you used isn't brilliant. But still nice try 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [quote name='}~Gob~Zom~{' timestamp='1299406242' post='5054993'] Konami made their Pluto and Mars better than you did, but the rest of Konami's suck, so yours are better. You have a few OCG errors here and there and some of the art you used isn't brilliant. But still nice try 7/10 [/quote] Could you show me where I made OCG errors and which planets need improvement? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 Jupiter: You can tribute up to 5 monsters to Tribute Summon this card. Apply one of the following effects depending on how many monsters were Tributed to Tribute Summon this card: 2: Destroy 1 card on the field 3: Destroy 3 cards on the field 4: Destroy all monsters on the field except this one. 5: Destroy all cards on the field except this one. This card's ATK and DEF are the number of turns that have passed x200. If this card is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the Graveyard, return all cards on the field, in both players' hands and Graveyards and all removed from play cards into their owners' Decks. Reset the turn count to 1, increase the Life Points of both players to 8000 and both players draw 5 cards. As far as all the effects are concerned, they are all fine, it's just that in a couple of cases, Konami's cards would see more play than yours. The only problem I have with effects is "The Heroic Sun's" effect, which seems really random to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [quote name='}~Gob~Zom~{' timestamp='1299417117' post='5055182'] Jupiter: You can tribute up to 5 monsters to Tribute Summon this card. Apply one of the following effects depending on how many monsters were Tributed to Tribute Summon this card: 2: Destroy 1 card on the field 3: Destroy 3 cards on the field 4: Destroy all monsters on the field except this one. 5: Destroy all cards on the field except this one. This card's ATK and DEF are the number of turns that have passed x200. If this card is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the Graveyard, return all cards on the field, in both players' hands and Graveyards and all removed from play cards into their owners' Decks. Reset the turn count to 1, increase the Life Points of both players to 8000 and both players draw 5 cards. As far as all the effects are concerned, they are all fine, it's just that in a couple of cases, Konami's cards would see more play than yours. The only problem I have with effects is "The Heroic Sun's" effect, which seems really random to me. [/quote] I fixed Jupiter and Pluto but what's wrong with my sun card? Should I add the card needed to summon it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [quote name='thanonyx' timestamp='1299426184' post='5055380'] I fixed Jupiter and Pluto but what's wrong with my sun card? Should I add the card needed to summon it? [/quote] Yes please. It may help me make more sense of the card itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 Added card needed to summon The Heroic Sun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 I'm also thinking about making a Uranus card because the official one hasn't come out in the TCG/OCG yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2011 I made a Uranus card just like I said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 Posted moon legendary planet card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 12, 2011 Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 I'm too lazy to look at your cards, but of the Mangas, Ｔｈｅ ｓｕｐｐｒｅｓｓｉｏｎ ＰＬＵＴＯ is hideously good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 [quote name='Darkplant' timestamp='1299903908' post='5067776'] I'm too lazy to look at your cards, but of the Mangas, Ｔｈｅ ｓｕｐｐｒｅｓｓｉｏｎ ＰＬＵＴＯ is hideously good. [/quote] This is true but I would appreciate it if you did take the time to read the cards. You don't have to, I'm just saying I would like some feedback for them so that I can make them better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted March 12, 2011 Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 Personally, I prefer Konami's Legendary Planets, but that's just me. Like DarkPlant Says, Supression PLUTO is stupidly good, and Blazing MARS is ok in the right deck as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 I noticed no one is voting in the poll. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Great Wolf Sif Posted March 13, 2011 Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 Pluto Resets the Game so he is VERY O'ed Sun's last effect is pointless Destroying all cards on the field and inflicting 600 is very OP'ed [Mars] Jupiter is far too slow there are much better options for the Tribute and destroy [Gilford the Lightning and Co.] Personally your Mercury is pointless [ie. Ice Counters are terrabad and Mercury be represented by Ice is ironic] Uranus is once agin OP'ed 300 ATK per lv this card loves monsters like Yubel much. Then the S/T destruction So yah thats about it. in all a 5/10 keep trying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='~Tobi~' timestamp='1300054528' post='5072012'] Pluto Resets the Game so he is VERY O'ed Sun's last effect is pointless Destroying all cards on the field and inflicting 600 is very OP'ed [Mars] Jupiter is far too slow there are much better options for the Tribute and destroy [Gilford the Lightning and Co.] Personally your Mercury is pointless [ie. Ice Counters are terrabad and Mercury be represented by Ice is ironic] Uranus is once agin OP'ed 300 ATK per lv this card loves monsters like Yubel much. Then the S/T destruction So yah thats about it. in all a 5/10 keep trying [/quote] 1. Pluto I made reflect the power of time and I fell that if you destroyed a being representing time everything would reset. 2. The Sun's last effect represent the balance between the Sun, Earth, and Moon. 3. Maybe I'll lower it to 300. 4. In a speedy enough swarming deck it can be done, trust me I've been playing this card game for 9 years. 5. The crossover I'm putting these cards in has a character that uses ice so I thought it would be appropriate. I am also going to make more Ice Counter cards to go with it. 6. I'll just make it 300 period. The S/T destruction stays. That's my response. You don't have to agree with me that's O.K. you don't have to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltorres666 Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 I think all of your cards except Mercury are better than Konami's versions, although I think your Sun is a little random. Another thing, Konami's Pluto is better than your's because your's is far too OPed, there's really no way to tweak the effect to be similar but less powerful that wouldn't still be OPed. Your Pluto would be forbidden before it even got off the printer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='ltorres666' timestamp='1300118903' post='5073328'] I think all of your cards except Mercury are better than Konami's versions, although I think your Sun is a little random. Another thing, Konami's Pluto is better than your's because your's is far too OPed, there's really no way to tweak the effect to be similar but less powerful that wouldn't still be OPed. Your Pluto would be forbidden before it even got off the printer. [/quote] I have stated that I will also be making Ice Counter cards and what exactly is random about the sun card? Maybe I'll just revamp Pluto entirely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Six Samz 500 Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 there all good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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