TCG warrior Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 A new gemini card, the first gemini fusion. [spoiler=first card][img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/2883/268846l.jpg[/img] lore: [i]"black brutdrago" + "superalloy beast raptinus" This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it again to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect. ● If this card battles, after Damage calculation, you can Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your Deck. Once per turn, you can select and Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your Graveyard. [/i][/spoiler] [spoiler=second card:] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/6669/268846e.jpg[/img] lore: [i]"Black Brutdrago" + "Superalloy Beast Raptinus" This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by returning the above cards you control to the Extra Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) If this card battles, after Damage Calculation, you can Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your Deck. Once per turn, you can select and Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your Graveyard. [/i][/spoiler] [img]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/1876/268846.jpg[/img] lore: "Black Brutdrago" + "Superalloy Beast Raptinus" This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by returning the above cards you control to the Extra Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) If this card battles, after Damage Calculation, you can Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your Deck. Once per turn, you can select and Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your Graveyard. Please rate it. (not much difference with last card, only capitalization in effect and name) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 Why bother making this into a Gemini monster? Since it's supposed to be Gemini support, it being a Gemini monster itself will only hinder it's playability. Other than that, it's a decent card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 ...It's a decent card? When you need two Extra Deck monsters and Poly to Summon it? That line would be my complained - the only way to Summon it is with Poly, which is far too difficult. 90% of the time, since the Deck can run level 8 synchros, they'd be better adding variety to their synchro options than adding something their so unlikely to Summon, and adding Poly which gives them a card they'll often be unable to use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [quote]When you need two Extra Deck monsters and Poly to Summon it?[/quote] yes, and we also need to ReSummon it to have its effect.. i think Superalloy its enough for the Gemini's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCG warrior Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 I understand it's underpowered. And also it's not that much needed, but since I created this card I would like to make it as balanced as possible. What would you think if I changed it to non-gemini, with the summoning way of the VWXYZ monsters? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 agreed,it could be like that.. but make it like G.B. Gyzarus instead of VWXYZ..and change to Gemini would be wise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCG warrior Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 card changed (old version is still available in first spoiler). Are there more comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 now it would be lovely upgrade of superalloy and brutdrago.. "[b]B[/b]lack brutdrago" + "[b]S[/b]uperalloy Beast Raptinus" This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by returning the above cards you control to the [b]E[/b]xtra Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) If this card battles, after Damage [b]C[/b]alculation, you can Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your Deck. Once per turn, you can select and Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your Graveyard. YOU miss the bolded Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCG warrior Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 Normally I don't really pay attention to capital letters, but I will change it. [spoiler=new card] [img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/1876/268846.jpg[/img] I think it's strange that now I put some extra capital letters in it, the effect is better visible[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 its important and vital when youre in 1v1 contest, cz it will reduce your OCG points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 People who rate cards in a contest on OCG need to sort out their priorities. Anyway, it's still unlikely that they'll get both of the cards out, but it's much more playable now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 I find it rather incredibly difficult to Summon, but it would be rather nice if you could get it out on the field JW, would the Special Summoned ones have their abilities? If not I would say you should consider finding a way to add that to the ability... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [quote]it's still unlikely that they'll get both of the cards out[/quote] just realized by now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCG warrior Posted March 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 If you have the right cards in your hand you can special summon them both in 1 turn (use polymerization to special summon superalloy beast raptinus by discarding tuned magician and a random gemini, then normal summon evocator chevalier, equip him with supervise, then remove supervise with his effect to special summon tuned magician and then synchro summon black brutdrago). And boss z, I don't really get your point, do you mean that while superalloy beast raptinus and black brutdrago aren't on the field, their abilities still affect the field? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 Ok. Capitalization issues. thunder=Thunder, Its first part of its name needs a capital. I don't even see how it is a Monster. I need to see the Fusion Material before judging it. If you want it to be balanced. Lower its level, attack/defence and give it another effect. [s]Or scrap that card and make another[/s] But post the Fusion Materials and I will judge it properly. :l Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCG warrior Posted March 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 I did post the fusion materials properly, they are: "superalloy beast raptinus" and "black brutdrago". If you mean I have to post them too, I don't have to because they already exist. search them on the following site: yugioh.wikia.com. Also, thanx for saying that I have to capitalize thunder, I will do it as soon as possible (I think about 5 minutes). Another thing, should I make the effect that when it is destroyed/ removed from the field you can take 1 "polymerization" from your graveyard to your hand? Or would that make it OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 This is a really good card for Gemini monsters. There are only 2 problems: -its ATK and DEF are too high -its too difficult to Summon [quote name='TCG warrior' timestamp='1299513183' post='5057920'] Another thing, should I make the effect that when it is destroyed/ removed from the field you can take 1 "polymerization" from your graveyard to your hand? Or would that make it OP [/quote] That would make it overpowered, and you don't even need it, because too Summon a new "Severe Twinlight" you don't even need it. Rating (for the 2nd card): Picture: 10/10 I don't know why, but I really like it. OCG: 20/20 Balance: 24/30 Creativity: 35/40 Total: 89% Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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