Oking cole Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [img]http://img848.imageshack.us/img848/5673/282416o.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 Okey dokey let me help u out here. When ur making ur card just click on it and an address should pop up below it. Then just copy and paste the address into ur post and it will show up as the card when u post it. Now for the card, First off it's way over powered and if it was going to have that effect it would have to be a continuous spell card not a quick play. I would definitely change the effect. But a pretty good job for a new member so 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 This is really overpowered as it lets you summon a monster each turn, for free. It should be a continuous spell, and you need to learn how to use the shift key. Sorry, but the effect is bland and the card is weak in effort overall, 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oking cole Posted March 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 thanks for the tips ill change it soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 12, 2011 Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 It's a little better, although now it has an anti-lose clause, since you lose 1000 life points per turn. Is the effect optional? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MoldOfWarriors Posted March 12, 2011 Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 Go on google or just look at some yu-gi-oh cards. There's a way of writing the effect of a card that is very specific and precise, and you need to know what you want your card to do. Fix the Grammar and learn to use the shift key. Bland and Little Effort 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted March 12, 2011 Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 Here is a Idea of what It should look like(Feel free to use it) |Once per turn, you may pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Monster Card in Your Graveyard. During your end phase, you must pay 1000 Life Points. If you do not, this card is destroyed.| It's not perfect, but it's closer than what it is right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oking cole Posted March 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 thancs for letting me use that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted March 12, 2011 Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 No Problem. I suggest you read either the Yugioh cards you have(Newer cards are better for this!) or the Common OCG Terms sticky at the top of this forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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