cool_boy_jon1313 Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 Hey guys n girls! im a newbie here and these are my first few cards ive made! hope you like them [img]http://img863.imageshack.us/img863/9316/375582.jpg[/img] [img]http://img863.imageshack.us/img863/480/375582i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/9316/375582.jpg[/img] [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/9316/375582.jpg[/img] [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/2743/375582g.jpg[/img] Lore for ninja woman:For each monster on the field with the name "Supreme Hero" in it, your opponent looses 800 life points for each one and you gain 400 points for each one. [img]http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/9316/375582.jpg[/img] Lore for digi dino:To activate this cards effect you must have at least 1 monster on your side of the field with the name "Supreme Hero" in it. Once this cards effect is activated you can choose one monster from your deck with less attack points than this monster and add it too your hand. Then you can choose a card on your opponents side of the field with less attack points than this monster and destroy it. [img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/9316/375582.jpg[/img][/img] Lore For fire and ice:When this card is summoned pay 750 life points to destroy one of your opponents fire and water type monsters once every 3 turns but you must pay 750 life points each time. [img]http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/9316/375582.jpg[/img] Lore for tower of healing power:For each Monster on your Field and your oppenents Field you gain 200 lifepoints for each Monster. [img]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/9316/375582.jpg[/img] Lore For Tidal Wave:This card can only be activated once it has been face down on your side of the field for more than 2 turns. Once this card is activated all Earth monsters on your opponents side of the field are destroyed and for each one your opponent looses 100 lifepoints. [img]http://img857.imageshack.us/img857/9316/375582.jpg[/img] Lore for trap door of confusion:This card can only be summoned wants it has been face down on your side of the field for more than 2 turns. When it is summoned choose a monster on your oppenents side of the field and equip this trap to the monster. once its equipped that monster cant attack for the next 2 turns nor can you attack it. After the 2 turns and there are no more monsters on your opponents side of the field except for the monster you equipped this card on, you can attack your opponent directly with a monster on your side of the field. PLZ comment and thnx for lookin at my cards!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cloud7184 Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 please dont do attachments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 [quote]please dont do attachments [/quote] correct, this kid epic click on the card and then paste the code here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool_boy_jon1313 Posted March 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 HAHA Thnx guys!!! all fixed!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 [quote]HAHA Thnx guys!!! all fixed!!! [/quote] you get it, great. lets see your cards........ emmmh... For each monster on the field with the name "Supreme Hero" in it, your opponent looses 100 life points for each one.>>this is activate or like piercing effect??? both your Effect Monsters is underpowered...make the ATK higher.. You can activate this card's effect if you control at least 3 "Supreme Hero" in its card name. You can select 1 monster from your Deck with the less ATK than this monster and add it to your hand. Then, select a card on your opponents side of the field with the less ATK than this monster and destroy it. If you use this effect, this card cannot attack for your next 2 turns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool_boy_jon1313 Posted March 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 KK! thnx! ill fix them up now!!All done! I just didnt want to overpower them TOO MUCH! cus there special abilities are quite good! anyway thnx for pointing that out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 [quote]All done! I just didnt want to overpower them TOO MUCH! cus there special abilities are quite good! anyway thnx for pointing that out![/quote] you mean this?? [quote]You can activate this card's effect if you control at least 3 "Supreme Hero" in its card name. You can select 1 monster from your Deck with the less ATK than this monster and add it to your hand. Then, select a card on your opponents side of the field with the less ATK than this monster and destroy it. If you use this effect, this card cannot attack for your next 2 turns.[/quote] This is not good btw, you must have at least another 2 monster. Keeping monster in our field is hard btw..+ you add this [i]If you use this effect, this card cannot attack for your next 2 turns[/i]. it is underpowered really,, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool_boy_jon1313 Posted March 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 OK... ive hopefully made there special abilities abit more powerful and there ATK and DEF aswell! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 keep working on it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool_boy_jon1313 Posted March 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2011 PLZ comment everyone!!! more comments more cards!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunshineSoldier Posted March 11, 2011 Report Share Posted March 11, 2011 They are still pretty weak... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted March 12, 2011 Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 [quote name='cool_boy_jon1313' timestamp='1299507039' post='5057779'] [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/9316/375582.jpg[/img] [/quote] Obvious cliche is obvious. Let me tell you of one of the cliches/tropes of Anime/Manga: - Female Characters are always considered "Weak" But always end up being the strongest characters in the entire series - Female Characters ALWAYS Use Water Elemental Stuffs If the Manga/Anime allows use. - Female Characters amass alot more Fanboy/Fangirls than Male Characters. - The Above Is True. - The Above Is False. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 12, 2011 Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 First of all, raise that ATK of all vanillas to 1800 or 1900. Making 1 type 2000 is another way. Don't dare say "tats too big". As proof it's perfectly fine, the existing card Gene-Warped Werewolf sucks. Second, make your vanilla lores cooler by using 50-dollar words no one has ever heard of via internet thesauruses. I do that with my card names. Third, Ninja Woman is horrible. Make it LV 4, and have its effect be something like "This card can be Special Summoned from your hand if you control a "Supreme Hero" monster besides "Supreme Hero: Ninja Woman". If you control 3 or more "Supreme Hero" monsters, increase the ATK of this card by 300." ATK can be 1800. Fourth, Digi Dino actually has a usable effect, but its name looks far from good. Fifth, Fire and Ice needs a better name and an effect like, "Pay 1000 Life Points and tribute 1 monster. Destroy all face-up FIRE OR WATER Monsters on the field". Simply put anti-Flamvells and Coelacanth. Sixth, Healing Power will never be used. In this case there's no way it can be changed, the only card we localized people use besides Simochi Burn pertaining to healing yourself is Thoughtruler, and even that is gradually dissapearing. Seventh, Tidal Wave should be Continuous and have the counter stuff so its effect can be activated without cheating. Damage can be 500. Maybe add some "This card's activation and effects cannot be negated" lore. Naturias deserve that. Eighth, Trap Door needs the same thing, along with severe upgrading. Maybe something like "Destroy 2 monsters on the field". Mainly since most good decks can crush this within a turn anyways. Since I said this much I force you to reply to my "Dissidents" thread whose url is in my siggy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool_boy_jon1313 Posted March 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 OK OK! guys i get it!Im new here so im not an amazing card maker you know!!!! ill change them now and try to make them much more powerful! i have been watching the yu-gi-oh GX series and ALL their cards aren´t powerful! im just trying to make them as realistic as possible! im not trying to make them all really powerful!! cus theres no point of doing that!its no fun. But ill try to make you all happy!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted March 12, 2011 Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 [quote name='cool_boy_jon1313' timestamp='1299957286' post='5069029'] OK OK! guys i get it!Im new here so im not an amazing card maker you know!!!! ill change them now and try to make them much more powerful! i have been watching the yu-gi-oh GX series and ALL their cards aren´t powerful! im just trying to make them as realistic as possible! im not trying to make them all really powerful!! cus theres no point of doing that!its no fun. But ill try to make you all happy!!!! [/quote] [img]http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4095/4864522310_31aab02156.jpg[/img] Take Darkplant's advice. Also, are you watching the english version? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool_boy_jon1313 Posted March 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2011 Yeah! why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 13, 2011 Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 [quote name='cool_boy_jon1313' timestamp='1299957286' post='5069029'] OK OK! guys i get it!Im new here so im not an amazing card maker you know!!!! ill change them now and try to make them much more powerful! i have been watching the yu-gi-oh GX series and ALL their cards aren´t powerful! im just trying to make them as realistic as possible! im not trying to make them all really powerful!! cus theres no point of doing that!its no fun. But ill try to make you all happy!!!! [/quote] I never forced you to be a great card maker. But thinking of the anime when you make cards is stupid - for instance, look at 5D's, the cards the character Z-ONE uses are like, the brokenest things ever. Also don't watch GX, it sucks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool_boy_jon1313 Posted March 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 NNOOO!! I love GX! 5Ds is OK i guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 As a personal opinion, and the opinion of almost all of this forum, GX sucks official. If you just like plain 1-episode-plots you will, but most of us like other better. Not to mention the whole YGO franchise sucks at plot outside the original DM Manga and things like Higurashi, Death Note, those stuff are a tad lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Umm... Fire Ice aren't subtypes... but you know.... for your first... they get a [b]80%[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ascriptmaster Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 A few things to note: - "Fire", "Ice", and "Electric" are not official Types. Use Pyro instead of Fire, Aqua instead of Ice, and Thunder instead of Electric. [b]- Fix your cards to match the Official Card Grammar rules.[/b] It's hard to understand otherwise. - Some of your Spells or Traps say "When this card is summoned"/"This card can only be summoned when". This is wrong. Spells or Traps are never [i]summoned[/i], only [i]activated[/i]. - Digi Dino is broken, because you forgot to add a few crucial parts to the effect: it should state that its effect activates when you control a Supreme Hero [b]except itself[/b] and only [b]activate once per turn[/b]. Currently it can activate without any other monsters on the field, and search any Monarch, Jinzo, and pretty much every Blackwing, Lightsworn, or Six Samurai monster, as well as Dandylion, Lonefire Blossom, Sangan, Quickdraw Synchron, and almost every worthwhile swarming card in existence, and [i]even then can destroy a monster[/i]. Worst of all, [b]you can search all 5 pieces of Exodia with it in one turn[/b]. After you fix that, dampen the search effect [i]even more[/i] and either A. take out the destruction effect, or B. prevent it from attacking when it uses its effect. - Ninja Woman also does not activate once per turn, which it must, lest ye result in absolute brokenness. All you need to do with its current effect is summon it, avoid Bottomless/Solemn, and activate its effect 10 times. Cheap win. Probably needs to completely change the effect, as its effect is kind of all-or-nothing: either it's broken or it sucks. Maybe an effect to Special Summon it, or increase your monsters' ATK, or even both if it's balanced enough. - There is no real way to confirm how many turns a card has been set. Make the cards that must be face-down for a certain number of turns Continuous Traps, so that they can trigger when they have been [b]face-up[/b] for that number of turns instead. - Your vanillas' ATKs are too high for their Levels (except Diamond Girl which is equal to Gene-Warped Warwolf and therefore is OK). Top a 23 beater on the first turn is pretty crazy, even if first-turn synchros on your opponent's side easily eliminate it. end (rant); Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EndlessOcean Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 All is said above, 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool_boy_jon1313 Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 haha! thnx for the advice guys!!!! i dont know what to do! some of you are telling me to put the attacks up of the monsters and some of you are telling me to put the attacks down! i will ,ofcourse, change all my cards now and hope you will all like them when there done and youve stopped giving me advice on how to make them better! but as ive said... im a newbie and im not amazing at making cards so give me some credit! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 [quote name='jushirouki' timestamp='1300066855' post='5072489']Jinzo[/quote] lolwut Except wait, yeah, what you're saying about Exodia is right. But I wouldn't nerf it anymore. Also take my advice on Ninja Woman. [quote name='jushirouki' timestamp='1300066855' post='5072489'] - Your vanillas' ATKs are too high for their Levels (except Diamond Girl which is equal to Gene-Warped Warwolf and therefore is OK). Top a 23 beater on the first turn is pretty crazy, even if first-turn synchros on your opponent's side easily eliminate it.[/quote] Hell no it's balanced like this, you'd know if you're localized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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