Red Eyes B. Dragon 542 Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 I made my own version of fusing Blue eyes shining dragon and Red eyes darkness dragon. It's a Dragon/Effect monster, Divine attribute, with 6000 ATK and 6000. Its effect is [quote]This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can only be Special Summoned by fusion summon. This card gains 600 attack for each dragon type monster in your and your opponent's graveyard. This card is not affected by spell, trap, or monster effects. If this card does battle with an opponent's monster that's in defence mode whose defence is less than this cards attack take the difference and deal it to your opponent as battle damange. If this card is destroyed in battle you can special summon 1 Blues Eyes Shining Dragon and 1 Red Eyes Darkness Dragon from your graveyard.[/quote] The attchment is a picture of the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 DIVINE attribute is just not realistic. Nor is 6000 ATK and DEF. The OCG could use more improvement eg. by making capitals on words like Special Summon instead of special summon. Light and Darkness dragon is a card already so the name could get mixed up with a more-powered version of the card stated. WAY too OP and practically invincible. + can you post the card here please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Eyes B. Dragon 542 Posted March 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 I just added an attchment with the picture of the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 Looks a LOT like Light and Darkness Dragon (original card) :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Eyes B. Dragon 542 Posted March 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 I am going to come up with a new name and also try to find a new picture. I'll post it once i'm done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 [quote name='Red Eyes B. Dragon 542' timestamp='1299611947' post='5060593'] I am going to come up with a new name and also try to find a new picture. I'll post it once i'm done. [/quote] Good Name: Light And Darkness Dragon ∞ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legacy117 Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 Based on my ranking system, this card receives the following rank: F Rank Reason being is that the picture is not really dealing with the concept you are trying to show and it is a different drawing of a card alredy, the card itself might be unoriginal, the OCG is off, and it is way overpowered. Some suggestions would be to tone down the ATK and DEF to 4500 and 3500, respectively. Another one is to tone down the effects form Spells, Traps, and monster effects to only Spells and Traps. Also, take out the 600-point gain for this card. If you somehow summon it on your first turn, you will probably very likely defeat you opponent only after 2 turns since you have 2 Dragon-Type monsters in your Graveyard to begin with, while dealing 7200 points worth of damage in the first turn alone. Finally, take out the Special Summon of both Dragons from your Graveyard and make it choose one or the other. This is my opinion and I highly say you should take it into consideration. Here is your original OCG: This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can only be Special Summoned by fusion summon. This card gains 600 attack for each dragon type monster in your and your opponent's graveyard. This card is not affected by spell, trap, or monster effects. If this card does battle with an opponent's monster that's in defence mode whose defence is less than this cards attack take the difference and deal it to your opponent as battle damange. If this card is destroyed in battle you can special summon 1 Blues Eyes Shining Dragon and 1 Red Eyes Darkness Dragon from your graveyard. Here is the OCG fix: This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can[b]not[/b] be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. [s]This card gains 600 attack for each [b]D[/b]ragon[b]-T[/b]ype monster in your and your opponent's [b]G[/b]raveyard.[/s] This card is not affected by [b]S[/b]pell[b]s[/b], [b]T[/b]rap[b]s[/b], or monster effects. If this card does battle [b]with a Defense Position monster whos DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage[/b]. If this card is destroyed [b]by[/b] battle, you can [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummon 1 [b]"[/b]Blues Eyes Shining Dragon[b]"[/b] [b]or[/b] 1 [b]"[/b]Red Eyes Darkness Dragon[b]"[/b] from your [b]G[/b]raveyard. EDIT: Also, [b]NEVER[/b] use the DIVINE Attribute. It is never realistic unless in a special case (i.e.: only the Egyptian God Cards). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 [quote name='legacy117' timestamp='1299626460' post='5061312'] Here is the OCG fix: [b][s] This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set[/s][/b]. This card can[b]not[/b] be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. [s]This card gains 600 attack for each [b]D[/b]ragon[b]-T[/b]ype monster in your and your opponent's [b]G[/b]raveyard.[/s] This card is not affected by [b]S[/b]pell[s][b]s[/b][/s], [b]T[/b]rap[s][b]s[/b][/s], or [b]M[/b]onster [b]Card[/b] effects. If this [b]attacking[/b] card [s]does[/s] battles [b]with a Defense Position monster whos[b]e[/b] DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage[/b]. If this card is destroyed [b]by[/b] battle, you can [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummon 1 [b]"[/b]Blues Eyes Shining Dragon[b]"[/b] [b]or[/b] 1 [b]"[/b]Red Eyes Darkness Dragon[b]"[/b] from your [b]G[/b]raveyard[b], ignoring the Summoning Conditions[/b]. [/quote] Added more fixes. Fusions can't be Normal Summoned. Obviously doesn't see that both Darkness and Shining cannot be Special Summoned by means other than their own unless you add a part that ignores summoning conditions. Also, being destroyed by battle with 6000 ATK and DEF (from what I'm reading above)? Isn't that a little too impossible, since this is immune to effects, except with Honest. Everybody be siding Volcanic Queen and/or Lava Golem if they see this card. In 3's. Fusion Materials? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legacy117 Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 [quote name='Chihaya Kisaragi' timestamp='1299628324' post='5061376'] Added more fixes. Fusions can't be Normal Summoned. Obviously doesn't see that both Darkness and Shining cannot be Special Summoned by means other than their own unless you add a part that ignores summoning conditions. Also, being destroyed by battle with 6000 ATK and DEF (from what I'm reading above)? Isn't that a little too impossible, since this is immune to effects, except with Honest. Everybody be siding Volcanic Queen and/or Lava Golem if they see this card. In 3's. Fusion Materials? [/quote] I forgot it was a Fusion Monster when I edited it. And I forgot the "ignoring summoning conditions" after reading the effects of BESD and REDD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 6000 ATK is a total overpowered beast. OCG is very weak, unfortunately, and please post the card properly, or put this in written cards. 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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