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So this is my first set of cards.

Don't really know how to start threads like this, but I digress.

Below are the cards and their lore.

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[spoiler=The Summoner]
[IMG]http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/l484/Hedcaz/ATSummoner-2.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=Lore]
Once per turn, add 1 Tech Counter to this card (MAX 8 ). You can remove any number of Tech Counters on this card, then Special Summon 1 "Advancing Tech" monster from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard with a level equal to the number of Tech Counters you removed from this card.
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[spoiler=The Assault Bot]
[IMG]http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/l484/Hedcaz/ATAssault.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=Lore]
When this card is Special Summoned, add 1 Tech Counters to any face-up "Advancing Tech" monster. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Damage to your opponent.
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[spoiler=The Engineer]
[img]http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/3889/377922s.jpg[/img]
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When this card is Summoned, add 1 Tech Counter to every face-up "Advancing Tech" you control. Once per turn, by removing 1 Tech Counter on this card and discarding 1 card in your hand, you can draw 1 card. If the drawn card is a Level 4 or lower "Advancing Tech" monster, you can Special Summon it.
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[spoiler=The Bomb]
[IMG]http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/l484/Hedcaz/ATBomb.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=Lore]
This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, you can add 1 Tech Counter to this card for every "Advancing Tech" monsters you control (MAX 20). When this card is destroyed, destroy any monsters your opponents control who's DEF is less than the amount of Tech Counters that were on this card x100.
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[spoiler=The Reaper]
[IMG]http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/l484/Hedcaz/ATReaper.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=Lore]
When this card is Special Summoned, add 1 Tech Counter on this card (MAX 2). This card gains 500 ATK for every Tech Counter on this card. Once per turn, you can tribute this face-up card with 2 Tech Counters to destroy 1 card on your opponents side of the field. If you do, Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase.
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[spoiler=The Dragon]
[IMG]http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/l484/Hedcaz/ATDragon.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=Lore]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 "Advancing Tech" monster with at least 10 Tech Counters. When this card is Special Summoned, add 3 Tech Counters to this card. If this card would be destroyed, remove 3 Tech Counters from it instead.
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[spoiler=The Wall]
[img]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/6435/377922.jpg[/img]
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Once per turn, if you control another "Advancing Tech" monster, add 1 Tech Counter to this card. If this card has at least 2 Tech Counters, it cannot be destroyed by battle (Damage Calculations still apply).
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[spoiler=The Clock]
[img]http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/6435/377922.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]
When this card is Summoned, add 1 Tech Counter to any face-up "Advancing Tech" monster you control. Once per turn, you can remove 3 Tech Counters on your side of the field. Your opponent skips their next Battle Phase.
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[spoiler=The Apprentice]
[img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/5629/377922p.jpg[/img]
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When this card is Special Summoned, you can decrease this card's Level by 1. When this card is used for the Synchro Summon for an "Advancing Tech" monster, add 1 Tech Counter to any face-up monster.
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[spoiler=The Juggernaut]
[img]http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/6435/377922.jpg[/img]
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1 "Advancing Tech" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
Once per turn, add 1 Tech Counter to this card. When this card declares an attack, you can remove 3 Tech Counters from this card. If you do, destroy all monsters your opponent controls after damage calculation that has an ATK less than this card. When this card is destroyed, Special Summon the Tuner monster used to Synchro Summon this card.
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[spoiler=The Slasher]
[img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/6435/377922.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 Tech Counters on the field. This card can attack twice per turn.
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[spoiler=The Chimera]
[img]http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/4076/377922w.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]
1 "Advancing Tech" monster + 1 "Advancing Tech" monster
This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by removing from play the above cards you control. (You do not use "Polymerization".) This card's ATK and DEF is the combined ATK and DEF of the monsters tributed for this card. Once per turn, remove from play 1 monster in your Graveyard. This card gains the removed monster's effect until the End Phase.
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[spoiler= Engineer's Daughter]
[img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/6435/377922.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]
When this card is Normal Summoned, add 3 Tech Counters to this card (MAX 3). If you control another "Advancing Tech" monster, this card cannot be selected as an attack target. Once per turn, you can remove 3 Tech Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Advancing Tech" monster from your hand.
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[spoiler=Lin]
[img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/4237/377922c.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]
When this card declares an attack, add 1 Tech Counter to this card (MAX 3). You can remove 1 Tech Counter from this card. This card can declare another attack.
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[spoiler=The Blade]
[img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6435/377922.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]
If you control another "Advancing Tech" monster with at least 3 Tech Counters, you can Normal Summon this card without tributing a monster. When this card attacks, you can remove 3 Tech Counters from this card. This card can attack again. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Damage to your opponent.
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[spoiler=Spells]
[spoiler=Advance Weaponry]
[spoiler=Thunder Spear]
[IMG]http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/l484/Hedcaz/AWThunderSpear.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=Lore]
This card can only be equipped to an "Advanced Tech" monster. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK. When the equipped monster declares an attack, add 1 Tech Counter to the equipped monster. If the equipped monster would be destroyed when it has 3 or more Tech Counters, destroy this card instead.
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[spoiler=Technical Armor]
[img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/6435/377922.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]
This card can only be equipped to an "Advanced Tech" monster. Once per turn, you can remove 2 Tech Counter on the equipped monster. Until the End Phase of your opponent's turn, the equipped monster is not affected by the effects of Spell, Traps, and Monster Effects that target the equipped monster. If the equipped monster would be destroyed when it has 2 or more Tech Counters, destroy this card instead.
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[spoiler=Advanced Encounter]
[IMG]http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/l484/Hedcaz/AdvancedEncounter.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=Lore]
Select 1 face-up "Advancing Tech" monster you control. Add 2 Tech Counters on the selected monster. The selected monster must declare an attack this turn.
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[spoiler=Advanced Future]
[img]http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/6435/377922.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]
Every face-up monster gains 100 ATK and DEF for every Tech Counter on it. Once per turn, you can add 1 Tech Counter on this card for every "Advancing Tech" monster you control. This card gets the following effects depending on the number of Tech Counters are on this card.
0 At least 10 Tech Counters - Once per turn, you can draw 1 card.
0 At least 15 Tech Counters - If an "Advancing Tech" monster is destroyed, you can remove 5 Tech Counters from this card to Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase.
0 At least 20 Tech Counters - You can remove 15 Tech Counters from this card and select 2 "Advancing Tech" monsters. The selected monsters can attack twice until the end of your 2nd Battle Phase.
0 At least 25 Tech Counters - Remove this card from play. Destroy every monster on the field, then Special Summon 1 "Advancing Tech" monster from your Graveyard.
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[spoiler=Technical Upgrade]
[img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/6435/377922.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]
Select 1 face-up "Advancing Tech" monster you control. Add 3 Tech Counter to the selected monster. When this card destroyed, you can discard 1 card from your hand to add this card to your hand. If you do, you cannot activate this card until your 2nd Standby Phase after this card's activation.
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[spoiler=Traps]
[spoiler=Advancing Virus]
[IMG]http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/l484/Hedcaz/AdvancingVirus.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=Lore]
You can only activate this card when your opponent declares an attack on an "Advancing Tech" monster that has at least 2 Tech Counters. Destroy both monsters. After this cards activation, you can remove 2 Tech Counters on your side of the field and discard 1 card from your hand to return this card to your hand.
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Note the Image Credits below the pictures to the left, just in case you missed it.
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[quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1299822828' post='5066213']
i impresses, for a new member. those card are really awesome, A for you :)

but here's some OCGE i recognize, Hand=hand
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Thanks. :D

I knew I was forgetting something when making the cards, I will fix that on those that need fixing.

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[quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1299823710' post='5066227']
you should!.

did you play YGO for a long time?cz for a new member, your card-making skills are impressed me
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I used to play Yugioh, then stopped. Just recently started getting back into it.


I remember most of the grammar used on the cards.
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[quote name='Imperial Knight of Wisel' timestamp='1299901630' post='5067717']
Excellent work. I mean for a new member. I noticed Tech Genus Halberd Cannon with Shooting Star on that one advanced weaponry card. Just wait until you see my new archtype it will blow this archtype away.
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Thanks...?
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Impressive. For a new member, your cards are great. The OCG is perfect (after the correction of "Hand"). Most cards aren't over- or underpowered.

Pictures: 8/10
OCG: 20/20
Balance: 25/30 Only "Advancing Tech -The Engineer" and "Advancing Tech - The Clock" are overpowered.
Creativity: 35/40

Total: 88% + bonus because I'm very impressed 91%

Extra: My 2nd card set used Tech Counters as well[img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif[/img]

The reason why "Advancing Tech -The Engineer" and "Advancing Tech - The Clock" are overpowered:
"Advancing Tech -The Engineer": You can just draw 1 card by removing 1 Tech Counter? I mean, Royal Magic Library needs 3 Spell Counters, and those are much more difficult to create. (This counts for Advanced Future too)
"Advancing Tech - The Clock": This card can easily be abused. You only have too bring out a beatstick, and then your opponent has no chance too survive, since they can't draw cards to destroy your monsters. So, this card can create a lockdown.
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[quote name='Brendan Saux' timestamp='1300042824' post='5071598']

The reason why "Advancing Tech -The Engineer" and "Advancing Tech - The Clock" are overpowered:
"Advancing Tech -The Engineer": You can just draw 1 card by removing 1 Tech Counter? I mean, Royal Magic Library needs 3 Spell Counters, and those are much more difficult to create. (This counts for Advanced Future too)
"Advancing Tech - The Clock": This card can easily be abused. You only have too bring out a beatstick, and then your opponent has no chance too survive, since they can't draw cards to destroy your monsters. So, this card can create a lockdown.
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Thanks for the criticism :D

I'll go fix the balance on those cards ASAP.

EDIT: The cards have been fix'd
EDIT2: 4 New Cards Added

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[font="Verdana"] [font="Verdana"]Chimera is a real card-Scrap Chimera, witch I have in real life. the pics are awesome, and the effects are great. I don't know how to put the 'click to veiw stuff', so you are better than me. I still have my Yugioh cards- you can see my deck in the deck part of the forum- but I really like your cards :rolleyes: Gooid job! 9.5/10, Just because of Chimera.[/font] [/font]

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