Jump to content

yet anover card


Oking cole

Recommended Posts

[quote name='Oking cole' timestamp='1299894356' post='5067491']
[img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/617/282416.jpg[/img]
[/quote]

*Generic Post Stuff Here*

|Once per turn, If you Control more than 3 monsters, you may Tribute a Monster you control to Special Summon 1 Monster from your graveyard|

Don't know if this fix is perfect, as I don't have my Yugioh Official Card Grammar Dictionary open at the moment...But it's closer.
Link to comment
Share on other sites

You must learn to use capitals in your cards. None of the cards you made have capital lettering! To start, just use proper english grammar, with capitals beginning proper nouns and sentences. Then, building off of OG fixes people give you, you should be able to find out what else should be fixed, and apply them to other cards. This card (disregarding OCG now) is pretty useless, since there's a low chance you'll even get three in your hand, let alone protect them long enough to be able to use their effect. also, you can't have more than three of the same card in a deck, so there's no point in saying: "When theres 3 [b]or more[/b] of this card..." It's an okay card, but weak and unreliable. I give a 5.5/10
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.

×
×
  • Create New...