AgentBlaze117 Posted March 13, 2011 Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 Hay, Im back, and here is a new vergin of Hyper Psycic Blaster. Rate, Please![img]http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/802/353561.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom-Duelist Posted March 13, 2011 Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 Needs work, 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deathcore Posted March 13, 2011 Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 "[i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 "Hyper Psychic Blaster"[/i] ([b]From where?[/b])[i]. When this card battles, this card's ATK becomes equal to the monster it's battling.[/i]" I tried fixing up the OCG. I know the last effect is off, but I don't know what it's trying to do. Does the ATK become the [i]same[/i] as the monster its attacking or do you add to it? Also, specify where you remove HPB from. Graveyard, field, or Extra Deck. I would suggest either Graveyard and/or field. Nest, what in the hell is "Pheanix"? Do you mean "Phoenix"? You also spelled "Psychic" wrong a total of three times; it's "Psychic", not "Psycic"/"Phsycic". Also, two types aren't allowed on a card, decide between Psychic or Pyro. If you really want it to be "two types", put, "[i]This card is treated as a ****-Type while face-up on the field.[/i]" (Of course, replace ****-Type with whatever you don't use), somewhere in the effect. The image is also horrible. I really don't see how this card would help Psychic decks. Maybe change the effect to something that deals with Life Points? For this stuff, 2/10, for effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unbreakerable Posted March 13, 2011 Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 srry dude but i give this a 3/10. the idea is good but u need to fix this up a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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