Acelius Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 Hey:) as described [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/555/378844b.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 My computer is a little messed up and won't fully load the card, so I can't see the effect. Can you post the effect below the card please? Kudos on the name and picture though, although I think "Of" and "The" shouldn't have capital letters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildcard-X Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 The OCG is fine from what i can see. No errors. Nice card too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AardvarK' Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 I'm not sure if it's a mistake, but I would change "from your side of the field" to "you control", and "as a result of a battle" to "by battle". Listen, I don't know if your way is wrong (it doesn't seem to be), but I just learned differently. Also, in the last sentence you should capitalizate Summon. Good picture by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 When this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon the monsters used for Tribute Summon this card. before it was fine, ehm. i like the effect simple and useful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Acelius Posted March 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 Thanks for the help guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 20, 2011 Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 Now that I can sorta see the effect, I can tell you that it's creative, useful, and balanced. If anything else, though, it might be a little OP. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted March 20, 2011 Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 I find this card a LITTLE too powerful, 3100 ATK and then you get monsters back when it goes ka-put (?) too much power, imo, but i'd like it (because it is so powerful) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Acelius Posted March 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 Thanks so much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leirondo Essen Darron Posted March 20, 2011 Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 this is made to be a finished card set site! not some help thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inexplicable Madness Posted March 20, 2011 Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 ~ OCG CORRECTIONS "from your side of the field" -----> "from your control" "If this card is destroyed as a result of battle" ------> "If this card is destroyed by battle" "summon" ------> "Summon" "your side of the field" -------> "your control" ~ RATINGS -Title -- 9/10 : not the most original -Picture -- 10/10 -Effect -- 9/10 : not the best effect but it works well if slightly a little OP'ed. Try "If this card is destroyed by battle choose one card you tributed to Summon to your control." -Originality -- 9.5/10 -Balance -- 7/10 : the attack and defense are ridiculously OP'ed -OCG -- 8/10 : 4 total errors ~OVERALL RATING 8.7 : Just fix the simple errors I indicated above to improve rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Acelius Posted March 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 Thanks for the help and Gister, does it really matter? no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 21, 2011 Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 [quote name='.:Gister Knows:.' timestamp='1300658253' post='5086133'] this is made to be a finished card set site! not some help thing [/quote] The card is finished. What's the problem here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkben Posted March 21, 2011 Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 [quote name='Inexplicable Madness' timestamp='1300659870' post='5086177'] ~ OCG CORRECTIONS "from your side of the field" -----> "from your control" "If this card is destroyed as a result of battle" ------> "If this card is destroyed by battle" "summon" ------> "Summon" "your side of the field" -------> "your control" ~ RATINGS -Title -- 9/10 : not the most original -Picture -- 10/10 -Effect -- 9/10 : not the best effect but it works well if slightly a little OP'ed. Try "If this card is destroyed by battle choose one card you tributed to Summon to your control." -Originality -- 9.5/10 -Balance -- 7/10 : the attack and defense are ridiculously OP'ed -OCG -- 8/10 : 4 total errors ~OVERALL RATING 8.7 : Just fix the simple errors I indicated above to improve rating [/quote] uh what? unless he's updated the card, no-one ever says 'from your control' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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