thanonyx Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 [color="#008000"]What can I say? Happy St. Patrick's Day everybody![/color] [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/7469/61958d.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]Each time a card(s) effect that involves a coin toss, dice roll, or selecting a card at random is activated, you can decide the outcome or card(s) selected. During each of your Standby Phases, pay 1000 Life Points. If you do not, destroy this card. You do not have to pay this cost if you control at least 1 face-up "Leprechaun".[/spoiler] [color="#008000"]Here's the card that goes with it. Don't worry about the pic, it's from the Yu-Gi-Oh! R manga.[/color] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/429/61958q.jpg[/img] [color="#008000"]Enjoy and eat your corn beef and potatoes.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildcard-X Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 i like the first card. the second card needs serious work. Happy St. Patrick's Day! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 The first card is very nice, but the second is well, meh. The pic is what really brings it down, so here's a better one (imo): [IMG]http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g235/lphotobucket/leprechaun.png[/IMG] If you don't like it, fine, choose something else. But the current pic has to go. Oh, it needs stats, too. But, overall, nice cards. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 [color="#008000"]Remeber, I did say that the 2nd one was from the Yu-Gi-Oh! R manga. It even has it's own page on th Yu-Gi-Oh! wiki. Also, thanks for the feedback.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ascriptmaster Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 Leprechaun does not have ATK or DEF. That's a problem. Also needs some OCG fixes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 [quote name='jushirouki' timestamp='1300414346' post='5080088'] Leprechaun does not have ATK or DEF. That's a problem. Also needs some OCG fixes. [/quote] [color="#008000"]Oops, I'll fix that. Also where are the OCG errors?[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 [quote name='thanonyx' timestamp='1300466007' post='5080844'] [color="#008000"]Oops, I'll fix that. Also where are the OCG errors?[/color] [/quote] I'll fix them if you post the lore. Oh, and I do know where that pics from, it's just really LQ. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 [quote name='MechaSanphred' timestamp='1300480159' post='5081257'] I'll fix them if you post the lore. Oh, and I do know where that pics from, it's just really LQ. [/quote] I posted the lore like you asked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 19, 2011 Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 [quote name='thanonyx' timestamp='1300538661' post='5082654'] I posted the lore like you asked. [/quote] [s]As long as this card is active when[/s] [b]Each time[/b] a card(s) effect that involves a coin toss, dice roll, or selecting a card at random [b]is[/b] activated[b],[/b] you can decide the outcome or card(s) selected. During [b]each of[/b] your Standby Phase[b]s,[/b] [s]you must[/s] pay 1000 Life Points[b].[/b] [b]I[/b]f [b]you do[/b] not[b],[/b] destroy this card. You do not have to pay this cost if you control at least 1 face-up "Leprechaun". Most of these are just changes to make the lore shorter, but on most of these cases, your OCG was fine. I just used the "newer" version of OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 [quote name='MechaSanphred' timestamp='1300548328' post='5082848'] [s]As long as this card is active when[/s] [b]Each time[/b] a card(s) effect that involves a coin toss, dice roll, or selecting a card at random [b]is[/b] activated[b],[/b] you can decide the outcome or card(s) selected. During [b]each of[/b] your Standby Phase[b]s,[/b] [s]you must[/s] pay 1000 Life Points[b].[/b] [b]I[/b]f [b]you do[/b] not[b],[/b] destroy this card. You do not have to pay this cost if you control at least 1 face-up "Leprechaun". Most of these are just changes to make the lore shorter, but on most of these cases, your OCG was fine. I just used the "newer" version of OCG. [/quote] [color="#008000"]I re-wrote the lore, thank you.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted March 20, 2011 Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 This spell card actually makes lcuky-based decks much more playable. Nice job 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 [quote name='CDDRodrigo' timestamp='1300580251' post='5083790'] This spell card actually makes lcuky-based decks much more playable. Nice job 7/10 [/quote] [color="#808000"]What did I lose the 3 for?[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted March 20, 2011 Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 [quote name='thanonyx' timestamp='1300582072' post='5083853'] What did I lose the 3 for? [/quote] Probably pic. I never give 10/10, as nothing is perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted March 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 [color="#808000"]I wonder if I should make a card out of Fry's 7 leaf clover from Futurama?[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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