dark solaris Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 hey im a new guy here nothing much just made my first card so dont expect the card to be perfect^^, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark solaris Posted February 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 just click the link im still trying to get the hang of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Terrible name, terrible picture, terrible grammar, and terribly overpowered. Also, I think it's in the wrong section. Since you're new, I'll give you 3/10 for the effort. Welcome to the Forums. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark solaris Posted February 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Terrible name' date=' terrible picture, terrible grammar, and terribly overpowered. Also, I think it's in the wrong section. Since you're new, I'll give you 3/10 for the effort. Welcome to the Forums. ^_^[/quote'] which one is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LightAndDarknessDragon Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Super overpowered and needs some sort of effect (some kind of drawback that gives it a cost) and bad pic. But I like the Sonic reference! ^_^ 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Terrible name' date=' terrible picture, terrible grammar, and terribly overpowered. Also, I think it's in the wrong section. Since you're new, I'll give you 3/10 for the effort. Welcome to the Forums. ^_^[/quote'] which one is it?Since your card is based on Sonic, it should be in Pop Culture Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark solaris Posted February 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Terrible name' date=' terrible picture, terrible grammar, and terribly overpowered. Also, I think it's in the wrong section. Since you're new, I'll give you 3/10 for the effort. Welcome to the Forums. ^_^[/quote'] which one is it?Since your card is based on Sonic, it should be in Pop Culture Cards. okay thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark solaris Posted February 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Terrible name' date=' terrible picture, terrible grammar, and terribly overpowered. Also, I think it's in the wrong section. Since you're new, I'll give you 3/10 for the effort. Welcome to the Forums. ^_^[/quote'] somebody made it for me P.Si`ve changed it its no longer too powerful to control unless you sacrifise your life points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wilson91 Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 2/10. Anyway good effort and welcome to the forums :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LightAndDarknessDragon Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 now the effect is just crazy and effect monsters are brown not yellow. OCG still needs a lot of work. try to cut the effect down into simple, concise sentences.3/10 for the effort Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark solaris Posted February 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 now the effect is just crazy and effect monsters are brown not yellow. OCG still needs a lot of work. try to cut the effect down into simple' date=' concise sentences.3/10 for the effort[/quote'] right i`ve changed it and btw somebody made it for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chargerfan Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 grammar 2/10, but your a new member 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark solaris Posted February 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 grammar 2/10' date=' but your a new member 5.5/10[/quote'] i know i have some problems with long words Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LightAndDarknessDragon Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 you're doing well working on it. good job cutting down the stats. now the effect needs to be worked on. look at some other cards and try to model the format that they use to help you get the structure and OCG downpat 4/10 currently Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Okay let me try and help. 1. Name should be "Darkness The Hedgehog" not "darknessthehedgehog". It looks nicer like that.2. If it's going to be a Fusion, it should be purple.3. Fusion material monsters should be in quotes. "Sonic" + "Shadow" + "Silver's Brother"4. Picture. Does anything really need to be said?5. Now the effect. I can't undrestand what it's trying to say.6. Section. Move to Pop Culture. Work on it and check out some other cards as examples. Go to Yankees card reviews which is stickied and you'll see how to make cards with good OCG. 0/10 - Nice try for a beginner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
qwer1234 Posted August 1, 2008 Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 dont be nasty to him cut him some slack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted August 1, 2008 Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 this section is made for intros.. not cards.. XD but welcome to the site!!! PM me if you got questions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 1, 2008 Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 Learn to use IMG tags. My comp won't load this attachment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Einhander Posted August 1, 2008 Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 well -1/10 no offense but its bad ... for begginner lets plus 1 point 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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