Valkyrus Posted March 19, 2011 Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/tr.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/jg.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/kyz.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/sbf.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ttkk.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/rg.jpg[/IMG] And my Original art card: [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/dmw-1.jpg[/IMG] I posted it before but now I changed the template. Since the cards are really big I hope it's okay I didn't post the lores. Comments and critique are greatly appreciated ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeromaxx Posted March 19, 2011 Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 Nice, you have shown some great work. I love the pictures and the card design. I see alot OCG mistakes and overpowered or useless cards. Improving the OCG errors will make them perfect. Also, try to make the effects more understanable and balanced. I had some problems understanding some of the effects, furthermore they didn't match up with the balance. Other than that, I like the effort you've put in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted March 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 [quote name='Maxim58' timestamp='1300566153' post='5083439'] Nice, you have shown some great work. I love the pictures and the card design. I see alot OCG mistakes and overpowered or useless cards. Improving the OCG errors will make them perfect. Also, try to make the effects more understanable and balanced. I had some problems understanding some of the effects, furthermore they didn't match up with the balance. Other than that, I like the effort you've put in. [/quote] Thank you ^^ But I'd like to know which cards you mean in particular. How can make them more balanced or improve them~ While making those I was mostly thinking of originality rather than usefulness which might've been a big mistake but I still hoped they'd be useful enough to be realistic, I don't know. Can you give me some particular advice? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeromaxx Posted March 19, 2011 Report Share Posted March 19, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1300566487' post='5083444'] Thank you ^^ But I'd like to know which cards you mean in particular. How can make them more balanced or improve them~ While making those I was mostly thinking of originality rather than usefulness which might've been a big mistake but I still hoped they'd be useful enough to be realistic, I don't know. Can you give me some particular advice? [/quote] Of course. First of we have Tengung Rider, let's fix his OCG's. ''FLIP: Increase this monster's ATK x1000 each time it is flipped face-up. Once per turn you can flip this face-up card into face-down Defence Position.'' Jump Gardna ''When a monster on your side of the field is attacked, negate the attack and remove this monster from play, Special Summon this monster during your opponent's End Phase if it was removed from play by this card's effect.'' KY-Zero Just mentioning that this card is just too good enabling to draw 2 cards is just a huge +. Cards like these get banned in TCG. If Stardome Blader uses his effect to blow the whole field up, the synchro which would be summoned is blown up too. The other ones are too long, read some real TCG cards and try to figure it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted March 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 [quote name='Maxim58' timestamp='1300567762' post='5083471'] Of course. First of we have Tengung Rider, let's fix his OCG's. ''FLIP: Increase this monster's ATK x1000 each time it is flipped face-up. Once per turn you can flip this face-up card into face-down Defence Position.'' Jump Gardna ''When a monster on your side of the field is attacked, negate the attack and remove this monster from play, Special Summon this monster during your opponent's End Phase if it was removed from play by this card's effect.'' KY-Zero Just mentioning that this card is just too good enabling to draw 2 cards is just a huge +. Cards like these get banned in TCG. If Stardome Blader uses his effect to blow the whole field up, the synchro which would be summoned is blown up too. The other ones are too long, read some real TCG cards and try to figure it out [/quote] Oh, yeah, thank you for the fixes! ^^ About KY-Zero, how about if it's just 1 card you draw? I think there's quite a lot of monsters that allow you to do that~ And for Stardome Blader, I'm aware, that's why you can use its other effect to bring one Synchro monster from the Graveyard, and that's where the new Synchro would be. Thanks for the comments! Bump for more c & c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Susie Posted March 20, 2011 Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 Pics are awesome OCG errors are alot (as pointed out by maximum58) But other than that the cards are okay 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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HauntedShadow Posted March 22, 2011 Report Share Posted March 22, 2011 nice cards my fav is "Dark Magic Witch" as Maxim58 said some OCG errors although ill give these cards 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted March 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2011 [quote name='hunterzPYM' timestamp='1300808824' post='5089488'] nice cards my fav is "Dark Magic Witch" as Maxim58 said some OCG errors although ill give these cards 8.5/10 [/quote] any fixes? OP'd or UP'd? Suggestions, everything is appreciated :] sorry, I just like details~ if you or anyone's bored, please review? thanks again for the comment :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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