just some cards i made please tell me if they are good

[black death1]

this card is haveing trouble posting but here is its effect-Tanon

lure:When this monster is summoned you may summon "Tanoon". If "Tanoon" is destroyed this cards ATK is doubled and attacks your oppent directly it is destroyed at the end phase.

[img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/6600/198269x.jpg[/img]

lure:When ever you summon this card summon "Tanon" from your hand, graveyard, deck, or remove from play to your side of the field.

[img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/8080/198269q.jpg[/img]

lure:"Tanon"+ "Tanoon"
When this monster is fusion summoned summon the above fusion material monsters from the graveyard.If you have polermaztion, but "Tanon" + "Tanoon" are in the grave yard send polermaztion to the graveyard to return both cards to the field.

This card is also haveing trouble posting-Allan-Beast Human Form
lure:This card can be sacrificed to summon any form of "Allan". For the first turn this card is on the field it can not be attacked.

[img]http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/1683/198269.jpg[/img]

[Vediavis]

Interesting Concept and i like that your drew "Tanoon" but there are alot of OCG errors. So starting from the top going down...

1. When this monster is summoned [color="#FF0000"]successfully[/color] you may [color="#FF0000"]Special [/color]summon "Tanoon" [color="#FF0000"]from your hand or deck[/color]. If "Tanoon" is destroyed [color="#FF0000"]as a result of battle[/color] this cards ATK is doubled and attacks your [color="#FF0000"]opponent's life points[/color] directly[color="#FF0000"], and[/color] it is destroyed [color="#FF0000"]on your[/color] end phase.

2. Tanoon: When [color="#FF0000"]this card is successfully summoned, special summon one "Tanoon" from your hand, deck, or graveyard[/color] to your side of the field.

3. Allan - Beast form: "Tanon"+ "Tanoon"
When this monster is fusion summoned [color="#FF0000"]successfully, special[/color] summon the above fusion material monsters from the graveyard. If you have [color="#FF0000"][color="#0000FF"]polymerization[/color] in your hand, and you have two "Tanoon"s in your graveyard, discard [color="#0000FF"]polymerization[/color][/color] to the graveyard [color="#FF0000"]and special summon[/color] both cards to the field. Also, the picture needs a background.

4. The Dark Lord - Allan Human Form: needs a better picture.


These seem picky, and other commenters may say differently, but this will greatly help the OCG of the cards. Also, you may want to re-think the effect of Allan - Beast Form, it seems a little OP.