Wind Road Posted March 27, 2011 Report Share Posted March 27, 2011 WITH CARD MAKER UPLOADER ON THE FRITZ, IT TOOK ME 30 MINIUTES TO SEPERATLY UPLOAD THEESE! PLEASE APRICIATE THEM. [spoiler= Cover Card/Ultimate Rare (1)] [IMG]http://i808.photobucket.com/albums/zz8/gorbor25/001.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler] [spoiler= Ultra Rare Cards(2)] [IMG]http://i808.photobucket.com/albums/zz8/gorbor25/002.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i808.photobucket.com/albums/zz8/gorbor25/003.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler] [spoiler= Rare Cards (3)] [IMG]http://i808.photobucket.com/albums/zz8/gorbor25/004.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i808.photobucket.com/albums/zz8/gorbor25/005.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i808.photobucket.com/albums/zz8/gorbor25/006.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler] [spoiler= Commons(4)] [IMG]http://i808.photobucket.com/albums/zz8/gorbor25/007.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i808.photobucket.com/albums/zz8/gorbor25/008.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i808.photobucket.com/albums/zz8/gorbor25/009.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i808.photobucket.com/albums/zz8/gorbor25/010.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler] Someone please rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wind Road Posted March 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2011 I worked hard. Why does no one even look? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holofoil Posted March 30, 2011 Report Share Posted March 30, 2011 This is definitely an interesting series, there are just a few things that could be changed. 1: OCG. A lot of the card grammar seems off (not to mention, you misspelled "Loses" on Meteor Shower). Normal Summon, Special Summon, Set and Life Points should all be capitalized. Attack and Defence are always written as "ATK" and "DEF" on cards. The cards that deal damage to Life Points could use some tweaking, too. I've never seen a card that mentions an opponent "Losing Life Points", the cards always say "Inflict" or "Pay" whenever there's a decrease in Life Points. 2: Too much power. Why did you give Diamond so much power? If it were a level 5 monster, I could understand, but he's a level 3. Gravity Bind wouldn't even work on him. I noticed that I can Special Summon the card if I have two "Meteor" monsters on the field. Change the effect to "This card can only be Special Summoned while there are two "Meteor" monsters on your side of the field", and you should be good. Make sure to give him a higher level, too. Maybe a 5. 3: Attributes. Why don't any of the Meteor cards have Fire attributes? This doesn't have to be changed, I'm just asking out of curiousity. You did pretty well, just need to fix those few things. I give them a 6.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wind Road Posted March 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2011 I agree. Btw, i dont know why but diamond was ment to be a level 5. It dident work for some reason. Thanks for the review! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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