Sunn O))) Posted March 30, 2011 Report Share Posted March 30, 2011 [center] [Spoiler= Surtur] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9527/377080h.jpg[/img] 2 Tuners + 1 or more non-Tuner FIRE monsters You can remove 3 Fire monsters in your Graveyard from play to special summon this card from your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can pay 2000 Life Points to send 3 cards on the field to the Graveyard. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler= Ymir] [img]http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/994/377080.jpg[/img] 2 Tuners + 1 or more non-Tuner WATER monsters Once per turn, you can activate one of the following effects: ●Special Summon one WATER monster from your Graveyard to your opponent's side of the field and gain Life Points equal to its level x 300. ● Pay 2000 Life Points. Your opponent skips their next Draw Phase. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler= He, Who Ends The World] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/994/377080.jpg[/img] 2 DARK Tuners + Tiamat, the Destroyer Once per turn, destroy one card on the Field. Each time a monster is Summoned, place 1 Inferno Counter on this card (max. 5). When your opponent's monster declares an attack, you can remove one Inferno Counter on the Field to negate the attack. This card loses 500 ATK for every Inferno Counter on the Field. You can tribute this card to destroy cards on the Field equal to the number of Inferno Counters on it. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler= Tiamat, the Destroyer] [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/994/377080.jpg[/img] 1 DARK Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner FIRE monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned, place 3 Inferno Counters on it. This card loses 200 ATK and DEF for every Inferno Counter on it. Once per turn, you can remove 3 Inferno Counters from anywhere on the field to destroy 1 card your opponent [/Spoiler] [Spoiler= Attor] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/994/377080.jpg[/img] You can Special Summon from your Graveyard by removing 4 Inferno Counters from your side of the Field. This card gains 300 ATK for every Inferno Counter on the Field. When this card is removed from the Field, place 2 Inferno Counters on a monster you control. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler= Okenuth] [img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/994/377080.jpg[/img] When this card is Normal Summoned, place 1 Inferno Counter on it (max. 3). This card gains 300 ATK for each Inferno Counter on it. You can remove 3 Inferno Counters from this card to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. [/Spoiler] [/Center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GaeBulg Posted March 30, 2011 Report Share Posted March 30, 2011 3500 ATK is sort of alot for such an easy special summon. 2500-3000 atleast reminds me of a Uber Armor Exe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted March 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 bump...??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted March 31, 2011 Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 The first one is OP'ed. I would make its ATK less and take out the part of it being able to be re-summoned. The second one is OK but the price for your opponent to skip their draw phase is too high. Also I would lower its ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted March 31, 2011 Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 Fire one is overpowered. I've seen that pic 1000 times. Some OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted March 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 can you please point out the errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted March 31, 2011 Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 hmm... i'll be glad to correct your OCG errors. can you post the lores of the cards.. anyways the card you just made needs Double Tuning. so that's cool but Surtur is little OP'd ATk try 2500-3000 unless its hard to summon. Surtur's second effect is not a wise choice to be activated. if Surtur wants to be a good miller try a fixed number of what to send instead of paying that will just waste your LP. Ymir's 3rd effect sucks. try paying 2000 instead cause that will make the guy UP'd, or skip their entire turn instead. You can also remove Ymir's second effect cause Ymir already has a recover LP effect or vice versa and change it to a better effect like destroying cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted March 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 made some changes to the cards. added the lore of the cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted March 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 b u m p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.P3 Posted March 31, 2011 Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 [quote]3500 ATK is sort of alot for such an easy special summon. 2500-3000 atleast reminds me of a Uber Armor Exe [/quote] An attack can always be flawed, their are many possible ways to take down it's attack. What it needs is a down side effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 pmub Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vough Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Sultur - That artwork has been used a lot. Just saying. Also, it has a good cost for sending EXACTLY 3 cards to the graveyard, good effect. Ymir - it would be banned instantly. You cannot have an effect that can permanently stop your opponent's draw phase (because it is possible to gain more than 2000 Life Points per turn, ending in a lock). It needs to be changed or have a drawback, or else it is extremely OP'd Tiamat - I don't know why, but I think that the Inferno counters should go up to 6, or it would lose 600 ATK for each. Also, I think it should have more attack for something that hard to summon. Because 4 monsters -> 1 Synchro with 3000 Attack isn't really worth it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 The first is balanced, which people would realize if they actually stop playing Battle Ox. Second? The second effect is what makes it hell-no. Change it to, hmm...something like "Destroy 1 card on the field". Third is badass. Simply put badass. Love it. I would have thought you're a double account. Awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vough Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Attor - why? It's not powerful. It can only gain 1000 ATK overall, but would have 600 when summoned, and unless there is an advanced form of Tiamat which requires him as a tuner (Like a lvl12, which would be a really good idea in my opinion) then no one would use it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Remove the first clause in Attor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Tiamat looks useful but Stardust Dragon will be its main weakness. i suggest making the maximum counters 6 so you can destroy 6 monsters but the monster will be most likely to be destroyed by an attack. Like when your opponent Summons Junk Synchron (Tiamat's ATK - 2500) then Special Summons a Level 2 (Tiamat's ATK - 2000) Then Synchro Summons Junk Warrior (Tiamat's ATK - 1500) Then Boom! There goes Tiamat in the Graveyard. So much for the very hard Synchro-Material used. Try making the Synchro-Material needed for Tiamat a little easy. Then add Tiamat a little Negate ATK effect or Battle Protection from it. Attor is nice but like just said Tiamat cannot be kept in the field for long as it will be destroyed easily if its ATK keeps depleting each time your opponent keeps Summoning a monster. so overall 1st monster a little bad 2nd monster good enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 added 2 new cards, redid Tiamat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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