Effects of Interest

[lifespark]

I'm posting several of the better cards I've made(in my opinion), some I made long ago, and some I just made today. I haven't made very many, and before I started trying to make a whole set, I'd like to find out what I'm doing right, what I need to look out for, and what never to do again. It would be a great help if you could let me know what parts of the cards need reworded, or if any effects seem overpowered. (Some of the cards needed bullet points, for which I used 'o')

[spoiler=Older Creations]
[img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/4493/114484.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3676/114484x.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/7883/114484k.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/2949/114484u.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/4493/114484.jpg[/img]
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[spoiler=Cards made today]
[img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/5323/114484s.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/7753/114484g.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/8333/114484b.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/9362/114484l.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img848.imageshack.us/img848/4493/114484.jpg[/img]
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[Mecha Love]

I can't fix all the OCG's etc. but in some i'v noticed
1. use ca[pital letters for stuff like [b]N[/b]ormal [b]S[/b]ummon
2. Don't leave lines balnk (betrayel)
3. Whats with the [b]"o You"[/b]
Apart from that its an alright group of cards