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These monsters rely on buffing based on the field, and then cycling out to bring in stronger monsters while weakening your opponent's monsters and continually buffing themselves even more.

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Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Spell and Trap cards in your opponent's Graveyard x 400. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can destroy one Spell or Trap card on the field.

[img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: Decrease this card's ATK and DEF by 800 for each other card you control. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all other cards you control. This card cannot be targeted by Trap cards.

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Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your Graveyard x 300. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 card you control to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If your opponent only controls one monster, the ATK of that monster becomes 0 and it cannot attack.

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Lore: This card can only be Normal Summoned while you control no other monsters. If this card attacks your opponent's monster, destroy that monster after damage calculation and remove it from play.

[img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/6131/330696n.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of "Hopeless" cards in your Graveyard x 500. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can send 1 "Hopeless" monster from your deck to your graveyard.

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Lore: When this face-up card is attacked and destroyed by battle, you can remove it from play to Special Summon "Hopeless Symbiote" from your deck.

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Lore: During your Main Phase, if you control no monsters, you can remove from play this card in your graveyard to Special Summon one "Hopeless" monster from your hand.

[img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/1949/330696j.jpg[/img]

Lore: This monster's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x 800. This monster cannot attack unless you control another monster. If your opponent only controls one monster and this is the only monster you control, you can take control of that monster. If you do, it cannot attack.

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Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of monsters in your opponent's graveyard x 400. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, your opponent sends 1 monster from their deck to their Graveyard and it can't be Special Summoned while in the Graveyard.

[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/113/330696y.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of monsters you control x 1200. If this is the only monster you control, it can't be destroyed by battle. If your opponent controls more monsters than you, they cannot summon. If you control more monsters than your opponent, you cannot summon.

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Lore: When this card is Summoned, sacrifice it unless you remove from play one "Hopeless" monster from your hand. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon the monster removed from play by this card's effect. If this card is destroyed by battle, add the monster removed from play by this card's effect to your hand.

[img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards removed from play on both sides of the field x 800. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, remove it from play.

[img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/3927/330696g.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards your opponent controls x 500. If this card is destroyed by battle, equip it to the monster that destroyed it as an Equip Spell card. The equipped monster's ATK becomes 0 and it cannot attack.

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Lore: When this face-up card is attacked and destroyed by battle, you can remove it from play to Special Summon 1 "Hopeless Dragon" from your deck.

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Lore: Activate this card only when you control exactly 1 "Hopeless" monster and no other monsters. Destroy all cards on the field except for the "Hopeless" monster you control. You can't Normal or Special Summon or Set monsters the turn you activate this card.

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Lore: Reveal one Level 8 "Hopeless" monster from your hand and shuffle it into your deck. Then, add 1 Level 4 "Hopeless" monster from your deck to your hand, and draw 1 card.

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Lore: Tribute two Level 4 "Hopeless" monsters you control to Special Summon 1 Level 8 "Hopeless" monster from your hand or deck. Then, equip it with this card. When a monster equipped with this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 Level 4 "Hopeless" monster from your graveyard in face-up Attack Position.

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Lore: After activation, Special Summon this card in Defense Position; it is treated as an Effect Monster Card (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 8/ATK 0/DEF 3000). This card cannot attack. (This card is also still treated as a Trap Card.) When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 "Hopeless Sentry" from your deck.

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Lore: Activate this card when your opponent summons a monster and you control 1 or more "Hopeless" monsters. Discard 1 "Hopeless" card to destroy the summoned monster and remove it from play.

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Lore: Activate this card only when you control two or more "Hopeless" monsters. If you control less than two "Hopeless" monsters, this card is destroyed. Your opponent's monsters are switched to Defense Position and your opponent cannot activate Trap cards.

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[quote name='marioware2' timestamp='1301850313' post='5111258']
These monsters rely on buffing based on the field, and then cycling out to bring in stronger monsters while weakening your opponent's monsters and continually buffing themselves even more.

[center][Spoiler=Monsters]

[img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Spell and Trap cards in your opponent's Graveyard x 400. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can destroy one Spell or Trap card on the field.

[img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/5443/330696kf.jpg[/img]

Lore: Decrease this card's ATK and DEF by 800 for each other card you control. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all other cards you control. This card is unaffected by Trap cards.

[img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your Graveyard x 300. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 card you control to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If your opponent only controls one monster, the ATK of that monster becomes 0 and it cannot attack.

[img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card can only be Normal Summoned while you control no other monsters. If this card attacks your opponent's monster, destroy that monster after damage calculation and remove it from play.

[img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/6131/330696n.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of "Hopeless" cards in your Graveyard x 500. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can send 1 "Hopeless" monster from your deck to your graveyard.

[img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: When this face-up card is attacked and destroyed by battle, you can remove it from play to Special Summon "Hopeless Symbiote" from your deck.

[img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/6254/330696u.jpg[/img]

Lore: During your Main Phase, if you control no monsters, you can remove from play this card in your graveyard to Special Summon one "Hopeless" monster from your hand.

[img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/2826/330696o.jpg[/img]

Lore: This monster's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x 800. This monster cannot attack unless you control another monster. If your opponent only controls one monster, you can take control of that monster. If you do, it cannot attack.

[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/4266/330696l.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of monsters in your opponent's graveyard x 400. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, your opponent sends 1 monster from their deck to their Graveyard and it can't be Special Summoned while in the Graveyard.

[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/113/330696y.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of monsters you control x 1200. If this is the only monster you control, it can't be destroyed by battle. If your opponent controls more monsters than you, they cannot summon. If you control more monsters than your opponent, you cannot summon.

[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/2661/330696i.jpg[/img]

Lore: When this card is Summoned, sacrifice it unless you remove from play one "Hopeless" monster from your hand. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon the monster removed from play by this card's effect. If this card is destroyed by battle, add the monster removed from play by this card's effect to your hand.

[img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards removed from play on both sides of the field x 800. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, remove it from play.

[img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/3927/330696g.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards your opponent controls x 500. If this card is destroyed by battle, equip it to the monster that destroyed it as an Equip Spell card. The equipped monster's ATK becomes 0 and it cannot attack.

[img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/8292/330696e.jpg[/img]

Lore: When this face-up card is attacked and destroyed by battle, you can remove it from play to Special Summon 1 "Hopeless Dragon" from your deck.

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[img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/2826/330696o.jpg[/img]

Lore: Activate this card only when you control exactly 1 "Hopeless" monster and no other monsters. Destroy all cards on the field except for the "Hopeless" monster you control. You can't Normal or Special Summon the turn you activate this card.

[img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/25/330696m.jpg[/img]

Lore: Reveal one Level 8 "Hopeless" monster from your hand and shuffle it into your deck. Then, add 1 Level 4 "Hopeless" monster from your deck to your hand, and draw 1 card.

[img]http://img541.imageshack.us/img541/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: Tribute two Level 4 "Hopeless" monsters you control to Special Summon 1 Level 8 "Hopeless" monster from your hand or deck. Then, equip it with this card. When a monster equipped with this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 Level 4 "Hopeless" monster from your graveyard in face-up Attack Position.

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[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: After activation, Special Summon this card in Defense Position; it is treated as an Effect Monster Card (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 8/ATK 0/DEF 3000). This card cannot attack. (This card is also still treated as a Trap Card.) When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 "Hopeless Sentry" from your deck.

[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/4378/330696f.jpg[/img]

Lore: Activate this card when your opponent summons a monster and you control 1 or more "Hopeless" monsters. Destroy the summoned monster and remove it from play.

[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/8292/330696e.jpg[/img]

Lore: Activate this card only when you control two or more "Hopeless" monsters. If you control less than two "Hopeless" monsters, this card is destroyed. Your opponent's monsters are switched to Defense Position and your opponent cannot activate Trap cards.

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Any ratings, comments and criticism is greatly appreciated! Thanks!
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[quote name='marioware2' timestamp='1301850313' post='5111258']
These monsters rely on buffing based on the field, and then cycling out to bring in stronger monsters while weakening your opponent's monsters and continually buffing themselves even more.

[center][Spoiler=Monsters]

[img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Spell and Trap cards in your opponent's Graveyard x 400. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can destroy one Spell or Trap card on the field.

[img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/5443/330696kf.jpg[/img]

Lore: Decrease this card's ATK and DEF by 800 for each other card you control. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all other cards you control. This card is unaffected by Trap cards.

[img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your Graveyard x 300. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 card you control to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If your opponent only controls one monster, the ATK of that monster becomes 0 and it cannot attack.

[img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card can only be Normal Summoned while you control no other monsters. If this card attacks your opponent's monster, destroy that monster after damage calculation and remove it from play.

[img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/6131/330696n.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of "Hopeless" cards in your Graveyard x 500. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can send 1 "Hopeless" monster from your deck to your graveyard.

[img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: When this face-up card is attacked and destroyed by battle, you can remove it from play to Special Summon "Hopeless Symbiote" from your deck.

[img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/6254/330696u.jpg[/img]

Lore: During your Main Phase, if you control no monsters, you can remove from play this card in your graveyard to Special Summon one "Hopeless" monster from your hand.

[img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/2826/330696o.jpg[/img]

Lore: This monster's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x 800. This monster cannot attack unless you control another monster. If your opponent only controls one monster, you can take control of that monster. If you do, it cannot attack.

[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/4266/330696l.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of monsters in your opponent's graveyard x 400. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, your opponent sends 1 monster from their deck to their Graveyard and it can't be Special Summoned while in the Graveyard.

[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/113/330696y.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of monsters you control x 1200. If this is the only monster you control, it can't be destroyed by battle. If your opponent controls more monsters than you, they cannot summon. If you control more monsters than your opponent, you cannot summon.

[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/2661/330696i.jpg[/img]

Lore: When this card is Summoned, sacrifice it unless you remove from play one "Hopeless" monster from your hand. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon the monster removed from play by this card's effect. If this card is destroyed by battle, add the monster removed from play by this card's effect to your hand.

[img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards removed from play on both sides of the field x 800. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, remove it from play.

[img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/3927/330696g.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards your opponent controls x 500. If this card is destroyed by battle, equip it to the monster that destroyed it as an Equip Spell card. The equipped monster's ATK becomes 0 and it cannot attack.

[img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/8292/330696e.jpg[/img]

Lore: When this face-up card is attacked and destroyed by battle, you can remove it from play to Special Summon 1 "Hopeless Dragon" from your deck.

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[Spoiler=Spells]

[img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/2826/330696o.jpg[/img]

Lore: Activate this card only when you control exactly 1 "Hopeless" monster and no other monsters. Destroy all cards on the field except for the "Hopeless" monster you control. You can't Normal or Special Summon the turn you activate this card.

[img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/25/330696m.jpg[/img]

Lore: Reveal one Level 8 "Hopeless" monster from your hand and shuffle it into your deck. Then, add 1 Level 4 "Hopeless" monster from your deck to your hand, and draw 1 card.

[img]http://img541.imageshack.us/img541/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: Tribute two Level 4 "Hopeless" monsters you control to Special Summon 1 Level 8 "Hopeless" monster from your hand or deck. Then, equip it with this card. When a monster equipped with this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 Level 4 "Hopeless" monster from your graveyard in face-up Attack Position.

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[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/576/330696.jpg[/img]

Lore: After activation, Special Summon this card in Defense Position; it is treated as an Effect Monster Card (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 8/ATK 0/DEF 3000). This card cannot attack. (This card is also still treated as a Trap Card.) When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 "Hopeless Sentry" from your deck.

[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/4378/330696f.jpg[/img]

Lore: Activate this card when your opponent summons a monster and you control 1 or more "Hopeless" monsters. Destroy the summoned monster and remove it from play.

[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/8292/330696e.jpg[/img]

Lore: Activate this card only when you control two or more "Hopeless" monsters. If you control less than two "Hopeless" monsters, this card is destroyed. Your opponent's monsters are switched to Defense Position and your opponent cannot activate Trap cards.

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Any ratings, comments and criticism is greatly appreciated! Thanks!
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I...am impressed. Little OCG errors, good effects, although a couple are a bit OP'd...overall, though, some of the best work I've seen by new members.

Executioner's ATK seems high, even though it can only be summoned alone...I'd say it should have 2000 or 1900.

Doomkaiser is...epic. I'd say just it can't be targeted, as it's an instant 4000 beater with Reborn. It isn't bad, though.

About Marionette, problem:If your opponent has only one monster, and you steal it, if they summon a monster, it'll instantly get stolen...

Nightmare should probably prevent you from setting monsters also.

And Destiny...HOLY SHITAKI MUSHROOMS, GIVE IT A COST, IT'S BROKEN

Overall, though, 9.5/10. I saw several cards here that are very well designed.
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[quote name='Kikoutei Penguin Infinity' timestamp='1301866640' post='5112186']
I...am impressed. Little OCG errors, good effects, although a couple are a bit OP'd...overall, though, some of the best work I've seen by new members.

Executioner's ATK seems high, even though it can only be summoned alone...I'd say it should have 2000 or 1900.

Doomkaiser is...epic. I'd say just it can't be targeted, as it's an instant 4000 beater with Reborn. It isn't bad, though.

About Marionette, problem:If your opponent has only one monster, and you steal it, if they summon a monster, it'll instantly get stolen...

Nightmare should probably prevent you from setting monsters also.

And Destiny...HOLY SHITAKI MUSHROOMS, GIVE IT A COST, IT'S BROKEN

Overall, though, 9.5/10. I saw several cards here that are very well designed.
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i agree with him some adjustments are required 008.090/100.000 until errors have been made
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