New Trap Card ~ Come Take A Look

[·Toot]

[center][img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/1194/242084l.jpg[/img][/center][center][quote][color="#000080"]You can only activate this during your opponent's Battle Phase. When your opponent selects 1 of your monsters as an attack target, you can switch it to a direct attack and draw 1 card. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, destroy all monsters on the field and both players take damage equal to the number of destroyed monsters x300.[/color][/quote][/center][center]
[/center][center]How Is It?[/center][center]OCG Fixes Appreciated.[/center][center]I Give Reps For Constructive Feedback.[/center]

[Blake]

[img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20070417031208/yugioh/images/thumb/3/3a/AstralBarrierDR3-EN-C-UE.jpg/300px-AstralBarrierDR3-EN-C-UE.jpg[/img]

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I think the first sentence is unneeded.

Overpowered.

Unoriginal.

You get to draw 2 for taking a direct hit, then you can MST this to just give yourself an Open field, monster-wise? 300 Damage, each, is nothing.

If this is paired up as Astral Barrier is, then it is even worse. Not that anyone in their right mind would do it, but you can still spring it.

It's Dark Hole + Astral Barrier + Draw 2.

2/10

[xzMasteRzx]

E-e-e-epic!!!! Nice OCG and superb picture choice. Now what I don't like is the draw effect. I think you should limit it to 1 card. The reasoen is that you already take damage and you deal damage to both players when it's gone. Having 2 cards would give you a turn advantage as well. However, this is suggested. It just deosn't feel right to me. Great card though.

Score: 10/10

[unbreakerable]

all around epic! i love the effect,but were did you get that pic?!

[·Toot]

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[img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20070417031208/yugioh/images/thumb/3/3a/AstralBarrierDR3-EN-C-UE.jpg/300px-AstralBarrierDR3-EN-C-UE.jpg[/img]

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I think the first sentence is unneeded.

Overpowered.

Unoriginal.

You get to draw 2 for taking a direct hit, then you can MST this to just give yourself an Open field, monster-wise? 300 Damage, each, is nothing.

If this is paired up as Astral Barrier is, then it is even worse. Not that anyone in their right mind would do it, but you can still spring it.

It's Dark Hole + Astral Barrier + Draw 2.

2/10
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god dammit
how the hell did i forget about that lol but thnx for the fb

[judedudemude]

first activate swift maneuver then activate draining sheild then activate metal reflect slime

a winning combo of awesomeness

for refence : http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Draining_Shield
for refence : http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Metal_Reflect_Slime

[·Toot]

lol yeah
that works with this as well
just making it way more Op'ed
you gain lp and draw 2 cards
you hate me in that duel

imma go change it to draw 1 card

okay i fixed it xD

[Anbu-of-Sand]

Eh....I'm not really liking it. Sure you can get a draw out of it, but in the end, when you take a decent chunk of direct damage, and end up being on the bridge of losing due to it's final burn effect, would all those draws be worth it? Sure you can counter those direct attacks in many ways, but still. I say make the last effect so it just effects your opponents Life Points, and not yours. Maybe even make the damage you take through direct attacks through this effect halved. For now, like I said before, not really liking it. Sure like I also said before, free draws, but, would it be really worth it in the end? Maybe, if you can add an effect that lets you send it to the Graveyard at any time...

[Vough]

First effect is good because it is exploitable, but not easily done. Second effect, way too overpowered. Free Dark Hole just by MST'ing it. Tone it down a bit.

No OCG that I see.

[·Toot]

lol thnx for the feedback guys