CMRenji Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 [center][b]Here's a new card of mine. Trying to think outside of the box just a little bit. Image credit once again goes to Jazin Kay's awesome archive. [img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/539/145730.jpg[/img] [i]Lore: When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, the Monster Card Zone the destroyed monster was in cannot be used as long as this card remains face-up on the field. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap card your opponent controls. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack this turn.[/i] Rates and Comments are very much appreciated.[/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marioware2 Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 [i]Lore: When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, the Monster Card Zone the destroyed monster was in cannot be used as long as this card remains face-up on the field. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap card your opponent controls. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack this turn.[/i] That's how it should read. I like the effect, and it can be potentially shut down. But I still wouldn't feel safe offering two tributes for it, especially because it only has 2100 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 I think it is good. It is a nice shut down ability and to get rid of those mysterious face-down cards. i would though post the lore underneath the card because it borders on the line of not being able to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted April 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 [b]@marioware2- Thanks for the OCG fix. Edited. @Talos the Wind Ninja- Thanks for the comment. I've added lore below the card.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 [quote name='Lieutenant Renji' timestamp='1302321230' post='5124233'] [b]@marioware2- Thanks for the OCG fix. Edited. @Talos the Wind Ninja- Thanks for the comment. I've added lore below the card.[/b] [/quote] No problem. I am glad to see you are back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marioware2 Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 No problem. I really like the idea behind this card though. There are few cards that shut down zones, short of Ground Collapse and Ojamas, so it's nice to see a monster with a unique effect like this. I also like the secondary effect, as it helps to get rid of nasty fields or royal decrees, or anything of the like. My only critique is that it's still quite weak for a two tribute monster. I would suggest either boosting its ATK or taking it down a star. I give it a 9.5/10 though because I really like the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 [quote name='marioware2' timestamp='1302323742' post='5124348'] No problem. I really like the idea behind this card though. There are few cards that shut down zones, short of Ground Collapse and Ojamas, so it's nice to see a monster with a unique effect like this. I also like the secondary effect, as it helps to get rid of nasty fields or royal decrees, or anything of the like. My only critique is that it's still quite weak for a two tribute monster. I would suggest either boosting its ATK or taking it down a star. I give it a 9.5/10 though because I really like the card. [/quote] Yeah maybe boosts its attack a little, by like 200 points but not more. Its effect more than makes up for low ATK points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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