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sorry about the last post. rest assured it will not happen again. on a brighter note though the earthbound is finished here it is [img]http://img541.imageshack.us/img541/475/125705.jpg[/img] LORE: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card attacks a your opponent you may activate one of the following effects:●Discard two random Cards from you opponent's hand.●your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap cards untill the end of the damege step. well thats it feel free to rate, criticize,and comment this card.
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Nice card. OCG could use a fix, though. Strikethrough is things you should take out, bold is things that need to be changed.

There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card attacks [s]a[/s] your opponent you may activate one of the following effects: ●Discard two random [b]cards[/b] from you[b]r[/b] opponent's hand. ●[b]Y[/b]our opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap cards until[s]l[/s] the end of the [b]damage[/b] step.

If you follow the changes, it gets a 8/10 from this corner.
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^ Above poster doesn't know how to play the game.

I can truly swear, that if this was released, this will be the most broken EI. See, if you run Battle Ox you'll never know the logic of the localized. If they have the chance, good duelists attack with Spirit Reaper despite the consequences. Hand advantage isn't everything, but given -2's for your opponent each turn is an amazingly OP effect, this isn't really what I'd call a card. Thestalos is used for a reason.

So fix it to only -1. [i]Then[/i] it's perfectly fine.
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[quote name='Carn13' timestamp='1302398769' post='5126674']
Nice card. OCG could use a fix, though. Strikethrough is things you should take out, bold is things that need to be changed.

There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card attacks [s]a[/s] your opponent you may activate one of the following effects: ●Discard two random [b]cards[/b] from you[b]r[/b] opponent's hand. ●[b]Y[/b]our opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap cards until[s]l[/s] the end of the [b]damage[/b] step.

If you follow the changes, it gets a 8/10 from this corner.
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well i changed the effect [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/475/125705.jpg[/img] LORE: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card attacks a your opponent you may activate one of the following effects:●Discard two random cards from your opponent's hand.●Your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap cards untill the end of the damage step. thanks for the comment!
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ok, let's have a look at the modified effect

OCG correction is up already, so I'll skip that

I find 2300 atk a bit low for lv10, I'd have made it 3000. All EIs are OPed anyway

Though for the 2 effect options I'm unsure if you want to change it to it attacking your opponent directly for that or not

8/10
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[quote name='Darkplant' timestamp='1302404119' post='5126962']
...Um, did you even care to listen?
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sorry i didn't see your post until after the OCG fix post. ok here it is(lets hope third times the charm). [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/3131/125705t.jpg[/img] LORE: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card attacks a your opponent you may activate one of the following effects:●Discard one random cards from your opponent's hand.●Your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap cards untill the end of the damage step.
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[quote name='Darkplant' timestamp='1302404770' post='5126992']
Somebody needs to learn their Yugiohs before commenting.
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This. While the EI's where pretty good in the anime, they absolutely suck in real life. Due to the fact that Speed World 2/Speed world couldn't be destroyed, the EI's could just stay on the field no matter what. In real life, your opponent destroys your field spell for a -4 if you count the cards used to even play the EI. If common sense doesn't hit you like a brick with saying they are overpowered, you need to stop watching the anime and play the real game.
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As for your card;

+1 Nice artwork, But I must ask...Did you get it from google?
+1 Nice OCG.
-1 Strange thread layout.
-1 Hard to play in the real world.

Becuase I'm slightly lazy, I'll say your card is brilliant, and leave it at that. :)

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I (personally) feel like an EI is weak if it can't 3-hit your opponent. I like your effects, though. The -1 to the hand is REALLY nice (take it from a Spirit Reaper abuser) and when you're dealing the final blow, protection from D. Prison and Mirror Force can save you the game. As far as OCG goes, it's quite good, although "damage step" should be "Damage Step". Overall, very well-rounded, albeit a little bit on the weak side, offensively. Maybe 2700 ATK would do.
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