Lets explore Crashtown [PG13?]

[Toffee.]

I'm not going to tell you the plot to this fanfic, because I want you guys to try and figure it out as the story goes on. Though I will tell you that it mostly takes place in Crashtown, and everyone is a cowboy and tries to win via F/OTKs. Boring as it may seem, but that's the nature of Crashtown.

EXPECT MASS CHEESY-NESS AND REDUNDANT JOKES.

[spoiler=Episode 1 - Armadilloz wrote this]
This fic opens with a very simple, "Finally made it! Crashtown!" line.. Our main hero had arrived, with much anticipation, to his desired location. "But first, I need a drink", he said, as he proceeds to walk into [i]The Classy Ass[/i], and has a seat at the front bar table.
Marik, the bar tender, greets our hero with: "Howdy! The names Marik, what can I get fer ya'?". Our hero, who is obviously thirsty, ask the bar tender if he has any [i]orange juice[/i]. Marik tells our hero that he might have some around here. In a completely shocked manner, the guy next to him turns around, and proceeds to yell "THE HELL IS WRONG WIT YOU, BOI!?", with a rather drunk tone. Our hero, all polite and junk, responds with a very simple "What? A man cant order what he wants?(Even if doesnt make sense for the surroundings)" Drunk Customer, who is now in a raged frenzy, is all: "YER IN A BAR, DAMIT. HAVE YERSELF A [s]cactus juice[/s]BEER N' GET DRUNK LIEK THE REST OF US- *hic*". Marik, who is now trying not to get involved, hands our hero his OJ. Hero-dude drinks it down, all refreshed and ready to go, calmly says: "Ahhh... that hit the spot". Drunk-frenzied-customer, who is now pooling with rage over such a ridiculous visitor, is now angrily yelling "AWRIGHT, I CHALLENGE YER ASS TO A DUEL!", while also pointing at him, and trying to get Hero-Guy all riled up. But no, Hero-Guy keeps his cool and respondes by saying "Over my beverage choice?". Marik looks a little confused, so do the other bar-goers. Drunk-Customer is now determined to "beat" our hero in a game of Yugimonz, and is all: "YE, SUMTHIN LIEK THAT! NOW GET YER ASS OUTSIDE SO WE CAN SETTLE THIS LIEK REAL MEN-", and of course, finishes his statement with a loud burp. Hero-guy is now starting to sound a little annoyed, while still trying to ignore this drunk, asks Marik-the-bartender if he could please remove this drunk from the establishment. Marik sighs, and explains that Mr.Drunk-Pants is actually one of his best customers, and would rather not upset any of his profits. Hero-Dude sighs, and does a semi-facepalm, and agrees with "[i]OF COURSE[/i] hes your best customer...". Hero dude, realizing this is going to be a long day, gets up off his seat and is all "Alright, fine. If you want to duel me [i]THAT[/i] badlly, then lets just get on with it".
Outside, both Hero and Mr.Drunk are standing in the middle of the town, waiting for the sun to hit the horizon line like any other typical Crashtown duel would go. But our hero plays a little differently, by simply saying "Look, I know you guys are all about 'coolness' with your wait-until-the-sun-is-down gimmick-", by this point he already has his duel disk activated and proceeds to draw 5 cards, [i]forcing[/i] a 1st turn by our Hero, and proceeds to make a "But this is a really pointless reason to duel someone." comment twords Drunk-customer. To our surprise, customer-guy isn't [i]THAT[/i] drunk, as he replys with "THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU, BOI. YER SUPPOSED TO DO THIS [i]OUR[/i] WAY."(Implying that the 'quickdraw' thing was customary). Our hero, who is now having fun with this idea, and wanting to poke fun at his opponent, is all "To be honest, it just seems a little redundant. Besides, I figured you were in a hurry to get back to the bar!", poking fun at his rude opponent. Drunk-Dude is now all: "GRRRRR... HEY, WUTS YER REAL NAME ANYWAY!" Hero-guy reveals his name with a short, but serious sounding- "They call me Jack"-line. (NO, HES NOT JACK ATLAS) Drunk Customer now reveals that his name is Bently, and he will be the one to defeat Jack, in a very self-confident manner. Earlier, Marik had closed down the tavern, for a bit, as whenever a duel is about to start, everything closes up until the "business outside" is finished. Again, its customary. Plus, Marik was interested in watching this battle. Marik asks Jack why hes "playing allong" with this "charade". Jack, who is all serious-mode now, makes a comment to Marik that Bently is apparently his "best customer", and is now curious to see how good he is in a duel.
Since this duel didnt really start off as its usually supposed to go, Jack and Bently both yell "DUEL!!" as their respective Lifepoint counters are set to 4000. Bently attempt to draw to go first, but Jack was already holding 6 cards in his hand and proceeds to take his turn accordingly. Jack's opening dialog is: "First off, I pay 1000 Lifepoints to activate Ghost Fire." (Jack runs a deck [url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/244505-because-darkpyros-dont-exist/]full of Pokemon[/url], by the way...)
*3000/4000*
Jack tells Bently that this card lets him Summon a Litmoshi from his deck, and at that time, he can then send a DARK/Pyro monster from his deck to the Graveyard, so he choses Spider Wisp. The Summoned Litmoshi appeared on Jack's field, in a very erratic manner, jumping all over the place. Jack then declares that when a Litmoshi is Summoned, his Opponent takes 800 damage. A small bit of fire explodes around Bently's feet, as his lifepoints reduce by 800.
*3000/3200*
Bently yells out "IS THAT ALL YOU GOT!?", and Jack replys with: "You would think, but no. I activate the effect of my Litmoshi, which lets me tribute itself to add a Litmoshi from my deck to my hand". Jack's Litmoshi suddenly melts in a ball of fire. Jack then tells Bently that when Litmoshi uses this effect, he can add a copy of Litmoshi from his deck to his hand. Jack proceeds to activate a copy of Small Fire, which allows him to reveal a Litmoshi in his hand to Summon a copy of it from his deck. Another Litmoshi appears on Jack's field, in a manner similar to the first one, except appears to have a sinister look in its face, as if to tell his opponent that hes pretty much doomed. Jack tells Bently that he loses another 800. And with that, more hologram-projected-fire deals more damage.
*3000/2400*
Jack now removes the Litmoshi from his field, and says that hes Tributing his monster to Advance Summon a Burtlamp. Jack explains that Burtlamp, which has similar powers to Litmoshi, tells Bently that he now loses 1000 damage.
Burtlamp now appears on Jack's field, taking the form of the kind of lamp you would see in old western movies. And it proceeds to create a fireball and throw it at Bently.
*3000/1400*
Bently replys with "Grrr... Cheap shot". Jack sets 2 spell/traps, and ends his turn. Bently's opening dialog is "Awright, my turn....", sounding a little concerned about his Lifepoints, tells Jack that hes going to Summon a monster known as Power Barrel in attack mode(made up card, by the way). Bently declares that hes going too use his Barrel's effect, but Jack just now revealed 1 of his set cards, and declares: "I declare game!". Bently, all confused, asks Jack to explain why. Jack explains that the card he used activated is called Will-O-Wisp, and it lets him tribute his lamp to also destroy Bently's monster and inflict 800 damage at the same time. Burtlamp then bursts into a fireball, and then rushes at Power Barrel, destroying itself and Bently's monster, while also phazing through Bently before disappearing.
*3000/600*
Jack now explains that since Burtlamp was removed from the field after being Normal Summoned, it lets him revive a Litmoshi from his Graveyard. The Litmoshi now appears on jack's field, sticking it's tongue out at Bently, proceeds to throw a wad of fire in Bently;s direction
*3000/0*
Jack done of those typical victory-points at Bently, and says "Thats game!". Bently walks off in a huff, mumbling about how he lost in such a ridiculous manner(he went home, really). Marik comments that it was "surprising" that Jack OTK'd his opponent, in a sarcastic manner(despite it taking 2 turns). Jack replys by saying: "Might as well, really... I mean aren't OTKs apparently a staple for this place?" Marik just says: "Meh, I guess so...". Seeing as its still daylight, and people are now getting everything back in order as the duel finished, Marik decides to open his tavern again(Its all for the profit anyway...). Jack comments that Crashtown seems pretty fun, and that he might stay longer then he planned. He says bye to Marik, as he walks off looking for a place to stay.
Episode 1 ends here[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Episode 2 - Hotel Mario]
Despite Crashtown appearing small on the outside, its actually quite large once you actually enter the place. Our hero, err... Jack as hes now know as, is doing a bit of wandering through the town to try and decide where to find a place to stay. "Pretty interesting how they have a flower shop in this [i]barren desert[/i]" he said to himself, as he stopped to notice the local flower shop, and then continued on his way. Though he didn't really get far, as the Inn was apparently right next door to said flower shop. As Jack walked inside, he noticed that the manager had a stack of cards right on his desk. "Let me guess, I have to [i]duel[/i] you in order to get a room, right", Jack said. "What? No." The manager turned around, without finishing his current task of filing random papers. "These are actually room keys!", said the manager. "Sure... lets go with that", Jack replied, "So, can I get a room here?" he added. "Well we are a little tight on room, so I hope you don't mind having to share a room" the manager said, as he handed Jack a room-card. "Alright, room 4 on the 2nd floor" Jack said to himself as he was heading up to his rooom. As Jack proceeded to enter his room, he noticed his rather short-looking room-mate was typing up a lot of stuff on his laptop. "OAHI!! The names Rex!", said his new room-mate. "The names Jack", Jack replied, as he walk over to the other side of the room to place his 'junk' accordingly on his side of the room. "So, what-cha' got there on your laptop?" said Jack, all interested-like. "Oh, just some weird blueprints for [i]another[/i] D-Wheel..." Rex said, sounding a little disappointed. "Another?" questioned Jack. "Yea.... See, the other day while I was at the parts store up in the mountains getting some repairs done to my D-Wheel, the mechanics there said the work would take about 24 hours, and I should come back for it later." Red said. "And.... ?" Jack replied. "By the time I got my D-Wheel back to my place, it's engine started smoking, and when I went to see what was wrong with it, it's Its E56 entire engine had been completely swapped with an outdated E24 engine" Rex added. "Well didn't you get the engine back?" Jack asked. "Well they said unless I can beat them, they are keeping the engine", said Rex. "YEP, SAW IT COMING." Jack rudely interrupted. Rex did a heavy sigh, and Jack apologized for his random comment. Rex said "Truth is, I'm terrible at dueling. I'm more of a computer person rather then a card player...". Jack sighed, and said "Alright, seems I have to go play hero now...". "Hey, do you have any way to get up there quickly?" Rex asked. "Thing is, I left my D-Wheel at home. I figured I wouldn't need it." replied Jack. "Then use the one I have" said Rex, "Though it will only really has enough power to make it up the mountain", he added. "Then tomorrow, I start my mountain climbing adventure!", Jack declared. It was getting late, and Jack was all tired and junk. So Jack called it a day before he could start this new 'quest' of his.
Episode 2 ends there, as the whole "get-back-the-stolen-engine" might take a while for me to figure out how I want to write it.[/spoiler]

[Dementuo]

Script formatting ain't allowed.

The fic itself is a good start, though.

And does this mean Kiryu is going to be a character?

[Toffee.]

[quote name='Dementuo' timestamp='1302484332' post='5129654']
Script formatting ain't allowed.[/quote]
What, you mean adding colors?
I only did that until the characters revealed their names, and to not get the reader confused as to who was who.
But now that we know our cast so far, I dont need to do that anymore.

[quote name='Dementuo' timestamp='1302484332' post='5129654']The fic itself is a good start, though.[/quote]
I'm trying to make it serious, this time.

[quote name='Dementuo' timestamp='1302484332' post='5129654']And does this mean Kiryu is going to be a character?
[/quote]
Originally I was going to say this fic takes place a few years after 5Ds, but that would kill the fun.
I guess Kiryu could get a cameo... Maybe..... I dunno' yet.

[Mysty]

[quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1302497484' post='5130091']
What, you mean adding colors?
[/quote]

No, he means the actual format of a script is banned. Read the rules.

[quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1302497484' post='5130091']
I only did that until the characters revealed their names, and to not get the reader confused as to who was who.
But now that we know our cast so far, I dont need to do that anymore.
[/quote]

Just describe the characters look like and write the dialogue in paragraph format. If you describe each character distinctly, people won't be confused about who is who.

[Toffee.]

[quote name='Mystery Guest' timestamp='1302533207' post='5130689']
No, he means the actual format of a script is banned. Read the rules.
[/quote]
I was dumb, and missing the clear-as-day rules thread.
Anyway, I fixed it up now.

[Toffee.]

Episode 2 now exists. It seems a little short, yea, but it sets up for episode 3, which shows a major plot device in it. So I plan to make up for it.