Matt -§ Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 [center][font="Trebuchet MS"]Hey people, this is my first released card. Another member on here showed me how to make cards so i hope i got it good. Dont be rude if it's not that good >< i can be rude back btw. So here it is, tell me what you think: [img]http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/9682/emboar2.png[/img] [u]Effect:[/u] When your Life Points is 3000 or below, you can toss a coin. If Heads, discard 1 card from your hand. If Tails, this card's ATK is increased by 300. If your Life Points is 2000 or below when this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, gain 500 Life Points.[/font][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGS BLOOD MON3Y Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 This is really good and I love the Pic 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myst Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 Copy and paste the effect into your thread. Remember this so people can fix your OCG (Official Card Grammar). This should be Pyro-Type. There's some OCG errors, I'll fix it when you post the lore up. This is a good start to your YCM Career! Keep this up and you'll be fine here. Oh, and welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 whoa good first attempt! mine looked like crap ROFL good effect. couple changes. [b]When you have less then 3000[/b] not 3000 or less If [b]it's[/b] heads. otherwise great job!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkwolf777 Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 [quote name='sgrug4' timestamp='1303140929' post='5148620'] [b]When you have less then 3000[/b] not 3000 or less [/quote] Dude, there's a difference between "less than 3000" and "having 3000 or less". What you put in bold does not include 3000. Less than 3000: < 3000 3000 or less: <= 3000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt -§ Posted April 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 @darkwolf= exactly! @solicity= ill put the effect up right away (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted April 19, 2011 Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 i figured 3000 is too high x.o BTW u cap. tails but not heads lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt -§ Posted April 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 well i wanted to include 3000 so theres no mistake there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MartMaemees Posted April 19, 2011 Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 Nice card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myst Posted April 19, 2011 Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 I'll fix your OCG now. When you[b]r Life Points is 3000 or below[/b], you [b]can toss[/b] a coin. If Heads, discard 1 card from your hand. If Tails, this [b]card[/b]'s ATK is increased by 300. If your [b]Life Points is 2000 or below[/b] when this [b]card[/b] is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, gain 500 Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt -§ Posted April 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 @MartMaemees: thanks (: @Solicity: thanks for the fix ^^ i'll change it right away and try to do better next time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I_Dont_Care Posted April 19, 2011 Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 Decent for your first card, you also learned an important lesson, making a Pokemon based card is almost guaranteed to get you replies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sempaisama Posted April 19, 2011 Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 Nice first card, see that you makes some balanced cards, dont make them too powerful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt -§ Posted April 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 @Idontcare: thankies haha. and yeah well thats what im seeing right now @zorro: thanks and ill try not to! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted April 19, 2011 Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 [quote name='I_Dont_Care' timestamp='1303231694' post='5151752'] Decent for your first card, you also learned an important lesson, making a Pokemon based card is almost guaranteed to get you replies. [/quote] ...unless you are me, in that case you (or i) won't get replies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iaashadow Posted April 19, 2011 Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 Like it! 3000 is a bit too high. 2600? mabye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt -§ Posted April 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 @iaashadow: well you can lose 3000 Life Points really fast you know.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGS BLOOD MON3Y Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 Thats so true lol but it is kinda high. I guess it depends on the situation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reborn11 Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 Well,this card can be used in different situations : 1.4000 life points duel : When you take damage,normal damage 2.8000 life points duel : You're cornered *gulp* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt -§ Posted April 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 well i was thinking of an 8000 Life Points duel when i made that card, since i always play 8000 LP duels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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