the witch king of angmra Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 [img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/5707/377535.jpg[/img] Tuner + 1 or more Non-tuner monster Once per turn, by sending 1 dark monster from your hand to the graveyard,destroy 1 spell or trap card your opponet controls.if this card is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the graveyard,special summon it from your graveyard during the next turns standby phase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 Once per turn, by sending 1 DARK Type Monster from your hand to the graveyard, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. When this card is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the graveyard, Special Summon it on your field during your next Standby Phase. Why is Dragon, DRAGON? Well.... its rather plain. Simple again seen effect. Nothing special 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 Agreed with hollow. Also pic is bad. Just inverted colours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 You could also change the rarity, since the name isn't cleary seen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niv-Mizzet Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 But overall, as I can read the entire thing, and a few capitalization errors, which I will point out, I like it. Fixes: DRAGON: Dragon Tuner (at the start of the effect): 1 Tuner Non-tuner: non-Tuner dark, graveard, spell, trap, standby phase: All should be capitalized 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 REALLY? Where is my Suicide rope at this time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Once per turn, [b]you can send [/b]1 DARK [s]Type[/s] [b]m[/b]onster from your hand to the graveyard, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. When this card is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the graveyard, Special Summon it on [b]your side of the[/b] field during your next Standby Phase. ok i just corrected White Hallow's OCG fix anyways, for suggestions, i think you should stick with the Stardust effect and just put a DARK side like this one 1 Tuner + 1 or more DARK non-tuner monsters You can Tribute this card to negate the activation of a Spell Card, Trap Card or an Effect Monster's effect that destroy a DARK monster(s) on the field, and destroy that card. If you negate an effect this way, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase. But i think you'll loose originality.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 [quote name='AngryBird' timestamp='1303376919' post='5156383'] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Once per turn, [b]you can send [/b]1 DARK [s]Type[/s] [b]m[/b]onster from your hand to the graveyard, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. When this card is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the graveyard, Special Summon it on [b]your side of the[/b] field during your next Standby Phase. ok i just corrected White Hallow's OCG fix anyways, for suggestions, i think you should stick with the Stardust effect and just put a DARK side like this one 1 Tuner + 1 or more DARK non-tuner monsters You can Tribute this card to negate the activation of a Spell Card, Trap Card or an Effect Monster's effect that destroy a DARK monster(s) on the field, and destroy that card. If you negate an effect this way, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase. But i think you'll loose originality.. [/quote] thankss and may I correct my name White H[b]o[/b]llow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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