Neko Girl Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 [img]http://img816.imageshack.us/img816/4885/156266.jpg[/img] [color="#FF00FF"]When this card attacks a face-up monster on your opponent's field and destroys it, inflict 400 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points. This card is not affected by the effects of Trap Cards. During your Standby Phase, you can decrease this card's ATK and DEF by 500 to draw 1 card from your Deck.[/color] [color="#FF00FF"]Do you like it? I hope it's good. :/ Thanks for your OCG help Deathly! [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 Add the effect underneath the card please! And the name could use some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 @Deatlhy Fiend of YMC: I agree with him, dudett. You gotta post the lore underneath the card, and the names needs to be more creative. Just check out my cards for example. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko Girl Posted April 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 Okay, the effect is up. And I'll try harder with the names. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 Ok, that's a good girl ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 [quote name='~.:Anime Fangirl:.~' timestamp='1303507384' post='5160159'] @Deatlhy Fiend of YMC: I agree with him, dudett. You gotta post the lore underneath the card, and the names needs to be more creative. Just check out my cards for example. ^^ [/quote] If it's not too small to read, lore isn't needed to comment on the card. It only makes it easier to fix OCG. I just say change the attribute or something, just because LIGHT doesn't seem to suit it much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko Girl Posted April 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 [quote name='~.:Anime Fangirl:.~' timestamp='1303507524' post='5160166'] Ok, that's a good girl ^-^ [/quote] lol thanks! (^.^)b And thanks Tsukasa, I agree. but I didn't know what attribute to use. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 Sorry, I am legally Blind! I need the LORE underneath it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 Earth? And Fiend, if you're blind, that means you cannot read this period, so your arguement is invalid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 Tsukasa: I am LEGALLY blind. I can see some items, but the YCM card's text is too small for me to read. The font size for the Forums is a little small, but I increase the size on Microsoft Word. OCG Fix: When this card attacks a face-up monster on your opponent's field and destroys it, inflict 400 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points. This card is not affected by the effects of Trap Cards. During your Standby Phase, you can decrease this card's ATK and DEF by 500 to draw 1 card from your Deck. Name: Elegant Warrior of Dance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko Girl Posted April 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 [quote name='Deathly Fiend Of YMC' timestamp='1303507965' post='5160188'] Tsukasa: I am LEGALLY blind. I can see some items, but the YCM card's text is too small for me to read. The font size for the Forums is a little small, but I increase the size on Microsoft Word. OCG Fix: When this card attacks a face-up monster on your opponent's field and destroys it, inflict 400 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points. This card is not affected by the effects of Trap Cards. During your Standby Phase, you can decrease this card's ATK and DEF by 500 to draw 1 card from your Deck. Name: Elegant Warrior of Dance. [/quote] Thanks for all the help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 No problem Allison! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 the another Clair on YCM. i like the card, in the way it its reduced and draw a card. its about A- for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko Girl Posted April 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 Another Clair? Thanks for the ratings! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 Clair is well-known, she is great at card making and such. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 [quote name='NerdyGirl ' timestamp='1303566449' post='5161576'] Another Clair? Thanks for the ratings! [/quote] Clair is an amazing popular girl on here. Going to probably shock a few people and say I find the draw effect op'd. 500 ATK is a small sacrifice, unless it's permanent decrease (not entirely sure, since Light and Dark End Dragon's both have permanently in their effects) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko Girl Posted April 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 Are you trying to say I'm a good card maker? Thanks! And ZERO, it was intended to be permanent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1SDAN Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 If this card was real, the English version would be majorly censored. But not in Japan, the have a wierd version of what's "appropriate." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 That is why we love Japan ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko Girl Posted April 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 lol, bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 OCG: When this card attacks a face-up monster on your opponent's field and destroys it, inflict 400 damage to your opponent. This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. During your Standby Phase, you can decrease this card's ATK and DEF by 500 (permanently) to draw 1 card from your Deck. Since the decrease in stats was permanent I added the "(permanently)" in the card's lore. It looks a bit UPed to me due to its stat losses, especially in its ATK (Light End Dragon would still have 2100 ATK after the first time its effect is used). I like the additional burn effect at the beginning and its immuity to Traps, which would force your opponent to rely on other means. It's a really great first card^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unbreakerable Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 good card. if i ran warriors i would use it. 9/10 (oh and yes i agree with the last three posts on this thread) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko Girl Posted April 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 It's tough to make your card balanced but not underpowered. :/ But thanks for the comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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