yoryo Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 [attachment=21885][attachment=21884][attachment=21883][attachment=21882] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 There are quite a few errors but your new so its ok ^_^ good effort ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 not bad, but they could be improved, so 6/10 :/ also this is my 2000th post :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 Yoryo, so basically the first card is God because it can't be destroyed except by a monster effect? WAY overpowered.Fire as well....Dark as well.....3 same effects in a row?I understand you're new but.... Yeah5/10I'm not being harsh I'm judging fairly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 Wow, using a concept I originally did for my fanfiction character...rofl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 Sushi, that is something you cannot put on him. You can't say that, he probably had no idea of your cards, I realize my welcome wasn't very cordial but if that was your intention, not very considerate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 Well, they have errors, but good for a first try ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 I wasn't even implying that, I was just saying it aloud. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima™ Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Awesome, grammar mistakes, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 some errors but good effort Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkhastwell Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 the monsters are over powering Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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