JerryFreelance Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 [align=center]Hello all, and welcome to my newest idea! I know it's kinda weird how I make new sets every day, but that's just how I am! This is the first idea that I've actually spent more than five minutes beforehand on, thinking things through. I actually have a solid theme for this set. You see, this set will contain 11 monsters, some spells, and some traps. Clearly I haven't thought out the number of spells and traps yet... Probably around 5 each though; thus creating a 21 card set ending on 20. How great! The theme of this set is somewhat like Parasite Paracide. These cards focus on turning your deck upside down [literally!] and then thrashing your opponent with some sick effects! But I shouldn't brag about these effects; it's up to you to decide how cool [or not] you think this set is! So without further ado, allow me to introduce you to my latest set: Arcane Shadow, featuring the Arcane Sycophs! The Arcane comes from Darkthorne; just a cool little name he thought of, and Sycoph comes from the word "sycophant", which is synonymous with "parasite", and since these cards are kind of like Parasite Paracide, what better way to name them? Here zey are :] ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Monsters Spells Traps [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Activated not played, possibly ^_^ Fantastic idea and card Bhim ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Incradibly original, but, I am almost too certain that there are grammar/ocg problems. Very good though.You pass your own grade, at least, without a review by me XD9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 haha thanks Dj: That's also what I was thinking, but then I was like, mehhhh... It's cool to have your deck face-up xP And Yankee: Really? Interesting... If anyone could point it out, I'd be grateful... You're prolly right though; I didn't care to proofread most of the effect so it's definitely possible And oh, this is not it... The one to be graded is coming up momentarily. Muhuhuhuhhahahahahhahahah xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Well, I see somthing. I don't know a card that so "So that it is like somthing"Yeah, maybe that can be changed? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 That's some card you got there. Really cool idea. I hope to see more bhim. Oh and the only thing that I saw "wrong" with it was the same thing that Dj said, activated instead of played. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Yankee: What do you mean? I'm not so sure I understand... arpeejajo: For sure you're sure? You guys are prolly right then... lol I'll fix it later I need a name for the trump card right now xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Ok, I mean that, your card says, "Turn their decks SO THAT THE TOP CARD OF THEIR DECKS ARE FACE UP"I don't know a card that says "So that..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Maybe if you remove that from it, it would sound better. "Turn their decks so the top card.........." Maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 I don't think that would work. I don't know a card that says "So that", or, "So the", and others, I don't know how it would be worded >_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chargerfan Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 ok card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Bah What could I say then? Crud Or I could start it xD Konami will steal OCG from me lol And they will soon use "So that" xD But if not... Any ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 That's a nice card ^_^9.3/10:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Thanks for the rates :] Just updated the trump card. This is the card I will be entering for the competition. Welker shoulda won MVP =/ says:Pwned.Matt Enloe (Darkthorne) says:Pwned.Welker shoulda won MVP =/ says:If people are unable to see the sickness of this card' date=' I shall cry.[/quote'] All I have to say is... Don't make me cry... Or my [second-time] arrogance shall be in vain... xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 And you called ME on arrogance. J/K I like the effects. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Ok, it's cool, very nice ^_^9/10 again, you pass, again >_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Weasel_46 Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 If this helps, there is an actual card called Convulsion of Nature that has a similar effect and reads: "As long as this card remains face-up on the field, both players must turn their respective Decks upside down and continue the current Duel."So maybe it could say something like, "As long as this card remains face-up on the field, both players must turn their respective Decks upside down. Whenever a player draws a face-down card... etc." Just a thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 The Weasel: Ahhh Convulsion of Nature, I knew that was the name! Thanks, but there's one problem. This set is gonna have a lot of turn-table cards, so the problem there would be that if you only have one face-up card in your deck, then you activate the field spell, and then Convulsion of Nature, it equals major ownage... Which remidns me... I forgot a part of the effect xD The "As long as this card remains on the field, neither player's Deck can be flipped"... Is that worded right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 I think it's worded right, but i'm not Dj, or Bloodrun XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Cool :] If it's worded right, that's fine with me ;) Any other comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 God Kiaba Thanks for the rating :] Anybody have any critiques? Or would someone like to give a more... Thorough review of one or both of the cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Bumppppp Thinking about making a new one ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 Hey I added a new one! This one just TOTALLY benefits Magical Explosion, if you can see how. First off, it clears your hand. Then, when you draw a face-up spell, it goes to the grave. Whazzat mean? MagEx fodder! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 Bump:::::? COME ON PLEASE xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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