Suyerdra Posted May 8, 2011 Report Share Posted May 8, 2011 [center][size="3"]Congeal Ocelot - Qeu'Lux [/size][img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/2109/408743.jpg[/img] [center][size="2"][spoiler=Effect][/size]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner WATER monsters When this card is Summoned, you must remove from play up to 2 cards from your Graveyard. This card can attack twice during your Battle Phase, for this turn only. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, this card gains 400 ATK and DEF.[/spoiler] [size="3"]Hailstone Phoenix - Fer'Hihd[/size] [/center] [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/2109/408743.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Effect]This cannot be targeted by a Trap Card. When this card is destroyed by a Trap Card, Special Summon 2 Level 3 or less Winged Beast Monsters from your Deck or Graveyard.[/spoiler] [size="3"]Permafrost Dragon[/size] [img]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/2109/408743.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Effect]During the turn that this card is Summoned, draw until you have 4 cards in your hand. Select 2 cards and remove 1 from play. The other card is added to your opponent's hand. The selected card cannot be played, or discarded. After 3 turns, your opponent is inflicted with Battle Damage and the selected card is sent to your Graveyard.[/spoiler] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted May 8, 2011 Report Share Posted May 8, 2011 Are you sure there isn't anythign else? Anyways, I hate to be harsh but here are your errors. 1) OCG - Its good but needs improvement. 2) Underneath the picture on the left side is where Circulation is. Write either 1st Edition or Limited Edition. 3) Finally your ID. You know where you have written random letters and numbers? The first bit is for the Booster Pack its from. This one you don't need to worry about. The other half should start with EN, because your cards are in English. Then three numbers from 000 - 999. That is the ID system of cards. Don't feel beat up! Your new here so these mistakes are bound to happen. Try fixing these! OCG is a case of studying how other cards, and by other I mean official, real Yu-gi-oh! cards. Then apply it to your cards. Then fill the other errors in and you'll be getting the top end of 10/10 ratings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suyerdra Posted May 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2011 New isn't the word I would use but lets just keep it that way... Thanks for all those fixes and what to put on the cards I'll get to those errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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