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FIXED

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LORE: You can discard 1 card from your Hand to have this card to attack your opponent directly. When it does so using this effect, its ATK is halved.
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[quote name='Anthony Lu'Steezy'' timestamp='1304851180' post='5195670']
To activate this cards effect, discard 1 card from your hand. This card can ATK your opponents like points directly, but its ATK becomes reduced by half. This effect lasts until the end of the turn. <---- i think that sounds a bit better :) haha
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No official card has 'but' in it. If you can find one i'll rep you

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[quote name='Kyng of Ice' timestamp='1304851005' post='5195667']
OCG FIX: You can discard 1 card from your Hand to have this card to attack your opponent directly. When it does so using this effect, its ATK is halved.

8/10 :)
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to have this card to attack... okay so maybe no card has "but" in it, but at least i was using proper grammar hahaha so therefore, yours also has OCG errors :) haha

hope that didnt sound mean D: i was only kidding around! :( haha

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I think that'd be a little better:

LORE: You can discard 1 card from your hand to have this card attack your opponent directly. If you use this effect, halve this card's original ATK after damage calculation.

otherwise, it's a good, simple, useful card. :]
not very original though, still, I give it an 8.5/10
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