Eeugy Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 [center][size="3"]This is my card, "[u][i][b]Everflail, Godess of the Heavens[/b][/i][/u]"[/size] [s]_________________________________________________________________________________[/s] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/7209/409916.jpg[/img] [u][b]::LORE::[/b][/u] [i][b]This card can only attack if you pay 1000 Life Points.[/b][/i] [/center] [b] Yeah, the card is very basic. Deal with it. So please, comments. (Thank you: Okazaki Tomoya, Zalpyr for the good ideas!)[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 Well, I think is kinda op'd... because it ATK is too high. You should up the cost to attack, remove the effect that the card can attack more than once per turn. You sohuld lower a bit the ATK or up the Level a bit... or put some effect that make this card do not inflict battle damage to opponent. But is a nice idea for a card ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 "More than once", huh? So I pay 1000 LP to let my 3000ATK monster attack as many times as I want, as long as it's 2 or more? Holy OP Batman! Lower the ATK and/or increase the level, increase the LP cost and/or remove the multi-attack ability, change it to a Fairy (this is optional, I think it would fit better as a Fairy than a Warrior), ????, profit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eeugy Posted May 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 Thanks for these suggestions guys. I will start fixing it right now. BTW, this is my first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 Second turn: Dark Hole Giant Trunade Summon this Pay 3000 Rape opponent Level 4 or lower monsters should not have that much attack unless they have summoning restrictions or major downsides to their effect. Paying Life Points is not a major downside. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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