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This is my first deck so please rate and comment..Also please tell me your favorite card and the one you hate.I will be posting another deck soon.EnjOY!
Also check out my second deck http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/251804-mythical-beasts-im-pretty-sure-you-wont-be-dissapointed/

MONSTERS:
[img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1387/279835.jpg[/img][img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/1387/279835.jpg[/img][img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/2088/279835c.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/5489/279835z.jpg[/img][img]http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/7739/279835s.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/5602/279835x.jpg[/img][img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/1387/279835.jpg[/img][img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/7199/279835e.jpg[/img][img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img807.imageshack.us/img807/1387/279835.jpg[/img][img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/1144/279835v.jpg[/img][img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img541.imageshack.us/img541/1387/279835.jpg[/img][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img863.imageshack.us/img863/4849/279835y.jpg[/img][img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/1387/279835.jpg[/img]

SPELLS:
[img]http://img805.imageshack.us/img805/1387/279835.jpg[/img][img]http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/4176/279835q.jpg[/img][img]http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/7199/279835e.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/1387/279835.jpg[/img][img]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/1387/279835.jpg[/img][img]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/3197/279835n.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/1387/279835.jpg[/img][img]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/1387/279835.jpg[/img][img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/6691/279835b.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
TRAPS:
[img]http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/3048/279835j.jpg[/img][img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/1387/279835.jpg[/img][img]http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/5602/279835x.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img815.imageshack.us/img815/6691/279835b.jpg[/img][img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/4849/279835y.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img857.imageshack.us/img857/1387/279835.jpg[/img][img]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/554/279835i.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/1387/279835.jpg[/img]
TTTHATS ALL FOLKS! :lol:

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These cards are Ok...
Main problem is the OCG (which is the most important). Mainly capitalization errors as well as the phraseing and punctuation of the cards' descriptions.
Most of the Jungle Beast cards have good pics.
Need to find better images, mostly ones that don't have a white/blank background.
If you have any OCG questions, just PM/email me for help, otherwise look at some real cards.
Also, these cards seem to just be there...they have no sense of compatability like Blackwings or Lightsworn.
Try to make these cards run along an idea (my opinions are preferably Swarm, Increse and Decrease ATK and DEF of both players' cards, etc.)
Overall, the only good thing was some of the pics.
[b][size="3"]Overall:1/10[/size][/b]
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[quote name='HauntedShadow' timestamp='1306753868' post='5241576']
Most of the pics are OK but some of them are just awful
-2 for the pics
-2 for using vanillas
-3 for big OCG mistakes
-1 for senseless names
2/10
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okok i get it these arent that good but ive taken the advice and made anther deck more awesome and no vanillas:)
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... i actually enjoyed looking/reading at some of your cards... ... i mean... some of the card effects you created have NOT been created yet and it sounds plausible... like it can work... ... these cards probably and most likely wouldn't make a good deck... but it doesn't mean its nothing... ... you're heading the right direction...
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[quote name='lvl1hero' timestamp='1307020130' post='5248652']
... i actually enjoyed looking/reading at some of your cards... ... i mean... some of the card effects you created have NOT been created yet and it sounds plausible... like it can work... ... these cards probably and most likely wouldn't make a good deck... but it doesn't mean its nothing... ... you're heading the right direction...
[/quote]
thanks but im making a set thats better then this one ill be posting it soon :)

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hmmm...okay, but.
How I see these.
Vanillas: Okay, its fine to use a few vanillas.
Effects: Good effects but the cards dont really follow a theme. For example, make cards that have specific animals in their name and have a card that says 'All monster with (X animal name) gain 500 ATK. Something like that.
Pics: Mostly. I like most of the 'Jungle Beast' pics.
OCG: baaaaaad.
General Grammer: baaaaaad.
Favorite Card: Jungle Beast Tiger Blade Master. (again, you could have a card that says 'All cards with 'Tiger' in their name gain 200 ATK and DEF.)
Least Favorite: Bear Commander. (Shouldnt be a vanilla.)
Overall Rating: 4.5/10
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