Anthony Lu'Steezy' Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 okay so this is my first archetype, well the start of it! i made the backgrounds and whatnot for all the pics, also made the card layout (yes i know, i do that alot) haha hope you guys like it tell me whatcha think! [spoiler=monster] [IMG]http://i510.photobucket.com/albums/s344/Anthonyzilla24/StarSlayerOja.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler] [spoiler=monster] [IMG]http://i510.photobucket.com/albums/s344/Anthonyzilla24/StarSlayerKraya.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler] [spoiler=monster] [IMG]http://i510.photobucket.com/albums/s344/Anthonyzilla24/StarSlayerGrin-1.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=spell] [IMG]http://i510.photobucket.com/albums/s344/Anthonyzilla24/StarSlayerUnity.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Kyng's Old Account Posted May 12, 2011 Report Share Posted May 12, 2011 You rate mine, I'll rate yours. Deal? [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/249088-new-contenders/"]Link[/url] Also Commishes are accepted, no matter what so long as you follow the app. Insert Lores so I can OCG fix I am impartial to card templates I like the pics similarities. Over all there good, but Star Slayer Unity can make 5 Slayers boost by 1500 ATK, which is a bit steep. Also I know that with Kraya you were making a re-make of Destiny Hero Defender but with high ATK, but you must give it a drawback because of its high ATK. 7/10 so far. I hope the more you make the better they become. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony Lu'Steezy' Posted May 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 well chainsaw beetle( or insect, not sure on the name) has 2400 ATK and 4 stars, and its only draw back is when it actually destroys a monster yer foe gets to draw, this one is every turn, no matter what! so i kinda feel that's enough of a set back.... and that card really is no worse then " the A. Team" which gives all warriors 200 points for each warrior or spellcaster on your field. so it gives more but only cuz its more narrow. i dont really need OCG fixes anymore, i designed an OCG fixer in flash haha the only mistakes i can have now is spelling mistakes.... besides, ive gone over them each like 50 times and even compared them to similar cards. no lore needed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 I don't quite see why you had Kraya give your opponent the extra draw power It's not costing your opponent anything....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony Lu'Steezy' Posted May 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 she has 2200 hundered attack with no sacrifice, you have to have a drawback or it woud be OPd. im going to make a card that gives you life points everytime your opponent draws a card.... so it will actually turn into a positive for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 yeah I was thinking just that the burn effects work out MUCH better compared to LP boosting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony Lu'Steezy' Posted May 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 well what would you suggest other then LP gain? maybe a card that forces your opponent to discard cards that he/she draws in addition to there 1 card draw per Draw Phase? maybe.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 that'd be great, but don't to it TOO often, that'd end up being OPed if you mill your opponent too much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 I think Grin tips the scales towards OP'd thanks to the other star slayers, he would come out for free and get his effect. It's a more broken Faultroll imo but I don't have a problem with the other two monsters or spell card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony Lu'Steezy' Posted May 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 yeah theres plenty of cards that can be OPd when combined with other cards. like all the monsters with "spirit" in there name. they get special summoned just for removing a monster of a certain attribute from your grave out of play. the thing is that you would have to first get the other cards, and then him. so in real life if you didnt have OJA, his effect would have to be used with life reload or magical mallet. and he only has 2300 which isnt that much haha but, thanks for the opinion scratch that 2400 hundred, my bad haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 [quote name='Anthony Lu'Steezy'' timestamp='1305264930' post='5205099'] well chainsaw beetle( or insect, not sure on the name) has 2400 ATK and 4 stars, and its only draw back is when it actually destroys a monster yer foe gets to draw, this one is every turn, no matter what! so i kinda feel that's enough of a set back.... and that card really is no worse then " the A. Team" which gives all warriors 200 points for each warrior or spellcaster on your field. so it gives more but only cuz its more narrow. i dont really need OCG fixes anymore, i designed an OCG fixer in flash haha the only mistakes i can have now is spelling mistakes.... besides, ive gone over them each like 50 times and even compared them to similar cards. no lore needed [/quote] Oh. I see. I completely forgot Chainsaw Insect/Beetle/Whatever! In that case I bestow you with a proud: [size="7"]8.5/10![/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony Lu'Steezy' Posted May 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 yay! haha thanks bud im gonna try to make some more to my set soon, maybe then they will seem more balanced! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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