Silent Member Posted May 31, 2007 Report Share Posted May 31, 2007 These are the characters. Not as good as if found on internet.Oplo OlpoJhon LouSalta GarksDev Ingel Loper (a.k.a. Dev I.L.(bad guy)) Mr.RenEpisode 1:Oplo's Big DayThump!"Hey, caref-" Salta said, while hurrying to the ceremony. It was a big day. "You watch it," Oplo spat back. "S-S-Sorry, will never happen again." "You better make sure of that." As Oplo walked on, Salta backed away. "Do you want to come with me?" groaned Oplo. He really didn't like the idea. "Sure." *** "Welcome new students. Today you will face the older students in battles. Good luck to all of you," said Dev Loper. He thought Hehehe. Those fools. They have no idea what's in store for them. To Be Continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted May 31, 2007 Report Share Posted May 31, 2007 I rather try to google it than use those pics. Plus, that thing of a chapter barely made sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohfreak41 Posted May 31, 2007 Report Share Posted May 31, 2007 ............... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted May 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2007 I'm tyrying to show the characters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted May 31, 2007 Report Share Posted May 31, 2007 Try finding a clip art style program to make them on, like heromachine or manga clip art (what I use) Or look for similar pics on the net, that's what I do when I'm stuck for characters... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted May 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2007 how do you use manga Episode 1:Oplo's Big Day Part 2Oplo thought about the dueling. "Why me, why me?" he grumbled. At that moment Salta came over. "Do you want to duel?" she asked. "Sure, get your game on." "Let's duel!" they cried in unison. "I'll go first. I summon Black Fire Lord. Now I end my turn." Oplo declared. To Be Continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted May 31, 2007 Report Share Posted May 31, 2007 how do you use manga :shock: You do realise you just asked me how to use a comic book right? Manga Clip Art, it's a CD I have, it's very useful for making base desings for characters, I've found it extremely useful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted June 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2007 You do realise you just asked me how to use a comic book right?no Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted June 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2007 I'll post it all. Episode 1:Oplo's Big Day Thump!"Hey, caref-" Salta said, while hurrying to the ceremony. It was a big day. "You watch it," Oplo spat back. "S-S-Sorry, will never happen again." "You better make sure of that." As Oplo walked on, Salta backed away. "Do you want to come with me?" groaned Oplo. He really didn't like the idea. "Sure." *** "Welcome new students. Today you will face the older students in battles. Good luck to all of you," said Dev Loper. He thought Hehehe. Those fools. They have no idea what's in store for them. Oplo thought about the dueling. "Why me, why me?" he grumbled. At that moment Salta came over. "Do you want to duel?" she asked. "Sure, get your game on." "Let's duel!" they cried in unison. "I'll go first. I summon Black Fire Lord. Now I end my turn." Oplo declared. "Okay, I summon Lover Jouster. Attack his Black Fire Lord!" "Not so fast. Black Fire Lord cannot be destroyed by a level four or lower monster." "Errrrrrhhh, I end my turn." "Good. I play Black Fire. Now Black Fire Lord gains 500 ATK points. Attack Lover Jouster! Oh yeah, did I mention that if he attacks a LIGHT type monster, the difference between its DEF points and my monster's ATK points come out of your Life Points." "Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" "I play one card face-down and end my turn." To Be Continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted June 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2007 if anyone else acn think of the next parts, pm me cause i have no ideas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted June 4, 2007 Report Share Posted June 4, 2007 It might help to add stats the current points standing and when they lose points. Also, try to make a villian and make up a long story and reason for him. I am writing all my episodes before I write them here. (I am finishing writing my 3 season of Daily Dueling tomorrow) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted June 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 ok but i already have a villanDev Ingel Loperwhy do you think his aka name is dev i.l.what do you mean by points and statsexplain how i would write it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkguy00000 Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 Extract from the Tournaments of Prestige: Willaim laughed horribly as Reign-Beaux appeared in front of him. (Reign-Beaux: 2500 ATK) "You'd best reconsider," replied Robert, as Trignominciar's attack and defense points swelled to 3200/2800. Egyap clutched her heart as Cosmic Warrior - Fire was disintegrated, and her life points fell to a measly 100. Now all my Cosmic Warriors return to me, at the cost of half my life points!" (Egyap: 50) That, I think, is what Professor Cobra is referring to... Also explain any card effects inside the dialogue, it makes the whole thing run smoother: "Then," smirked Egyap, "Cosmic Warrior - Earth, means your set spell-trap is destroyed!" "And since, due to your field spell, my Fallen Angel - Enataar LV 5 has been on the field for, technically, 3 end phases, I can trade her in... for the ultimate! The almighty! The Fallen Angel - Enataar LV 7!" Etcetra. Its' also a good idea to make the chapters longer, though not too long, or people will take too long to read them and then get distracted. I'd say a nice length is between 2/5 pages (in 12 size Times New Roman) in Word. Go longer than that, and you could probably break them into smaller chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkguy00000 Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 Sorry, but as for plot lines, that should really be determined by the settings. TotalObelisks' is set in your average(ish) neighbourhood, terrorized by shadow duelists searching for souls. That in itself opens up infinite possibilities: he could let the characters get trapped in the Shadow Realm, etc. (I'm not going to keep going, otherwise I might acidentally uncover all of TO's own plotlines through sheer, as it were, unluck.) Mine, on the other hand is set in the middle of a pro circuit of duelists. Again, that opens up possibilities. Its' all about the settings. Establish the settings: and then the dominoes will fall into the place like a pack of cards. Checkmate. (IE: Set the surroundings, and the rest should come naturally.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted June 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 the setting is supposed to be Mod Ern's Duel Academy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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