Ohisi Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 [b][center]Here are the two cards I was talking about! EDIT: I re-made OCG thanks to Kyng, and also reconsidered and made it a Ritual Card. [spoiler=Two Cards][spoiler=Dewerst, High Priest of the Underworld][img]http://img848.imageshack.us/img848/2061/410389.jpg[/img] ::Lore:: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Dewerst's Chapel". You must also Tribute monsters whose Level Stars equal 6. While this card remains face-up on the field, all Zombie-Type monsters you control gain 100 ATK. If any cards that are affected by this card's effect are destroyed or removed from play, return this card to your Deck and shuffle your Deck.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Dewerst's Chapel][img]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/2061/410389.jpg[/img] ::Lore:: This card is used to Ritual Summon "Dewerst, High Priest of the Underworld." Youm ust also Tribute monsters whose Level Stars equal 6. This card can also be treated as a Equip Spell card. This card can only be Equipped to "Dewerst, High Priest of the Underworld". The equipped card then gains 300 ATK and DEF. [/spoiler][/spoiler] [/center][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 OCG Fix! You wrote: [spoiler='Dewerst, High Priest of the Underworld'] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the Spell-Card "Dewerst's Chapel". While this card remains Face-Up on the field, all Zombie-Type monsters you control gain an ATK increase of 100. If any cards that are affected by this card's effect are destroyed or removed from play, return this card to your Deck and shuffle your Deck. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Dewerst's Chapel'] When this card is activated, look through your deck and Special Summon "Dewerst, High Priest of the Underworld". If successful, "Dewerst, High Priest of the Underworld" gain an ATK and DEF increase of 300. If not successful, remove from play both this card and "Dewerst, High Priest of the Underworld" are removed from play. [/spoiler] You should write: [spoiler='Dewerst, High Priest of the Underworld'] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of the Spell Card "Dewerst's Chapel". While this card remains face-up on the field, all Zombie-Type monsters you control gain 100 ATK. If any cards that are affected by this card's effect are destroyed or removed from play, return this card to your Deck and shuffle your Deck. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Dewerst's Chapel'] When this card is activated, you can search your Deck and Special Summon "Dewerst, High Priest of the Underworld". If successful, "Dewerst, High Priest of the Underworld" gains 300 ATK and DEF. Otherwise, remove from play both this card and "Dewerst, High Priest of the Underworld". [/spoiler] This is an excellent attempt for a new member. The only problem I see is the OCG and the confusion from Dewerst's Chapel. If your not succesful, where do you remove Dewerst from? Make sure you add this information. 9/10! I am impressed! Maybe consider making this a Ritual? You get a rep for this excellent card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ohisi Posted May 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 Why thanks! I was first considering making this a Ritual, but I got confused. So, I just made it a regular card with a "support" . I'll make sure I get back right away and fix the errors too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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